The Women I Saved Before I Died Are Desperately Looking for Me

It looks good. Please support it. Also, the updates are too slow. The author needs to work hard. Why does it feel like the writing is getting more and more complicated? The second heroine is different from what was introduced in the introduction. She even cheated on herself and made a clone to be a master and a disciple. Does she still have a mission? Did the author forget that the main character was trapped, and occasionally mentioned that he would change the world of immortality later? Let's see how round the author's back is.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Noah hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! Unexpectedly, this book has yet to be completed. Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian. Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma became angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Emperor Yan!!!

It is purely hand-made without AI, the plot is online, and the emotional line is quite round. Unlike some other games, the regret flow, or the training flow jumps very quickly. Six years, an old bookworm plus three years of praise from the author. I am also the author of 20,000 Tomato fans. It is worth a read. I also want to say a word to the author. Your writing is really good. So, it is a more traditional type, but today's tomatoes are too voluptuous. Even for old authors, it is easy to get lost. But looking at you, at least you have a debut. Keep writing. You can read the book. In addition, you have to think about the title of your book. Your title is not very attractive. It can be regarded as encouragement from an old senior to newcomers.

First of all, the harem unified five-star praise I couldn't stand it after reading just two chapters. In the part about the engagement, you mean I'm going to fight Superman 😄 Then you can press me to death now 😄 I haven't even watched Goldfinger yet, and you're asking me to agree to fight Superman 😄 I died in the woods [covering face] It depends on the situation. After all, they did bring it back to me. It is a life-saving grace. I am grateful. The main reason is that the previous treatment was too unethical. You are buried by them anyway. It's unethical for you to wear other people's clothes and push them off a cliff. [Hold face][Hold face] If you don't agree, you push the body of someone's son down the mountain, and they still have the grace to save your life 🤦 If you were buried by someone else's son, at least you could say something and repay your life-saving grace 🤦 I'll take a look again

It can be seen that it is a hand-written novel. Someone said before that the problem with giving away girls is that the heroine of the second world integrates part of her soul into her master, and then her master is with another man later. Xiaodu can read it if she can accept it.

I have finished reading 76 chapters so far. Overall, I can read it. There is nothing bad about it, but the realistic descriptions sometimes have a bit too much nonsense (the writing is normal). This book is more traditional about time travel and rescue. The routines are average. Just read it.

My friend, I stayed up all night to watch it. Does the time authority belong to the protagonist? The second simulation was really bad. Do you still remember the purpose of starting the second simulation? Water purely for water's sake

People always ask me what the ingredients are. Here is a unified answer: it is mainly composed of four ingredients: water, protein, fat, and inorganic matter. Water accounts for about 55%, protein accounts for about 20%, fat accounts for about 20%, and inorganic matter accounts for about 5%. Water in the human body is distributed in intracellular fluid and extracellular fluid, and plays a role in maintaining normal cell functions. This water accounts for 50%-60% of the body weight and is the largest component of the human body. It can transport oxygen and nutrients and discharge waste. Every cell and important component in the human body has the participation of protein. Protein provides an important role for the human body and is the main component of human cells. Fat can provide heat and insulation for the human body, while inorganic substances are mainly calcium, phosphorus, magnesium and other elements, which are the main components of bones and teeth.

Seeing that the rating is too low, I'll give it four stars to support it. Then let's talk about a few books. About ai: Normally, the proportion of ai is not that exaggerated, and overall it is acceptable. Plot-related: The non-memory plot is better than the memory plot. The memory part should serve the main line, but the proportion is too long. In reality, there is obviously more content worthy of writing and promoting the relationship between the characters. Rhythm arrangement: The flashback part is too long, and the change in the protagonist's strength after the flashback is very confusing in terms of plot arrangement. There are too few plots related to the change in the protagonist's strength and promotion. The last volume was still an intermediate knight, and the next volume is about a demigod descending a dragon. It would be better if there was a process to show the change in the protagonist's strength [competitions arranged by the school, tests, etc.]. Regarding the follow-up: After reading the latest update, it should be almost finished. The end of the memories should be the dumpling-making process. The framework part is a bit simplified. In terms of rhythm arrangement, some memories such as interludes can be added. The main plot + memories are still too routine. This kind of story will test whether the story can move people's hearts. There is a lot of room for optimization. The most important point is that without opening the map, the world gives the reader the impression that it is not big enough, with only a few repeated scenes. Summary: I have mentioned so many problems with the book, but it is still worth reading. The lack of big surprises is a big advantage. The plot of Lilith is a bit of a matter of opinion. I personally like the character and related plot. It would be good if it can land smoothly in the end. If the author has plans for the next book after this book is finished, I wish you the best as you write.

The writing is very good, the writing style is a bit flawed, but overall it is useful. Water water water water water