System! What Have You Been Doing Behind My Back?!

It's so well written that it's so intertwined that I don't have to urinate at all. If this book is not popular, everyone here is responsible! There was so much foreshadowing, and so many innocent people were involved just for the protagonist to fall in love across generations. I'm convinced. I'm sorry that I've been chasing this book for so long. No matter what lofty terms the author uses, this is essentially a love story.

It's a divine book. The name is ridiculous, but the content is super awesome. The author's previous book has already become a god in my heart. It integrates high-energy physics and traditional cultivation systems so well. It's the only time in my life that I can have such an awesome understanding of these two aspects of knowledge! Highly recommended

Damn, it looks really good. A ghost floating above everyone controlled everything. He was about to see hope, but was suddenly knocked back into the abyss. Can't see the opponent, can't find the reason. There is an atmosphere of depressive despair. It's so fun to watch . . . . Don't watch romantic dramas

Now I understand clearly, this started as a story about an unemployed young man and a retired old man, until interference came to the system, guided by cultivating immortals, and then gradually revealed the power of higher civilizations to lay out the earth [Thinking] I said why I couldn't sleep, but it turned out that my brain was on hold and started to spin [awkward laughter] and he secretly stabbed me! , Holy shit, Old Man Li is so dumb [laughing awkwardly] The protagonist who was so cruel and inhumane was really kept in the dark. All other advancements depended on the state and the police. The protagonist's subjective consciousness really didn't think of any problems [grievance]. Then he started to get frustrated. Why did he start to directly change his skin, teleport to a random place, and perform world peace missions? Isn't this cultivating immortality? ! What I saw from behind was very confusing. I walked away.

A masterpiece. The degree of completion is ridiculously high, and it possesses an artistry that is almost impossible to exist in the structure of web texts. It is a successful deconstruction of contemporary online literature from traditional literature, a tragicomedy that explores "love" and "desire", and is a masterpiece that ranks among the first echelons of all modern and contemporary literary and artistic works. It's nice to see someone trying to write in-depth articles. It is a pity that there is almost no survival soil for this kind of literature in China. If it can be adapted into film, TV series and animation, it may have a chance of survival. I'll try to parse it. (Note: "Love" means "an attempt to enter a greater unity", that is, "the illusion of devotion in the face of inevitable death." The two have the same meaning and originate from the reproductive instinct of living things. "Desire" means "the pursuit of things that are beneficial to survival as judged by the symbol system", that is, "the lack of contrast between the current situation and a perfect situation that does not exist in the past or future." It originates from the survival instinct of living beings. This is my personal understanding of theories such as "One-Dimensional Man" and "Paradise Theory".) Characters are the soul of the novel. This is the consensus of traditional literature, but this is not the logic in online literature. The protagonist in the online article is a tool to promote the plot and satisfy the readers' desires, while the supporting characters are the embodiment of the readers' desires. It is an exaggeration to say that online articles can no longer be called novels. Internet articles and traditional novels should not be classified into the same genre. Internet writing is a deconstructive style of writing that arouses and satisfies readers' desires. The essence is the same as pornographic movies, popcorn movies and other highly "commercialized" forms of entertainment. To induce, satisfy and release "love" in the form of "desire". But this book is not. In the Internet era, it can be said to be very "old school". [Facepalm] The protagonist and the heroine are designed symmetrically. The protagonist is instinctive, narrow-minded, and lustful, while the heroine is transcendent, grand, and loving. But both have their own shortcomings. The male protagonist's shortcoming is that he is "oppressed" by "love", which is reflected in his choice to deliver batteries after being appointed by the "free man". At this time, he is carrying the entrustment of the deceased, and he himself is forced to become a part of the "grander unity" (or the illusion of dedication) from the perspective of the deceased. In layman's terms, delivering the battery is the purpose of the deceased's sacrifice. If not delivered, the deceased himself (should) think that his death was in vain. The shortcoming of the female protagonist is that she is "complicated" by "desire". As written in the book, she knows that the love between men and women is only the result of dopamine secretion, but she is still addicted to male lust, and even entrusts the fate of mankind to the male protagonist. The character's character determines the character's destiny. The male protagonist attempts to achieve a perfect situation that does not exist, so he goes back to the past again and again to try to achieve an ending in which the female protagonist survives. And the heroine sacrifices every time in order to dedicate herself to the illusion.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality online article on Tomato. I read it all night long. The shortcoming is that it's too short. I'm not sure how much space I can write in the rest of it. The author has never been able to write many chapters in his previous works, so he's very nervous. There are still too few roles for the protagonist, and it feels like writing a prequel. The protagonist of the story is not like the protagonist, but more like the plot development of the protagonist's confrontation with unknown latitude enemies, guided by the Li family as the main protagonist system.

The subject matter is interesting. The title of "Xiu Xian" is actually about technology becoming a god. It also has shadows of previous works. The writing and description give people a sense of professionalism. The plot of the protagonist's first life in the first half is very fascinating. I can give it a 9 points. Although it feels like a group portrait, the characters are all flesh and blood. Lao Li who is under surveillance is a bit like Shi Qiang's police officer Zhao, Taoist Zhang Tao, Wang Mingming who took two kilograms of bullets, and Lao Yan who persists alone. The plot is compact and full of suspense. When the protagonist travels back in time, it feels a bit boring. The plot suddenly changes from saving the world to a story about filial piety. The protagonist unexpectedly comes together with Sister Li, giving people a sense of helplessness that it has come to an abrupt end. In the second life, the protagonist is taken off the system, and the plot advancement depends entirely on the heroine's scientific research. However, there are a lot of bloody plots between the three protagonists, and it feels very boring later. I hope the third life will be more exciting.

Tomato is one of the few good books, highly recommended. It is no exaggeration to say that from the perspective of plot and creativity, it can be compared with The Three-Body Problem. It is much more interesting than the Tiancai Club next door. However, I feel that the plot is a bit slow to advance. Some of the plots are too wordy. It would be better if the scenes were more grand. As a result of such an incident, a domestic investigation team was established and it was disbanded all of a sudden. It is a bit petty.

The front part is okay, an invisible monster floating in the world, the suspense atmosphere is very good It was after I changed the map in the mid-term that I started to get confused. It felt that it had little to do with the main plot of the early stage. First, it was about technological immortality in the black hole, and then it became ordinary fantasy after it came out. Besides, this love is too difficult to endure, so I might as well not write about it.

I finally understand why the rating is so low. The author is very imaginative and the story is exciting. However, this book is not suitable for writing as a full-length novel, or the author's writing style cannot support the completion of a million words. Therefore, the plot in the middle transition period is too heavy and long, which makes readers feel a very strong sense of fragmentation when they read the beginning. That's why so many people criticize this book in the comment area. In fact, if this book is One or two hundred transitional chapters have been deleted, and the main plot of the main character has been modified to make it more coherent. This book is definitely a sci-fi literary book, and the plot is much more exciting than the God-killing and God-killing dramas. Although I am a little dissatisfied with the plot and the ending, I still give it full marks, because this imaginative plot is not the best in Tomato, but it can also be said to be unique and has created a new scientific system of cultivating immortality of its own.