I Summoned a Demon, So Why Did the School Belle Appear?

After reading more than fifty chapters, the problem with this book is that the main plot revolves around the emotional conflicts and disputes between the male and female protagonists. For this reason, the author made two settings for the protagonist - the reincarnation of a ten thousand-year-old immortal strongman and a childlike and detached character. The reincarnation of the immortal provides an explanation for the entanglement of the male and female protagonists, and also gives the protagonist some abilities that are different from ordinary people; the protagonist's childlike and out-of-the-box personality keeps the emotions of the male and female protagonists in conflict, allowing the plot to continue to advance. But the problem is this: he was a ten-thousand-year-old immortal in his previous life but had no immortal abilities. He had no immortal heart and could not tell that he was an old immortal who had lived for ten thousand years. He was more like a childlike college student. The protagonist has always been wary of the heroine due to personality issues, but to be honest, from a third-party perspective as a reader, the heroine is purely giving benefits to the male protagonist [face covering]. She can understand but really cannot resonate with the male protagonist's resisting emotions. After thinking about it, the author might change it: it is to directly obtain the inheritance of the immortal's ability instead of the reincarnation of the immortal. At the same time, the writing and ink in the article focus on highlighting the protagonist's out-of-the-box character, so that the feeling of reading the article and the setting are not so conflicting. But after thinking about it carefully, this change seems to have more bugs. The author should continue to write according to his own ideas, which is also good. Anyway, I'm building myself up psychologically. The protagonist is a college student who has inherited the Immortal inheritance. It's quite interesting to focus on the emotional conflicts between the male and female protagonists [Adoration] Five-star praise, the author, cheers [Chigua]

It depends on how the female protagonist ends up. As for the male protagonist, the portrayal is a bit flawed. But after all, no one is perfect. Overall, it's relatively smooth. The main storyline in the plots released now is mainly about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. A common proposition of creating conflicts and then resolving them. The article describes in detail what love is. It is also a direction worth thinking about. When they confess, the hero and heroine will naturally get better. It also corresponds to the author's desire for this phenomenon in real life. I guess if the author wasn't just looking for money, he would probably be dumped.

This book is not bad. I read some of the "criticisms", and they are all about the male protagonist's erratic nature. This is indeed the case. The male protagonist became an immortal in his last life, but the result is still so eccentric, and does not look like an immortal at all. In this aspect, he looks like a young child, not like an immortal. One star is deducted here. There is nothing else to deduct except here. Overall, this book is still very good and worth reading.

I originally wanted to give a 2 or 3 star control rating, (I was a bit afraid of being banned). However, the five stars in the early stage are still very important (to help the author attract readers), it is a very nice article ^ω^, good luck to the author! (The introduction is weak, please move to the text to read)

In fact, we can give the protagonist more things from his past life, such as old friends who met him in the past life and accidentally met him across the plane, or some items from the past life returned. To be honest, all the Riddlers can use the knife. If you don't want to say it, you don't need it. The protagonist is too weak now and doesn't know anything. It's very frustrating to watch. I hope the author can give him the confidence to rely only on his own abilities [face covering] [heartfelt]

When the emperor's uncle saw [admiration] I hope the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine can be eased.

So far, the writing is okay, but I hope that the male protagonist and the succubus female protagonist can be reconciled soon.

Your writing style is very good. For a new writer, there is not too much vocabulary, and the characters are well drawn. It is very good. The most distinctive thing about you is that the dialogue between the characters is relatively lively. This is something that many authors cannot do. Come on.

Very good. The first chapter is being reviewed. It's interesting.

The content is very interesting and attracts readers' interest, but there is so much foreshadowing in the front. In the end, I felt that the book ended a little too fast? But there is nothing we can do about it. Maybe the author will not write the rest. I hope the next book will be longer.