[Xuan Gu Fanfiction] Dazzling Flames

The character design of Xuan Gu is really realistic, and the relationship development with the heroine is very smooth! There is no such thing as falling in love at first sight, and Xuan Gu's character of not giving up trust easily and his self-interest are perfectly blended! ! Why did I meet Wuwu so early🥺I have to start catching up again [I'm about to cry]

I stayed up all night to read it, it was so good! I have never read Mortal, so I read it as a fairy tale. There is no awkward plot where the heroine pretends to surrender and then runs away. Sure enough, feeling sorry for someone is the highest level of love literature. I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very pure. If you like it, you like it and you can't help it. And after you make it clear, there is no bloody "she runs away and he chases" plot. It is very sweet and has a very sweet feeling. It is good-looking! There are two things that I don't like (both in the later stage): one is the apprenticeship, three apprentices, one male apprentice likes the female protagonist, and one female apprentice likes the male protagonist. To be honest, it's like a piece of shit. Although it didn't cause any trouble in the end, it's still quite annoying; the second one is that the female protagonist insists on returning to modern times, and then the male protagonist has been idle for seven thousand years. It's also a piece of shit. Apart from these two points, everything else is good.

It's a great setting. It's difficult for Xuan Gu to calm down. This time, I hope he can get over the male protagonist's cheating and being a child of fate, and he can once again fly across the stars and live freely in the world.

I fell in love with the anime after watching it! I was scratching my head and wanted to find some fan food to eat, but the old Ford sweet potato was full of bl ૮₍◞‸◟₎ა. Just when I was disappointed, my wife's article was like a ray of light for the dream girl! After reading the whole story, the writing style is guaranteed. Xuan Gu is not OOC at all. The portrayal of Ning Ning was also very careful. Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, everything else was very good. I was particularly touched.

It looks great. The characters follow the anime and are not OOC at all. The content accurately captures the hearts of our dream girls. I really like the portrayal of the male and female protagonists. It is a fanfic worth ranking first.

I beg the author to update the book again. We can eat Xuan Gu's food for a lifetime [crying] [crying] [crying] The writing is very beautiful, and the development of the emotional line is also very consistent with Xuan Gu's character, but it's just not good enough [crying] Please update Xuan Gu's new book [sending heartfelt thanks] Thank you to my dear author.

I haven't finished the anime of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality yet. I just happened to see Xuan Gu. I was attracted by his personality charm. I felt that it was really a pity that he was gone. I wanted to come to Yangshizi to see if there were any articles by him. I happened to see the author's article. I personally think it was very well written. It did not make the heroine into a very powerful and awesome person or have system cheats. Yes, she feels like an ordinary little girl with her own kindness, sincerity and gentleness. Of course, she is not a blind Madonna. She and Xuan Gu have gone through many things together before they gradually trusted each other and came together. Xuan Gu's character has not changed much, but with the companionship of the heroine, it seems that he has regained a bit of the lively and wanton Xiao Zui before. In the end, it also made up for the regrets of the heroine's family. Han Laomo is still the son of destiny in that world, and Xuan Gu is no longer a stepping stone on the protagonist's growth path, but grows up with the heroine and blossoms along the way.

Super well written! Xuan Gu is so dedicated, he even feels more dedicated than the heroine, I'm so touched... He is so calm and rational to the outside, but he unfolds his soul to Ning Ning so gently, and the love is so deep that he forms a soul contract... I feel particularly sorry for him to love someone so domineeringly and tenderly, the part about the space of consciousness is really touching... I still want to watch it after watching it [crying] [crying] [crying] Please start a new chapter, the story of Xuan Gu is so good!

The plot is very interesting and the heroine's character is very real. Keep up the good work!

The characters are not OC, the plot design is compact, and it looks very smooth. There are no surprises, the emotional line is clear and not too stretched, and the overall feeling is very comfortable [Like][Like][Like] The main thing about Yume Girl is to save the anime. I regret it, so she is somewhat love-minded. The heroine is not silly and sweet in the early stage, but she is still within the acceptable range. Is the heroine not the strong female type, but more of a tough and loving wife? [I learned] It doesn't matter, I'm a local dog and I like to watch it. The male protagonist Xuan Gu is gentle (bushi) with a hint of darkness, and it is really good to fall in love with him day and night. Han Laomo is really a bit of a thief, and you really need to be embarrassed if you go against him [face covering] Recommended Recommended [full] [full] [full]