Usurping a Duke's Seat, Starting with the White Horse Volunteers

Yesterday I read the front part, and there are indeed many problems. I admit it, there is nothing to avoid. The most mistakes corrected by the brothers were in the first thirty chapters. Thank you again [laughs]. Let me explain again, because it was my first time to write a book, I wrote it intermittently for half a year. I only got up the courage to publish it on September 2nd. Then because I didn't understand it, I wrote 90,000 words in one go. As a result, the verification period was immediately passed. None of the previous readers had accumulated anything. The verification period was terrible. Because I took the time to write it after get off work and didn't have much time to polish it, so please bear with me as I have many questions [laughs]

It's pretty good for this type of novel. What is rare is the combination of famous ancient Eastern troops and Western magical characters and races. This is a relatively novel writing direction, and the content is meaningful and not just made up. The author should have done serious homework on this type of historical materials. The story develops and the plot line is also very smooth. People can follow the text to describe the entire plot line and it will be presented in front of them. Occasionally there are foreshadowings. I hope the author sticks to it

It's quite interesting. I forgot to comment after reading this. According to the author's thinking, there should be a scene similar to the revival of spiritual energy in the future. However, I suggest that the author can push it to the point where the continent where the protagonist is located is unified or after occupying half of the area, otherwise it will be completely carried out. There are many changes, because the protagonist's basic base is not yet stable. If there is no continent as the basic base, some changes are prone to occur. Some people will also say that the protagonist of this book does not even have the same place and starts causing trouble. There are also too few soldiers.

The author's writing is quite good, and it can be considered a good book. However, there is a problem. The Western aristocratic system determines that the nobles are a group of egoists who put their own family interests first. It is difficult to produce loyal ministers like those in the book, such as the fourth-order knight who was defeated and committed suicide in the Grand Canyon. The author shaped the nobles into traditional Chinese loyal ministers and good generals.

The subject matter is novel, which is also the main selling point, and the writing style has room for improvement. Then, when writing a hegemony article, if you don't plan to write a clear emotional line, you should try to reduce the description of 'flirting' and the like.

Come on, there are not many good-looking lord stories anymore. They are either natural disasters of the undead or all-female military units. The most exciting thing about Western fantasy stories is to conquer alien races and coexist with all races.

Very good looking, fighting style, not laggy

A very good Western fantasy novel. If you are short on books, you can read it.

The author can write the protagonist as a dragon knight,

Very good, my type