Even the Sidelined Male Lead Can Return to the Top

It's a very good book. The main plot is about a young couple doting on each other and it's super sweet. It's about when they get together. Here are the comments: The world view is grand and novel, and the overall description of the characters is also very good. The development of the protagonist group has ups and downs, and it is neither smooth sailing nor smooth and harmonious. , The genre of the forum also adds a lot of fun to the article. How can I say that the speeches on the forum are indeed in line with real life (?). Generally speaking, the settings of the protagonist group are very good, there is nothing to choose from, and the main story tasks are also very clear. As for some deputy CPs, I personally accept it well, but objectively speaking Speaking of which, this kind of thing depends on the individual, not talking about every book, but there will always be characters in some books who fall in love. You can't expect everyone except the protagonist to be single all their lives. They should have their own emotions. Well, indeed, this is too idealistic. How to write it depends on the author. Then there are the villains. The villain group of the Gluttonous Maw is still okay. They have reasons to do what they think is right. As a villain group that the protagonist has to deal with, it is okay. Then there is another villain who should be regarded as a villain. This Ning Meng, Qiu Ning, who considers herself to be the creator. What I have to say is that the author writes the image of her beloved protagonist, Cang Lan, with paranoid and selfish emotions, self-righteous, and superior creator image very well. There is no problem in emotional character. However, a common problem in writing villains is to create villains just for the sake of having villains. They believe that villains are bad, and put all bad and bad emotions on the villain. , In fact, this is one of the reasons why readers have a strong dislike for villains. People are imperfect and understandable, but people also have good sides. The villain is not only shaped by his character, but also by her story experience, the character's emotional arc and his goals for himself, and his moral code. This is a person. He is not only bad, but he must have a bad reason to convince readers that he is the reason why he can be a villain. Why he does this does have his own principles and cause and effect. In this regard, the author of Qiu Ning's story has not been written, and I don't know what kind of person she is. What may have caused her to have such a psychological problem of lacking love, so that she fell in love with a character that does not exist in her world. It all depends on how the author writes. If Qiu Ning is really like this all the time, maybe I would also like her to go offline. This is not a very good villain, he is just a delusional lunatic who is passionate, self-righteous and superior. Above, I hope the author can see and improve the character of Qiu Ning, or if the plot cannot be completed as soon as possible, well, improve the character image, don't whitewash it, but at least make it easier for readers to watch.

Overall, it's quite good-looking, with a very novel setting, a new worldview, and good character development. It's a bit more of a daily novel, and there's not much war. But it's only about sixty chapters, so there should be more excitement later. The two protagonists are childhood sweethearts. They are very close and sweet from the beginning. They have exclusive nicknames and are very talented but they are quite incompatible. According to the article, there are quite a lot of cps, and it seems that they are still childhood sweethearts. The most annoying thing is the original author, I really don't like it, and the fact that she uses her skills to control Qiu Hanyue, which feels a bit innocent and purely controlled by the plot, but then I think about it, they have grown up together and it seems right to relax their vigilance on her. I hope Qiu Hanyue will wake up soon. Also, I feel like there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope they can be filled in. I have a bold guess that after Lanlan became a god in his previous life, he restarted the world and brought Feifei back. When I saw many details, I actually felt that Lanlan has a memory. I am really looking forward to the next development. It is a pity that there are only more than 60 chapters. You know what I mean [shy][send my heart][send my heart][please update]

Although I don't like books with secondary CP, the writing of this book is quite good, so I can accept it, but! When will that cute lemon go offline? [Smile] Every time I see her harassing Cang Lan, I feel helpless as if I can't reach the screen with my palm. [Awkward smile] Overall, this book is delicately written and rich in emotion, without the feeling of being forced.

Overall, this book is okay, but there are really many typos in places, and the sentences don't make sense. I hope the author can correct them, and that lemon will be offline soon. In addition, I think your logic and plot lines can be clearer, and you can pay more attention to the characterization of the characters. I also hope that the author will read more opinions in the comment area, such as comments on typos and wrong sentences in the comment area and make corrections.

The bamboo horses run in both directions, which is really good! Hey hey hey [shy][shy][shy] Yan Fei, the cannon fodder, is so interesting after his awakening. He is no longer the tool man who was offline early in the original work. He relies on the golden finger given by the world consciousness to force the eccentric author, and he can also knock himself and Cang Lan's CP barrage. This kind of anti-routine plot is super exciting to watch! Cang Lan's possessiveness is so strong that he is cold to others, but he loves Yan Fei to the point of no end. The bond they grew up with is so great that the detail of the earrings directly makes him a god. It turns out that in the ending, Cang Lan's obsession has always been Yan Fei! The setting of the essence is super cool, the combination of Chaos and Taichu, the twin geniuses of the tenth level innate essence, and Yan Fei, the son of the wind attribute god, are so handsome. The plot rhythm of the interstellar college entrance examination and Shenghuan Academy is superb. Every time I watch the interaction between the two of them, my aunt laughs, and the plot against the villain is also very refreshing! The author wrote the two-way protection between bamboo horses so poignantly that Cang Lan's words "you are different" directly broke the defense. Who can refuse a destiny protagonist who only has eyes for you? There is no peeing in the whole process, it is sweet and burning. I not only want to see how Yan Fei changes his destiny and escapes the cannon fodder ending, but also wants to laugh at the beautiful love between Cang Lan and Yan Fei. I simply can't stop. Interstellar literature lovers can just jump in and finish it!

The plot is very clear, smooth and not rigid. It looks good. I like it. I like it. Thank you author. Thank you for treating me like a human being (bow). The emotional lines are very delicate. The interaction is so cute. So cute. It's even more adorable for the author to write it.

Let me tell you my opinion first. The setting is very good and the world view is quite comprehensive. I haven't finished reading it. The reason why I haven't finished it is because of the shortcomings in the writing or narrative. I think the setting, abilities, and development of the world view are pretty good, even outstanding, but the narrative feels a bit strange. From what I saw, sometimes it feels like there are a lot of redundancies and repetitions. For example, when Chungui and the two of them live together, they explain why everything is fine every time. This is just an example. There are many other places that I can't remember for the time being. The most important thing is this. Then the narrative feels very dragging, which makes me unable to watch and makes me want to skip chapters. In the end, I still couldn't finish it. I look forward to the author's next book being better.

The setting is very novel, and it is suitable for those who like to read a lot of CP (it seems to be a bit biased towards group portraits, mainly because it took me a long time to read it, so I am not sure. I have forgotten many of them now, but this book does not have my highlight). Emm, the villain does affect the perception a bit, but I think there will be such people no matter what dimension they are in, so I accept it well. The plot and emotional lines are both okay. I think the characters are more three-dimensional. I really like the characters in the book (regardless of the protagonist and supporting characters). As for typos and writing style, I have seen and missed more typos (most of them are accessible to me). Although the writing style is not amazing, it cannot be said to be immature (it is more in the middle). To sum up, I still like this novel very much. Although the rating is not 9.8 Or something like that, I don't think it should stop at 7+, so I rated it a little higher. (The author's hard work deserves to be seen and cherished. There will always be people who like it. Just wait for the right person (=^▽^=))

It's okay so far, the writing is average, I can't say it's bad, the plot is attractive and delicious, but the narrative has a little bit of discomfort (it feels like the pace is fast, but overall it's not, it's a bit blurry) because it's a group portrait, so the image of each character is very difficult to write. The author's big words are already very good, and it can be seen that the author is really serious about writing. The narrative style of the first chapter gave me a very amazing feeling, but the subsequent chapters did not give me the same amazing feeling as the first chapter. There are a few typos, but they don't matter much. In summary, readers who can accept vague characters, fast narrative pace, and many typos can read it happily. The plot of this book is really attractive and delicious, and the characters of each group portrait are also very unique.

The writing is average, but the plot and background settings are quite new and interesting.