Tokyo: My Youth Has No Set Formula

(Watch it with your head in mind) This brother's book has a sense of indifference, which is very fresh and refined. At least among all the novels I have read, the style of this book is great (the male protagonist is super handsome). Let's talk about other things. Compared with those who directly write the "simulation system" on the surface, the setting of "Sword Spirit" in this novel is great. Although the ending can't be guessed, I feel that the protagonist's attitude is very supportive of "will a ten-year relationship really brew into love?" Therefore, the protagonist with this concept is not affected by emotion, but chooses to let time dilute everything. Although it is a bit heartless, it is the best choice (in my opinion). The look and feel is great, I hope the author will continue to persevere! [Blow kiss]

The author's writing is good, and it's good for everyday writing. The flavor of the light novel is quite positive, but the problem is that it is a bit too positive, especially the male protagonist "turtle man". There is no cuckold plot, but the protagonist is very soft, and his fighting power is very soft; he is also very soft towards the female characters, and he can bear it no matter how others make fun of him. He would only be tough with the senior who treated him the best. This book can be said to be a typical proof of why light novels are not popular on the Chinese Internet. This kind of literature is still suitable for awkward Japanese people, but it is not enjoyable enough for repressed Chinese people. I originally wanted to give it two stars, but I think the author is still very good. Although it is far from five stars, four stars are definitely there.

Chapter 52: The male protagonist - a classic love-sluggish harem male protagonist, whose advantage is that his strength is MAX. The heroines - each possesses unique skills (.) The plot - is the daily and systemic events in which the male and female protagonists interact. Disadvantage (personal feeling): The first one is that after clearly completing a system mission through Kill Penetration, there was no news after that (it seems that the person who was clearly mentioned was the senior sister from the Kyudo Club) and then it was forced to be written as one who didn't know and the other who didn't remember. [What are you writing if you don't guide the strategy (laughs)] (Of course, it may be that I take it for granted, but there is actually another girl who has been ten years old); the second one is the incident of a genius who turns into a cat. In a setting where fantasy events are obviously not common, a female protagonist with such a strong receptive ability appears, and then the male protagonist can discuss changing into a cat in private next time even after meeting her a few times? Nerves. (I think it's a lot more reasonable if you write that the protagonist turns into a cat after being taken in by his classmates. The first point may be that I am nitpicking, but the transformation into a cat is really weird. I still give you five stars, after all, it looks pretty good in daily life.

It's good to watch, that's why 31 chapters of a journey to another world are inserted into the plot. Isn't this the daily life of youth? What does it mean? I almost forgot about the previous daily life and skipped it directly [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Full marks for the first ninety chapters. The writing style is very unique. It is interesting and also deeply depicts the character of the male protagonist. This character is also interesting. The character image is very three-dimensional. He is not the conventional tool-man protagonist. However, when I read more than ninety chapters, there was a plot that I didn't like very much. It depicts the male protagonist partying with two good brothers. Among them, one of the male protagonist's good brothers took in a girl - a girl who was homeless due to family problems and ended up staying in his house. There is not much description of this girl in the previous article. It only mentioned that her original grades were very good, but it was hinted that due to family changes, her grades declined, so she formed a two-person study group with the male protagonist's good friend. I don't always like to see too much emphasis on the emotional drama of supporting characters in harem novels. When I think about it carefully, they are all daily novels-if it is fantasy, I don't worry about this so much. In daily writing, there is a lack of twists and turns. I lack a sense of involvement and interest in the supporting characters. Many authors deal with it, and the emotional drama of the supporting characters will not promote the plot. If it can be used to promote the plot, the tolerance may be higher, but not much. What I want to see is only the scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist - if a female character has a lot of scenes, I will think of her as one of the female protagonists. If she is not the female protagonist, then she does not deserve to have so many scenes and usurps the scenes that originally belong to the female protagonist. In fact, I can bear it after seeing this, but I don't know if it will get out of hand later. Then, all the male protagonist's good gay friends will be assigned a girlfriend, and their emotional development will be described in great detail. In the chapter comments, some people also mentioned the problem of gathering CP, but they were besieged. Some people asked, "This is youth and love" and "Since you don't want to see it, how did you see it here?" Le, would anyone read a novel just for the love story of a supporting character? Maybe, but I'm not When I see a single heroine, I block it. When I see a group portrait, I block it. When I see a harem article that devotes a lot of space to the emotional scenes of the supporting characters, I run away.

Personally, I think it's okay, as long as the author doesn't write anything poisonous Alas, the fireworks display is disappointing [face covering] If it weren't for my senior sister, I really wouldn't be able to watch it.

It's a very good novel. I checked it out once before but didn't read it. At that time, the rating was a bit too low. I was worried that it was a running book. I checked it again today to check the ratings. I finished it in one sitting. The novel has a strong flavor and the writing style is acceptable. It didn't feel boring. Each heroine has a distinct personality and the daily writing is also good. However, the male protagonist's oral habits in the early stage are very strange. I saw that the author mentioned it specifically and thought it was foreshadowing, but I haven't seen it so far. Except for some problems with my mouth habit and the details of two incidents, everything else is pretty good.

I feel that Hinata and her sister can be optimized, the cat plot and the different world dungeon can be optimized, and the Japanese players can add the senior sister, her mother and teacher. There are no problems with the other writing and character portrayal. It is a good work, except for the introduction of the system. The new author deserves encouragement, come on [Like]

I should have a registered permanent residence in Shanghai, go to a private high school in Shanghai, and my parents work overseas for a long time. In the morning, my sister crawls beside the bed and wakes me up to eat the breakfast she made by myself. When I go out, my cute childhood sweetheart and classmate are waiting for me to go to school. The new eldest transfer student in the class was my deskmate. She would pass small notes to me in class. The arrogant Juru Discipline Committee member would adjust my tie with a blushing face. The beautiful teacher from the health department would ask me about my relationship status with a smirk on her face. After school, there would be cute juniors waiting for me in the department where there were only ghost club members. They called me senpai with a happy face. The expressionless student council president approached me and smiled at the corner of my mouth in the name of checking the department. After school, the hot girls from the girls' school next door enthusiastically waited for me at the school gate to sing karaoke, and then they became jealous of the childhood sweethearts and classmates next to me. I took a shower at night and bumped into my younger sister who was getting dressed in the bathroom. My sister, who was drunk all night and was a socialite, came to the bed and hugged me and said that she couldn't get married and wanted to spend the rest of her life with me..."

Classic neon harem comic with a dull male protagonist, but it's not a complete escape at least.