Ling Cage: I'm Just an Ordinary Person

The first impression is very good, but if you look closely: the only shortcoming is that the vocabulary is too complicated. Over-emphasis will only be counterproductive, so there is no need to be too deliberate! Other than that, it's not a big deal. After all, the author writes as a hobby, so there is no need to resort to word-for-word "egg-egg-picking-stone"... (The style of the article is very in line with my personal feelings, and has the flavor of a spiritual cage. The author is also rigorous and meticulous, and has good taste and taste)

The writing is good, but used in the wrong place. Good emotional expression is not just about a plethora of adjectives. Body movements resonate with the environment and can better express the ups and downs of emotions. (You can refer to those emotional novels, such as "My 26-year-old Girl" and "My Miss Tulip") The metaphors described are the highlight of the article, but too many will make it seem complicated. Appropriately write down some changes in body movements and expressions: Frowning, he took out a cigarette from his pocket, lit it slowly and took a puff, and his eyes unconsciously drifted into the distance. Although there are no adjectives here, it also expresses the protagonist's melancholy. I think the author's writing is good, but if you don't have the patience, you may feel that your article has too many descriptive words. Appropriately reducing some unnecessary adjectives will make your article more concise and attractive. I hope the author can see this comment of mine

Logically speaking, among the fan authors I have read so far, this author is the one who has really worked hard to study and analyze the spirit cage. The plot is not watery, it is very rigorous, and the portrayal of each character is objective rather than biased. Worth commending👍

He originally said that I had read too many Linglong fan novels, which were too brainless and did not give me that sense of ecological oppression. This book was relatively good and had a stronger sense of immersion. Isn't reading novels just for the sense of immersion? I don't want to give the author any advice. If you continue to keep it, too many suggestions will only change your original intention. The author can just continue with the current outline. It will also make ordinary people feel great in this apocalypse. It is a sense of experience, which is very good.

The good-looking high imitation spirit cage is as full of depression and despair as the spirit cage, but also tense and exciting; At the same time, unlike most of the brainless Teddy Days on the market, this alone is five stars. Five stars is just the limit of software rating, highly recommended, not Teddy

Thank you for the top-notch writing by the Ling Cage fans in Tomato. They have their own ideas and will be linked with the new official plot. There are no poisonous points. It is very enjoyable to watch. Personally, I feel that it is a milestone in the Ling Cage novel. When the Ling Cage is released, it will not be outdated. It is very inspiring! Big cheers for the author! [Adoration][Adoration] @hairless rice porridge And the most important thing is! Updates 3, 4, 5 a day! There are also updates from time to time! Can you withstand this? ! ! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Give me a big blow to the author to "power up with love", the student party will give you some support [Adore][Adore]

Okay, try not to be so exaggerated in the description, it's too much like AI

It's well written, but not to my liking. It feels too depressing if you put it in, and the warm moments are not a powerful foil to the cruelty of reality. The lighthouse's hope of finding humanity is destroying it. Just a personal opinion.

It's so... Good to read. Come on, the author, and update it soon. The author's writing is very real. The emotional repression of the lighthouse and the resistance deep in people's hearts. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it hhh. I'll update it soon.

Today, June 26, 2025, I read the author's novel and thought it was very well written and very novel. It is just that sometimes the writing is too detailed and a little wordy. But this is a small problem. I hope the author will work hard and like to read your book. One more thing, this is a new book, so I will read it in one day today, please update it soon! [Cool]