Delta Force: My Younger Sister Is a Streamer

The writing is good, but the author is too detailed. He really calculates the results himself to bring out the value. Some points will also indicate the source chapter. I hope the author will write more, it is not enough [laughing]

I feel like the writing is pretty good! The plot is quite interesting so far, and the biggest advantage is that it doesn't have many poisonous points! It's just that I wrote a little too much about ordinary games. I hope the pace can be faster. Of course, if the author has his own pace, just follow his own pace! Add more interesting play styles, and hopefully the update will be more stable. [Learned]

It's very interesting, but the game takes up a bit too much space. It seems that the game accounts for at least 90% so far, and only one of the ten chapters is about non-games. If you can hope that the author will write half of the game and half of the city, or intersperse it, after all, the title says there are many women, how can it be fun without writing some romance [sneaky laugh]

Don't mention it, Tomato's writing about delta is not bad, at least most of the delta's articles are not poisonous. One star is deducted, one or two chapters are updated a day, and there is no change in the advancement of the plot. After more than ten days of saving, the plot does not advance at all.

Author update soon The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of Curse: The Supreme Lord's decree will transcend your lonely soul.)

The writing is pretty good. The author has actually played the game and checked the information before writing it. He also explains any unreasonableness. It is probably the first time he writes a novel. The evaluation is very good.

Updates are stable. Only by combining daily life and delta can we create better works. If it had a single female protagonist, it would be excellent, but it is a pity that it has multiple female protagonists.

I read the latest chapter, Chapter 85, in one go. To be honest, I have played a few Delta games myself. I have played similar gold extraction games before, and I am not very interested in this kind of game. However, I think this novel is well written, teaches some things, and is quite interesting. Now I am curious about one thing. The label is multi-female protagonists, so who will be the first? [Thinking] At present, it seems that the unrelated sister, the rich lady Xia Sister, the well-behaved and lively rich lady's young apprentice, all three are possible. The melancholy and cold sister is not possible for the time being, we will wait for the later stage. [Thinking] Judging from the plot, the younger sister is already jealous of the apprentice, and the plot has hints about the future, so the young apprentice is bound to fall, but I don't know when emotionally. I slowly changed, and then Sister Xia, in the latest plot, she first told her sister that she would not accept the protagonist as her apprentice, and would not let him play with others in the future, and then she drank alcohol and then stayed at the protagonist's house. It felt like there was going to be some unusual interaction [laughter] So who will be the first girlfriend, the jealous sister, the drunk sister Xia, or the well-behaved apprentice [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]

It looks good, but the author is too lazy and updates slowly [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I searched around for books about the Delta, but there was no good one. [Pauses face] Other books are either about National Destiny, or about time travel to the Delta world, and there are all kinds of outrageous tricks and over-the-top tricks. Books like this about National Destiny are so sweet. I really don't know what kind of people like to read. [Pauses face] After searching all around, this book is the better one.