Type-Moon: The Radiant Chrysaores

The article overall looks pretty good. Whether it's the introduction or the "Taste of the Bible" in the first chapter. There is a "refreshing" feeling. It can be considered a unique approach. I hope the author can retain more "sentences" like Chapter 1. The image of the protagonist of the story seems to be gradually becoming fuller at present. The details of the dialogue scenes are also quite interesting. But there is also a slight flaw. For example, descriptions of "others" are quite rare. The protagonist's own identity has religious connotations. There is not much description about getting along with the Knight King in the second chapter. It is recommended to add some "revolving door" in the subsequent stories and polish it with memories, otherwise the "pledge of allegiance" will seem a bit abrupt. This is mainly because the protagonist's identity was not well designed in the early stage [grievance]. It must be made clear whether he is a time traveler or an "ordinary person". The formatting of the article itself is messy. And sometimes there are repeated sentences, such as chapter 30, which greatly reduces the reading experience! But the work itself also has many shining points. Considering that there are currently very few chapters, it can be expected in the future. I still hope that this book will have great advantages and few shortcomings in the future. [Please update]

It's beautiful. The dialogues and descriptions about God are very much like the original biblical text.

Not bad The part about God is quite interesting, but some symbols are wrong. In the early stage, it felt like there were some traces of AI polishing. The plot about Britain is a bit popular, but if you don't want to make major changes, this is the only way to go. I don't quite agree with the protagonist's path, but it doesn't seem to say that he is a modern person, so I leave it aside. All in all it's pretty good

It's really written in the Bible, man [laughing evilly] Fire burned the city, Sodom was destroyed, returned to heaven three times, refused three times The crown of righteousness will be reserved for you

This book is also a must-have for Xingyue. Even though the update speed is too slow, it still feels very comfortable to read. The description of the protagonist is very profound. Come on, the author must continue to read more!

The first volume is really great, but the second volume is a bit different from the first volume. In terms of writing, it can be seen that the author is probably an extraterrestrial evil spirit or the reincarnation of Laoden, so you can eat it with confidence. Generally speaking, it is a little bit toxic but has great potential.

The author's writing style is either a reincarnated old monster or an alien demon

The new author generates electricity for love, please spray lightly

It has a modern epic feel, and the author's writing style perfectly suits my feelings about Xingyue. This is a very good novel and I hope the author will continue writing it.

The writing is very good, especially the first picture at the beginning. Those pictures really have a heavy sense of history like the Old Testament, and the order of words and the tone are very consistent with the Bible. I feel like it's perfect! A+