
Harry Potter: I Became the White Moonlight at Hogwarts
hp我在霍格沃茨成为白月光
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This book is very good, with a clear plot, especially the sentence "I seem to be raised by Potter, no matter what kind of Potter it is." This book is really good (personal opinion), but it is a bit regretful to be killed by Bellatrix. I hope I can return to the original generation. After all, this is one of the few novels I like to read, about taking James to play with the original generation [Thinking], Strongly Amway [Adore] [Adoration]
It's beautiful. Needless to say, it's all about the plot that I love. I love James so much now. Invincible and beautiful, I can only say it is a masterpiece. Tomato is lucky to have such a novel.
Love it! (Contains spoilers!) It's all random thoughts, saying what comes to mind: The timeline is clear, the explanations are complete, the logic is rigorous, and everyone's feelings and behaviors exist appropriately. In the early stage, James was clingy and sunny and loved to be coquettish, unruly Sirius, and Peter with low self-esteem, until James unswervingly traveled through time and started over, Riddle's money is the truth, dull Abu, and Sirius who suffered from the pain of his own generation. In the end, everyone is a stew of gloomy men. Petunia's memory really makes me cry. Will Petunia, who was once jealous of wizards and wanted to become a wizard, be glad that she is not a wizard because she can remember Noah? Are you glad that you can still keep some memories? Remus has always been a heart-wrenching character, a person who doesn't attract much attention, but the love he silently endures is also delicious. Remy being called a fat Scottish chicken is so cute! I really want to own one. The Weasleys are all well-cast! The difference between George and Fred is clearly set with great ingenuity. Bill is so exciting. Snape is too doting, Professor Snape, what is your bottom line? Mr. Cedric is so charming and worth having. There is also Noah's persistence in every life. Although amnesia and various pains torture Noah, but just like the Sorting Hat said, she has the courage to do it again. She is still the same Noah. Also the characters may have forgotten to mention that it doesn't mean I don't like them. (In addition, I want to watch the Lao Tang if line,,, on the fingers... I'm sorry in advance but I really want to watch it) At present, the child generation Riddle has not appeared yet. It seems that Charles may have met Noah first and then told Riddle.
It's very interesting to read, and the story is attractive. It's not a plot that's particularly ups and downs and sets up brain-burning foreshadowing, but it doesn't have a straight-forward sense of running down the story. Even if you can guess the subsequent development, the plot and description can easily capture people's hearts. The heroine is a little sun-type setting. I feel like the sunshine in May, between spring and summer, green plum blossoms, warm wind and long days. The heroine's character is not too hot and annoying, and is a rare warmth in the continuous plum rain. Not only the characters in the story love and cherish the heroine, but as a reader, I also love and cherish this May sunshine. (The above only represents my personal feelings. I don't like books that have too much foreshadowing, I don't have the patience, and I don't like books that are too white and brainless. This book is just right for me)
The writing is good, the setting is good, and the world view is good. Because the content I write often arouses my emotions, and then I either scream crazily on the bed or drop small pearls. All in all, it is very novel and very beautiful.
This king will give himself a five-star rating.
The author's writing style is very good and the characters are well portrayed. I really like the relationship between the parents. James is really the existence of Bai Yueguang. There is a little abuse in the middle but the daily life is very relaxed at the end. It is very sweet. I especially like Sandwich and the puppy. Come on! I want to watch the extra [blowing kiss][laughing]
Super pretty! This is the best-written James I have seen recently. It is a little different and does not feel too abrupt. The usually carefree and a bit arrogant person became careful and cautious because of Noah, and became obsessive and super charming. James and Noah should always be together. No matter what era it is, Noah without James is so heartbreaking, just like losing his own support. James is a father, a brother, a friend and a lover to Noah. The bond between them even makes me sigh when I see Harry. Certain emotions are continued between their father and son. Tom is also super emotional. Tom is like Noah's shadow, half of her body. To be honest, I think the three of them can live a good life because of Noah's chain. As long as Noah is good, they will be fine. There is also Sirius who is very handsome at all times, Remus who is sensitive, Lily who is like a sister, Gemini, and Tsai. . . . I hope to see more of their stories in the future. James and Tom's writing is so good at the moment that others can't get on the table at all hahahahaha
It looks so good! It looks so good! Awesome, high production and high quality, Wang's writing style is great! Noah in Dawang's novel is very cute, and the interactions between the characters are very loving. It's really good-looking and can be played! Also, don't you feel a pang in your conscience if you say the character is OOC? The fan you are reading doesn't know OOC. If you want to avoid OOC, then write it yourself! Or if you read the original article, the original article does not contain OOC, and you may not be able to write it yourself. Just read the article carefully, and you are still making irresponsible remarks here. If you read other articles, you may not be able to write something like the king. You have to be pure and honest.
The plot is rich, a bit funny, the main plot is good, there are a lot of foreshadowings, and there are quite a lot of knives. I feel that the best written one is the pro era. There are a little less words about the ancestor era. I feel that the pro era is the best to watch. As for the child era, I was looking forward to it, but there are a few emotional lines in it. Most of them are plot lines, and Draco's emotional lines are really few. Every time I write about him, I feel like a Slytherin and grudge. The sense of separation in Llanffindor, ah, is quite disappointing, because the heroine has very little interaction with Slytherin, but is quite good with Gryffindor and other houses. As for the plot line, I feel good, and I also like the character of the heroine. James and the heroine feel that they are the best couple. James really loves him. To be honest, James alone can surpass everyone else. There are really few emotional lines among other people, but James has the most. The character descriptions are detailed. Well, even the character of Peter Pettigrew feels a bit different to me. There are very few emotional lines among other people. I don't know why, but James has the most interaction with the heroine anyway. But I still think that the emotional lines of other people are also good, but there are few and there are few chapters. The author of the main story did not describe it in too much detail. He simply summarized it and skipped it. I am a bit uncomfortable.