A Tearjerker: My White Moonlight Dies After Maxing Out Her Affection

At present, the look and feel is good, and there are no shortcomings in the character creation and language dialogue. The only thing I am more worried about is whether the characters' emotions towards the heroine can be grasped in the later worlds. In other words, the unit length is the main one, and each world is an independent story. From now on, the plot starts to drag on. I have to write several chapters for one thing, and I have traveled to the comic book world. To have a complete world view, I still have to make a reincarnation.

After reading the length of One Piece, the writing is actually average, but the plot is self-consistent, the characters are relatively three-dimensional, the heroine's task is completed very well, Yi Nanping is saved, the heroine does not use cheats, exchanges injuries for injuries, and trades lives for lives, which is very courageous. I really like the One Piece anime. The characters in this book are not particularly strange. I have a strong sense of immersion. The author's original plot is also OK and the connection is very good. But the pace is fast, the details are few, the story is relatively complete, but there is not much that can be expanded, and the world view is weak. Overall, recommended to watch.

It's very interesting. I'm really looking forward to the Naruto interface in the second world. Naruto turns black. Neji doesn't know if he will regret it. He just loves to watch this kind of regretful, heart-wrenching and helpless moment hahahahaha

The beautiful and kind-hearted Yunqing [acting school] posted a group of knives online. Don't miss it if you pass by. Daodao will make you healthier physically and mentally, and your ability to withstand stress will be enhanced. Warmth and love accompany you every day, and laughter is in your ears. Walking in the world is like the sun, rewriting the chapters of characters, having entered the situation and observing the whole scene, and disappearing and disappearing. Explore the method of rebirth of the dead, just to recreate that light. It is said that after Yun Qing escapes, if she goes back later or is found by everyone, the scene will definitely be very interesting [Bad thoughts +1]

After reading a few chapters, I feel pretty good. I would like to make a few suggestions: The first is that Bai Yueguang's relationship does not need to be limited to the relationship between men and women, and Bai Yueguang can have many identities; the second is to appropriately increase the protagonist's combat power, and the impression will be much better; the third is to arrange the protagonist's posthumous affairs. Jie Jie Jie Jie I have begun to look forward to delicious little pearls... (If you think what I said is wrong, then I am wrong) [Salute][Salute]

I watched One Piece a long time ago, and the subsequent plot seems to be Drum Island (it should be called this, I just remember Chopper appearing) Alabasta (defeating the sand crocodile, Robin appearing) Sky Island (I skipped here to see the key plot clearly) Water City and Judiciary Island (Robin and Franky officially boarded the ship, and then the story of Moonlight Moria (Brooke boarding the ship) All the people were gathered in the early stage, and then the Shampoo Islands were filmed. In fact, I really want to see all the members single arrows and become all white moonlight [send my heart] [send my heart]

The first world is very beautiful. I especially like to see Yun Qing integrate into the adventures of the protagonist group. The characters are very full, full of personality, and very three-dimensional. And I like the characters of the second world very much. The first part is very good, but the second part is a bit off. The third world feels like it's a knife for the sake of the knife. It has many clones, each one dying for death, and going offline in order to get offline quickly. Instead, it is not as three-dimensional as before. I hope the world won't do this again in the future. The 4th world is the one-person world I'm looking forward to. I haven't started watching it yet. I hope it won't be as bad as the 3rd world again. [Sending my heart] I would like to add that the third Demon Slayer: Demon Slayer World, I was really looking forward to it, but the way it turned out was really, really disappointing, and I didn't even want to read it. I hope the fourth world can be written well

It's quite interesting. The protagonist is a boy who changes into a girl (the setting is very light and not obvious. The writing should have been changed a bit) Overall, it's very good. I'm always on the road to being stabbed. I'm not abusing for the sake of abuse, but because of some things and the person who was stabbed took a different path. The pirate world is the best partner and white moonlight, the Naruto world is the white moonlight that you want to catch but cannot get, and the alien world is also the white moonlight (the pirate group and the Naruto world travel across the world to rob people) The movie viewing body is a bit too long-winded. People from two worlds watch movies in other worlds with heroines. They are anxious in front of the fortune-telling ball, and then they always feel sorry for the heroine. There are too many such plots, and the movie viewing body is skipped. I'm not very interested in the heroine setting of Demon Slayer World, I haven't watched it👀 I've read quite a few comics, and I really like this one. I think its flaws outweigh its flaws, and it's a very interesting book.

I have been following this book from more than 60 chapters to now. In my opinion, the subject matter is very good, and the character of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional and distinct. He is indeed gentle Bai Yueguang. The plot design is quite reasonable. Most of the characters have no OOC, and the plot progress is well controlled. It is slow-paced, so it is relatively long. The characters shown by the protagonists of the two planes are slightly different. The protagonist of the first plane has weaker abilities and is usually protected behind him. The protagonist in the second plane has the ability to protect himself. He is very powerful and belongs to the gentle and powerful Bai Yueguang.

Ok, this book, from 2013 to now, is probably one of the few that I have read normally. I was surprised. Many books were very exciting at first and were good in the middle, but the end made it difficult for me to continue reading because I have read too many of the same books. Those books either collapsed in the later stage, or they were dug into a pile without filling or they no longer have the writing power, so I have not finished it. This book, I can only say, is really good. , The subject matter is quite unique, it doesn't feel like an assembly line, the author has really put in the effort, and I shed a lot of tears after staying up all night. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit too hasty, but it is very good, because if it continues, it is easy for people to feel fatigued by similar content. It is the only book that has been reviewed so far. It is really good. Coming from someone who has stayed up all night many times, I highly recommend it! ! !