FGO: Fujimaru Ritsuka Doesn't Know

Conclusion: good looking. Advantages (or characteristics): In the case of multi-perspective narration, the character's behavior and psychological activities still do not deviate from the original setting, and are even maintained very well. The storyline is not too jerky. In these points, it has surpassed 70% of the authors. Problem (personal subjective analysis): However, the shortcomings of multi-perspective narratives cannot be escaped at present. After all, the protagonist is not described in detail. The obvious problem is that the protagonist seems a bit slow, giving people the feeling that the protagonist has no subjective initiative. Congratulations: Of course the novel is not over 100,000 words yet, I believe this problem may be solved in the future. Of course, despite its flaws, this novel can be said to be very good on Tomato. After all, multi-perspective narratives are quite impressive in writing. I will continue to observe the follow-up content and hope that the author can maintain the status quo in the future or even improve it to a higher level! Come on, author, I hope you can hold on, the fan works of the Bijing Moon series are unlikely to be popular on Tomato [learned] [eat melon] [please update]

It's very funny. It successfully made me download fgo. I was so angry for more than 50 times that I really didn't want to play anymore.

It's a good thing that Leif blew up Team A. The director has been out of the magic circuit for decades. Red A and Black Dai are the guardians. The new plot of FGO is a bit difficult. The old director is still too cs. Compared to Leif, he looks like a lolita.

This is the most original Fate fanfic I have ever seen. It's like watching anime. The author must really like the interaction between Mashu and Fujimaru (male). I really like it. Can you show me the most perfect Fate in my heart? Keep up the good work! ⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽

Judging from the first volume, it is very good. It is not like the running accounts of ordinary online books that rely entirely on narration to drive the plot. This book gives full play to the core of the original character design, and combines the funny characters and extra plots. It mainly uses the interesting dialogues and behaviors of the characters to promote the development of the story. The story is relatively clear, and the writing is also good. During the reading process, you can see many side descriptions that can make people immersed in it. The switching of perspectives between different characters is not too blunt. This book can be said to be an outstanding one among all the monthly articles, and it will be deeply remembered by me.

The narration is first person, but it is the best first person narration I have ever seen. The foreshadowing is well recycled and there are no obvious pain points that seem to make you want to refute it at a glance. At a glance, he was established as the best first-person model in my heart. Brothers, these are not like Tianhu's opening blitz at the champagne factory. Although it is generally difficult, as long as the level does not drop, it is already undisputed and will become a classic masterpiece for everyone. The only thing I need to worry about is the author's health and that people won't be able to find the book.

It's really good-looking, and it's also well written from multiple perspectives. And how do you feel about it? Personally, I feel that the emotions are quite delicately written and very comfortable to watch, and then it should make up for those regrets, right? For example, the director was not saved. After all, is this described in so many words? In the end, you said that the ending was still the same in the end, that's a bit too ridiculous. Then I have to give it a thumbs up for not being a simulator article. There are so many simulation articles like this, seven or eight out of ten. The main thing is that the content of the simulation articles is almost the same. It's basically a simulation. After the simulation is completed, the summoning is completed. After the summoning is completed, it doesn't take long for the reality to be simulated again. After seeing the simulation article, I am no longer interested, and I know what will happen. Overall, it's very interesting and I think the future is promising (I think if it is written at this level, it will probably be a work with a score of 9 or above) Good luck to the author, I hope you won't send it.

It's quite good. Although it is narrated from multiple perspectives, at least it clearly marks whose perspective it is, so that readers will not be confused. The content of the story is quite interesting. I hope the author will continue to write it well. Just a small suggestion, if you are free, you can add a picture of the character when he or she appears for the first time, although most of you already know [Blowing Kiss]

Just write FGO for the rest of your life, I can do anything [cry][cry][cry]

The multi-perspective viewing experience is indeed good, but if you want to write it well, the first, second and fourth chapters of the game are simply disasters, and the plot needs to be carefully worked out. I hope there is a way to connect the plot more smoothly. . Come on.

Suspected Carnival (Official Knock Out Series) Trumpet I want to see the Shura Field, Koukoya!

Tomato can still see FGO text, come on

Thinking back to that time of playing games, I have an indescribable feeling of ambiguity. [Crying][Love] Anyway, come on!

It is narrated from multiple perspectives and the characters are well-developed. The main reason is that I knew it was a family carnival at first sight. What I wanted was to change the tragedy [I almost cried] The children are thriving!

It feels like it is a very rare book that follows the main storyline and plot of FGO. It can be seen that the author has no experience, but the description of emotions is very delicate. The protagonist is also very good so far. He must make up for the shortcomings of the past, Fujimaru Ritsuka——

Hurry up and send out the saved manuscript so that I can criticize it severely😋

Very good, come on, the author is optimistic about you [blowing kiss]

It's pretty good. Japanese light novels have a strong flavor.

Very delicate psychological description, with a Japanese flavor. The most important thing is that it has a lot of updated words😋

It's super good-looking. I like this kind of plot that mixes serious drama with daily life. The author would like to encourage you to update more ε(*´･ω･)з

It looks great, the only drawback is that updates are too slow. [Punch hard]

It's well written but I really can't read it from multiple perspectives. Come on, goodbye.

Finally found a novel that allows me to see fgo By the way, has everyone watched the voiceover of the new servant "Lilith"? It's so powerful, it fires directly at all ML followers [laughing]

The author writes well, and don't imitate the bad job of mushroom manipulation

There are not many authors like you who can write heartwarming fan stories like yours.

Very good, but it was so confusing at the beginning that I cut out three rooms and one living room. The rest are all high-quality works in FGO. Keep it up and write novels for the rest of your life [Punch]

It's so tiring to watch from multiple angles, but I like it very much

I don't know what to say, but it looks good, although I'm a little uncomfortable seeing it in the first person.

Come on, I want to see the director's happy ending!

Pretty good new article on fgo