Honkai: Star Rail: A Character From the Warp Banner, and I Became a Support Tank?

Your reminders and ratings are our biggest motivation. The main plot will not be exactly the same, and the emotional foreshadowing with the train set at the beginning is also necessary, so I apologize for the slow pace. This is the first time for a newbie to write about card pools. I will try my best to write as well as I can from the player side, accept all suggestions, and feel free to criticize if there are any bad points. ——Thank you for your support.

Can. Thanks. Open and raise. (Don't be too frustrated.) (Otherwise it will be uncomfortable to read.) (Many people in Tomato don't like this kind of article.)

Haokan [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] I like the character of the protagonist [sending my heart][sending my heart] But can it feel any more... Firm (faithful?)? When faced with a life-and-death crisis, you feel like you don't have to worry too much...? (I'm at a loss for words... Hehe) But I don't want to interfere with the author's thoughts [blowing kiss]. After all, I have never seen a protagonist image that really meets my expectations (too spicy [shy]), so don't worry about [send heart] (come on [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]) Haokan [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] All in all, it's so fat and shameless [sending my heart]

I like fireflies and see lilies I don't play fgoq, and I don't know about Mash Kyrielite. I read this book because I like Liuying. So far, I really like Mashu. The sweet and well-behaved Mashu is so cute, but Liu Ying is still my favorite🩷. The author created part of the plot based on the main storyline of Beng Tie, which is quite good. I love watching the interaction between Matthew and Liu Ying. The young couple secretly falling in love is really interesting. The author writes very delicately. Some people didn't want to watch the live broadcast, but the author followed the advice and later put a separate chapter on the live broadcast. Those who don't want to watch it can skip it. The above content is only my personal opinion.

I just read the previous point. There are too many descriptions in the details. I feel that it could be less. Pushing the main line more should make it look better. Overall, the shortcomings are not hidden, it is still very good. Come on, author!

Little Eggplant, we like you. The description of the school girl is very good. Overall, it is one of the best FGO-related articles I have read on Tomato.

The characters are well written, and the little eggplant really pokes fun at me. It even makes me not want to watch the real world. Comments interspersed in the story to tell the truth a little affect the perception. I must write whether it can be concentrated in one place. It is very well written. Come on.

Some descriptions are too much, such as appearance, skin, stickers, etc. There is also the live barrage. I feel that these should be the result of emotion. When you reach a certain point of expressing your feelings, you should put some so that it will not feel abrupt. Otherwise, it will easily interrupt the reading flow, affect the coherence of the story, and make the reader feel impetuous. There are also some light novel treatment comments that are placed separately at the end of a certain chapter so as not to interrupt the continuity of the chapter's story. However, it seems that the live barrage is not easy to handle in this way, so the frequency can only be reduced. But the story setting is quite interesting, although I haven't watched Fate. Let's see what happens next. The overly frequent barrages and detailed descriptions later on are much less frequent, and the rhythm control is much better than at the beginning. But there is another point that I feel inexplicably that some places are a bit OOC (for the sake of posting?). Especially the portrayal of March 7 feels a bit too much. March is only occasionally dull, but it is not heartless. Walking on the empty space station, she was the one who seemed most scared. Moreover, March is less likely to post messages with the heroine just for pranks. March probably expresses intimacy more unconsciously. And Yue Yue is not likely to let the heroine protect her while she refuses to practice. After all, Xianzhou has been practicing the sword for a long time and finally mastered it. What's more, when it comes to whether it will hold back the train crew, Mitsuki should be the kind of person who is determined to work hard to protect his companions. That is to say, even though I don't want to practice anymore, I will still encourage myself to work hard in the end.

Let me just say something objectively. 1. The author is very persuasive 2. The linked moon is very interesting 3. The character is well depicted 4. Fast update 5. The author is very cute 6. Kawaii! ! !

Tomato actually has such a book? It's rare to write well. The writing is so good, the sense of delicacy makes people want to put it down, and the plot design is also very good. Although it is a fanfic, it is well integrated. This way of writing feels like it came from Nikgaru. It would be corrected if it was in the first person, hahaha. To be honest, when I opened it, I thought it was a no-brainer, but I didn't expect a surprise. The best book I've discovered recently. I hope it can be updated all the time, this is really not easy.