The Girl Band and the Doll-Like Girl's Tomorrow

The writing is very good, but I personally feel that the protagonist lacks a little bit of self-esteem. Anyone with a discerning eye will know that Mori Nami's sentence about a toad wanting to eat swan meat is referring to the protagonist, but the protagonist is just like a normal person, which feels a bit self-deceiving. Although it is not alienating or anything like that, the occurrence of such a situation and the subsequent actions give people a bit of a licking feeling, and I really can't accept such a setting. Overall, the writing is still very good, keep up the good work. Retreat

Is Fat You's design just to contrast the protagonist's bright image? There is no feeling of brothers and friends between the two parties at all, and Fat You did not respond decently after helping the protagonist. The protagonist deserves to enjoy its services. So is it necessary to have a fat character? Reference (Do you like romantic comedy protagonists) Sakurai and Kirishima The protagonist is like a pendant, admired by girls, but has no ability to effectively handle events.

Author, saving Guitar Mu and Mortis is my only ambition in the world. I don't want the ancient god Mu. I don't care about others. I only want Guitar Mu and Mortis. I will do anything. Finished another article

The writing style is green, but it is also good. I like the narrative style. Oh, [crying] if the author can't update the novel for a lifetime [crying] Wadasi [crying] Come on, big brother who writes books, I hope I can keep writing.

It's good-looking and one of the few Shan Mu's works (maybe, that's what I think so far anyway). I give it five stars and look forward to more updates. Anyway, I must finish it. Also, I like you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's pretty good so far, but I feel like... Kawasaki Yuu, it's not needed anymore, there's no need to exist, some readers will hate it, it's just a pure plot promoter

Very nice. Just one chapter a day is not enough to read, but it is better than Breaking. Are Ruomai and the protagonist brother and sister?

Dude, please be nice to Yuu, there's no need to be so confrontational, right? It's quite uncomfortable... Maybe it's because I'm also fat, and it feels really suffocating to have something disrespectful, troubling, etc. Pressed against my body...

How to say? I finished reading it in less than a week, and it left me with a feeling that it was a bit unfinished, just like watching a favorite anime, and I knew that this was the best ending. But I just can't help but think, what happens next? So, Lao Mao, hurry up and write the extra story.

Very beautiful, the characters are very realistic, the single female protagonist is harmonious, I love pure love the most