Harry Potter: A Tenderness Beyond Time

This is the most enjoyable Sri Lankan CP book I have ever read! This book describes Noah's love for Sri Lanka very delicately! There is also this sentence, "Snape, you have pushed away the people who care about you again." This is Sif's mockery of himself, and it also contains the scarred heart.

It's a pity that it's not over yet. Of course, I don't want it to end so quickly. I strongly recommend it. The author's logic is clear, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the two are strong (can it be considered mutual redemption?). The author's writing style is very nice, and the subject matter is novel. If you can continue writing like this, it will attract more readers. Moreover, the content is coherent, the transitions are not stuck, and the logic is normal and does not make people feel stiff. This is very good at keeping readers from feeling bored. The author's knowledge reserve is also sufficient, which makes the entire article very good. The world view of the novel is very complete, and the setting is also very complete. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Noah is the sunshine that comes for the professor, but the sunshine is not the sun. Someone blocks the dazzling part for you, and only delivers the warmest ray to your hand. No matter how cold the corner is, as long as there is a beam of light coming for you, spring will slowly grow.

It's so good to watch. It's rare to see a teacher from Sri Lanka click in immediately. The character's personality is also well grasped. I look forward to the teacher's follow-up chapters.

First of all, the professor has set up a good job Secondly, the protagonist Noah's ultimate goal is very clear - to save Snape in the war Finally, the daily emotions between the two are very delicate and sincere, which can touch people's hearts. Overall, this is a good book worth reading

It looks good, but changing history comes at a cost. Gellert hopes to save Dumbledore and uses himself as a bargaining chip for this. What about Severus? He didn't want Severus to lose someone he loved because of him again.

The content is wonderful and the emotions are expressed very well. Noah's emotions towards Sif are delicate and complex. At the same time, Sif's emotions towards Noah have also changed. I look forward to the following plots. The author will give you a lot of support [laughs]

It's a good article, quite interesting. I like some of the descriptions very much, especially the previous descriptions of Noah doing experiments. It looks very professional and is very consistent with HP's style. But there are also areas for improvement: (This is not a criticism, just what I think can be improved) 1. Please divide it into paragraphs appropriately and describe the details appropriately. If each paragraph is too long, it will kill the reader's interest in reading and reduce the readability of the article; 2. The pace of the plot feels a bit fast, and some details could be polished better, especially the relationship between Noah and Si Jiao. The relationship develops too fast, and Si Jiao's change in attitude towards Noah is also a bit abrupt. I gave it five stars. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on!

The plot arrangement is reasonable, the characters are suitable, and the most important thing is not to criticize any of the characters. When you watch it, you will feel that this is how the real Snape reacted when he fell in love. The ending is very happy, and it can be called a dream master level.

A book worth reading! It is rare among the Sri Lankan fics that I have read that it retains all the important plots and the main character is not particularly hung up on. It is just the Saint Godfather and the replacement family identity. It is still smooth and not too outrageous. I replayed the story but all the characters made me feel warm in my heart when I watched it, (but it reminded me of the original war before and after, ahhhhhh, the psychological committee member made me uncomfortable!) The story line was also handled very well, and the setting of parallel time and space was cleverly designed into an organization similar to the Time and Space Administration, and it was so satisfying to watch it all at once. . . Although I feel that Noah is not as shrewd as previously depicted in the subsequent plot, hahahaha, maybe it is love that makes people take off their guard. I like this type of protagonist so much. I have a paranoid love for Si that I can't let go of but that I cherish extremely much. It would be great if the original Si could also get this kind of preference.

Not bad! The male protagonist in this article has a clear development path and clear goals. The golden finger (?) Is also very reasonable. Although some of the school's daily designs are not very "original", they can be used as private designs and are totally fine. The ocss are completely together after the completion. The other sub-CPs (non-original characters) except GGAD (or Tonks and Lupin obviously) are all open-ended and can be touched at will? The highlight of this article is probably the hero's rescue route and development route! It looks refreshing and refreshing😊 Oh! Five hours, a very comfortable pace☺️ If you are particularly concerned (does anyone really care) that the sweet version of the extra ss is OOC but you have already read the fanfic of cp being ss, who would care about this (hey!)