[Western Fantasy] + [Harem] + [Lighthearted] + [Lovesick Women] + [Mild Yandere] + [Gentleman’s Fiction]
I died in a battlefield in the Immortal Realm and transmigrated to a Western fantasy world…
Good news: I didn’t quite die…
Bad news: I’m about to be drained dry…
Ye Qiong awakened the memories of his previous life when he turned eighteen. It should have been a moment worth celebrating, but his consciousness returned when it shouldn’t have.
Lying on a single bed, Ye Qiong had no time to think about the memories of this life before he sensed something was wrong with his body. He had lost control of it. Extending his spiritual perception, he discovered someone doing something strange to him.
Ye Qiong’s mind went blank. Who was this?
He quickly reviewed his memories from the past eighteen years. It was the genius beauty from his class, someone he had never associated with or even spoken to. So why had she come to his room in the middle of the night?
Ye Qiong didn’t understand, but since he couldn’t resist, he might as well enjoy it…
Having read over fifty chapters, the problem with this book lies in the following: The main plot revolves around the emotional conflicts and entanglements of the male and female protagonists. To this end, the author established two key aspects for the protagonist—the reincarnation of a powerful immortal of ten thousand years and a childlike, carefree personality.
It remains to be seen how the female lead will handle things. As for the male lead, his characterization is somewhat flawed. But after all, no one is perfect. Overall, the story flows smoothly. The main plot so far revolves around the romance between the male and female leads, exploring the common theme of creating conflict and then resolving it.
This book is quite good. I read the criticisms, and they all focused on the male protagonist's impulsive and unconventional nature, which is indeed true. Even though he became an immortal in his previous life, he's still as impulsive as ever, showing no signs of being an immortal. In this respect, he's like a young child, not an immortal. I'll deduct one star for this; there's nothing else I can deduct. Overall, this book is very good and worth reading.
I was initially thinking of giving it a 2 or 3 star rating to control the score (I was a little afraid of getting banned). However, a 5-star rating in the early stages is still very important (to help the author attract readers). It's a very good story ^ω^, keep it up, author! (The synopsis is inadequate, please read the main text.)
Actually, the author could have given the protagonist more information about his past life. For example, an old friend from his past life could accidentally travel through different dimensions and see him, or some items from his past life could return. As for the sword, frankly, everyone's a mystery; if you don't want to talk about it, you can leave it out.
When the Imperial Uncle saw it 🥰 Hopefully, the relationship between the main character and the female lead can be improved.
So far, the writing is decent, but I hope the male lead and the succubus female lead can reconcile soon.
Your writing is excellent. For a new writer, there's not an excessive use of flowery language, and the characters are portrayed very well. It's truly outstanding. Your most distinctive feature is the vividness of your dialogue, something many authors fail to achieve. Keep it up!
That's great, the first chapter is already under review, that's interesting.
The content is very engaging and captivating, but with so much foreshadowing in the beginning, the ending felt a bit too abrupt. However, this is understandable; perhaps the author won't write the rest. Hopefully, the next book will be longer.