My Parents Have Fans All Across the Magical World

It's obvious that the author has some ideas, so I'll say a few more words (please don't comment if you don't like my personal opinion) The subject matter is good. I skipped through about ten chapters. It has an original plot. If you want to read some HP or interesting stories, you can put it away. The writing is good, the writing style is good, the details are well described, the paragraphs are generally long, some descriptions are a bit stiff, and the language still needs to be optimized (I don't know how to evaluate Professor Siebel's language, it feels weird). I feel that many people will think that it is a second grader. The description of the group portraits is a bit weak. It is recommended to add more sub-highlight characters. In addition, it is recommended that the author think more about the plot development design, work out the emotional value of the plot, and polish the behavioral logic of the characters (whether passers-by or whoever they are). I recommend friends with patience to try a different flavor. 4 Stars is an encouragement.