
Honkai: Star Rail: Elio's Script Is Always Being Torn Up
崩铁:艾利欧的剧本一直撕
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 213k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- Oh No! I've Become the Guardian of the Astral Express Trio!坏了!我成列车三小只大家长了!Former title · until Oct 2026
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Bro came to comment [I understand] Overall Rating: Star Dome Railroad Difficulty Weekly Award (Wonderful for the whole family) The paragraphing and writing style of the first 20 chapters are a bit stiff. But don't worry, from chapter 20 onwards is the beginning of the hard mode, and the battles are very exciting 😠 The level of humor is moderate, enough to make people smile, and it is very suitable [please taste carefully] The logic is very reasonable, and as a fanfic, it can be considered a masterpiece (compared to other recent books, it is not even a little bit better) One last thing, please bring your brain, please bring your brain! The author does not have a brain storage place, so be careful of being bitten by the corpse brothers! [Punch hard]
Plot: We found a certain amount of plot among a bunch of memes (Self-created, reasonable and non-toxic) CP: None yet, but... Vote for Xiao Sanyue~Thank you~ (Little March, run away, I have a dual personality😫, it doesn't matter if I lie to you, I am just as arrogant as a fool😋) Current strength: some brothers, some (Not invincible but enough) Suitable people: Those who are tired of review of "Step by Step Developing Flow" and "Invincible Dianlao Debris Flow" (Personally, I think the world view of Star Iron is too grand to suppress the combat power, which makes it difficult to read. If you read too much of Invincible, you will get tired of it) Writing suggestion: I want to read the teaching and training course 😋 (Don't believe it, it's better to live longer) Level of abstraction: Moderate (Not as abstract as me😜) I want to say to the author: Very good, keep it up🀄 (Do you like my brother's big book review? Do you like it? 🥵) Recommendation Index: Ruthless Iron Hand😡! Come ↗ come ↘~~~🤗 (Hao Chi😋 will give you a five-star luxury bottle☝️🤓)
Regarding this book, except for the Bengtie mobile game, everything else is almost perfect. The Bengtie mobile game, especially the future part, is done in advance. Is this really pioneering? If the future is known, what's the point of the present? It is easy to enter nothingness and the end My personal idea has always been to wait until the train has completed its development before releasing a version update.
The plot is definitely not based on the original version, almost completely changed, but it is absolutely reasonable. Please feel free to eat it. If there are any mistakes, please correct them in the comment area 😎
So far, it looks good
I hope I can give Fei Xiao more of a role. It's best to help him become stronger. At least Star God is the strongest.
The plot is reasonable and has its own ideas. It is considered a good part among the fans. I highly recommend watching it. [Please update]
Beautiful, love watching. It's better than what many fans write, and it has its own ideas. Now I see 40 pictures, I hope I don't want to slide down the word count
Some plots are a bit far-fetched, but overall it's okay 👍
Not bad, keep up the good work