Aotu World: Lei Zhe's End

I would like to call it the best writing style of fan fiction in the concave and convex world! ! ! My wife's description of Lei Zhe's appearance makes it seem like a noble, long-haired ice and snow beauty appears before my eyes just by reading the words! ≧∇≦The first time I saw Lei Zhe as the center! ! I really look forward to seeing the important characters grow up and forcefully fall in love with older beauties! ୧⩾Ꙫ⩽୨ I wake up every day and wait for updates from my wife! I'm also paying attention to the old Ford! Woohoo, such a good writing style, and the little thoughts you have about us are super cute! ᵟຶᴖ Mrs. ᵟຶ Must keep updating! ! ! ! ! [Love]

The writing is so good, like bitter amaro. After pushing Azhi for so many years, I still can't help but wonder about the secrets hidden behind him. No matter what, his core is very attractive, the charm of the eldest brother, the responsibility... Ah, after all, this article is really well written (damn it, how can foreign persimmons use emojis and still have bugs)

The plot is relatively slow and very detailed. The adjectives in it show the author's strong vocabulary, logic, careful thinking, and a little private design. But I think this private design is completely icing on the cake. For example, the gradient of ice blue at the end of the hair brings out the charm of Lei Zhe's appearance. The part describing the characters not only portrays the person vividly, but also shows the character's excellence. In short, if you can't adapt to the slow pace, it may be a bit painful. You can carefully savor the plot of the characters getting along, which is quite heartwarming. Then, it will describe a person's situation and other details in very detail, so it seems to be a long paragraph. There are quite a few such chapters, and they are worth savoring! Recommend everyone to invest! ! It's one of the few chaff in a pile of creative writings.

The plot of the original "Concave and Convex World" has been replaced by the original drama, and most people have undergone some changes in their personalities. For example: Holy Sky Star King is an old friend with Lei Zhen in the main drama, and has a very close relationship. However, in this novel, its setting has been greatly changed, becoming more cold-blooded and ruthless, and there is no pure friendship for the old friend in the main drama. There are also many self-created characters, and the writing style is medium to high level in Tomato. The only flaw is that the more important settings of the characters have not been clarified. For example: in the main drama, it can be seen that when Lei Shi (Brenda) was born, Lei Zhe was 7 years old and Rey was 5 years old (Lei Zhe was 2 years old, Lei Shi was 7 years old; Lei Shi was 5 years old). In addition, Lei Zheying had already been trained as a knight star by this time. Although this novel is a plot created by Seven Creation Society as "Bump World", some plot ideas are a bit confusing. After reading the previous twenty chapters, overall it can be regarded as a high-quality fan novel among the current Tomato Bump fanfics! It is also very creative, very "beautiful, powerful and tragic" in the post and introduction. However, I think that although the writing is good, the plot is a bit messy. Moreover, through the author's description, you can also feel the change in the appearance of the protagonist, His Highness, and his personality and other characteristics. Therefore, like me, I joined the circle in 2018 and I have always recommended His Highness to be cautious from the beginning of joining the show until now. , Because this will be inconsistent with our impression of His Royal Highness, it is best for those who recommend Zhe like me to be cautious. I have one thing to say, and the writing is indeed very good (this is commented on my mother's mobile phone. The original mobile phone account cannot be logged in. If I can log in, I will use a Zhe's account at home to give a second explanation to everyone, but I really don't want to read the follow-up, and I see that I am confused)

No, the author's writing style is really delicate, and his creative style really impressed me! ! The plot is logical and not a brainless novel, and the relationship between Lei Zhe and the others is really good! It's really beautiful. Oh my, I love you, author! ! Anyway, I gave these five stars ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's very interesting to watch, the characters are well set up, and the plot is well arranged. I hope I can continue to maintain the writing style. ̋(๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑) Zhe is really a boy's mother. I like it so much (ᕑᗢᓫ∗)˒Who is Zhe and the two male protagonists?

The teacher is great! The teacher's descriptions are really detailed. You can feel the teacher's attentiveness whether it is the scenery or the conversation, appearance, etc. The description is really a very mentally demanding task😭 (As for the appearance of the Zhe Temple, the teacher used a lot of words with different pictures to describe it, and it feels different every time😍😍😍). I'm very happy to see a book about Thunder Zhe🥰

After reading it for a while, I realized that there are no comments. The description is really delicate, the language is vivid and detailed, and the writing style is good, but it is lacking. But I want to ask, who made you like this? Is it the Seven Knife Society? இдஇ

The author's wife writes really beautifully! Moreover, the author's description of Lei Zhe's appearance and character is really good! The author's private design is also very nice! Anyway, I really like all the authors' books!

The plot is rich and colorful, full of fascinating characteristics, the characters are very full, the plot is eye-catching, and it is a rare good book. I hope the author can like this book more. However, the plot is a bit clumsy. I hope that the principle of Lei Zhe will come back in the future. I hope that those regrets can be reduced in this novel, such as the death of the uncle in battle.