Harry Potter: A Timid Little Mouse Comes to Gryffindor

Big. A small reminder: Can you put on the label that bullies will not fall in love with the bullied? Many people left after reading this article. The writing style is good, the story is beautiful, the narrative is strong, the plot and rhythm are good, the picture is imprinted in the mind at once, it is beautiful and beautiful [shy][shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Indescribably beautiful

The contrast between the smiling tiger Dark Lord and the cute little rat is a bit jarring. Don't worry, dear friends, although the original Peter is a hateful rat, the Peter in this book is completely different from that damn rat. He is really a kind and lovely boy! Magic rat with healing! At the beginning, I thought James and Xiaotian were a bit annoying, but now, the children have become kind and beautiful, and even Rat and Snape have become good friends. The predator didn't become a bully, and Lily and Xiaosi are still good friends, and they feel warm after seeing the dead body. Besides, Rat's inner activities are a bit rich. Often his words are astonishing. Especially the matter of calling Lord Dark Lord Lao Hei [laughing evilly] is so shocking to everyone, it really makes people laugh (laughing)

It's really strange. Maybe it's the writing that saves everything. It's unexpectedly well written, and the emotional development is not abrupt. Although Voldemort did a lot of bad things later, I think if Tom had received a lot of goodwill from the world at the beginning, he would probably only become a careerist.

I really like this article. I was attracted to it by the evil side of CP at first, but I think the author's writing style is really good. It really doesn't feel like the first time I write an article. At the beginning, I was still confused about how the emotional line between Voldemort and Peter Pedro would end. The way to hit a straight ball is unexpectedly appropriate? And this relationship is not even deep and hard, the writing is very harmonious, and Peter also has his own persistence, but I also hope that the ability to compete in the later stage will be a little stronger. I always like two strong people in love, and I don't think the comparison is too holy. It feels like the big brother next door.

Not attacking any college! Let me repeat the important thing again, only the stance is different, not to blackmail any college! Lightning protection: The male protagonist is weak due to his positioning, has no decisiveness in killing, has no grudges and grudges, has a growth flow, and will become stronger in the later stage. Lightning protection: The male protagonist will try his best to stop bullying, but will not take sides and target anyone unilaterally (the bully will wake up, the bullied will fight back, and everyone will grow) Lightning protection: There is a one-sided attraction between characters in the middle, but there is no cp//Also, the official cp is not removed

I feel very good, the author is great! Regarding some comments about the protagonist (cowardly, mediocre, too ordinary), I was wondering if you saw the back part? The reason for the poor transfiguration is because the wand used does not match, right? Is practicing animagus in the second grade just mediocre? He also fought back against some of the pranks played by James and Chris. He didn't just tolerate them, and it was not without reason for their reconciliation later on. I sincerely hope that everyone can be patient and comment after reading it [smile] It's rare for a novel like HP to have an emotional line that doesn't disobey me and allows me to follow my heart. Keep up the good work, the author! [Like][Like][Like][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

The setting is really novel, and the writing is also very good. It's just that kind of plain writing, but it's very, very addictive. The relationship between the two protagonists is not abrupt at all, it is gradual and not very OOC. It's the kind of feeling that after watching it, you still want to watch it twice or three times. The plot behind it is not very clichéd or cheesy and can be guessed at a glance. Instead, it is very novel and creative. Now what I look forward to most at 5 o'clock every day is reading a book written by my wife. So this book deserves 5 stars.

A very cute article, but I don't know how to interact with Tom? [Thinking] The current situation is that they are opposites, right?

This is the first HP time-travel fanfic I have read. I did not disassemble the cp. I have read Deha before. It is the first time I read the story of the previous generation. Moreover, the details written by the author are very exquisite (private settings are harmless), and the translation tone makes it feel immersive! I very much agree with the author's point of view. Weak people can also become protagonists, and ordinary people can also change the trajectory of their destiny. If you want to see strong protagonists and strong CPs, don't complain. Those who like the growth line can enter! Nowadays, there are too many crazy criticisms of cold protagonists. On the contrary, Peter, an ordinary child who is warm, kind and brave, and grew up in an environment of love, is really rare! Baby, you are an excellent Gryffindor~ Lao Fu is super charming! Originally, Riddle would be OOC if he could fall in love, so everyone put their minds aside and watched, but the author's character in big letters fit perfectly without any sense of inconsistency, and the interaction with Shushu was also sweet~ I really hope that this pair of CPs can get a second part to follow up... I think I will never be able to watch Voldemort and other CPs again... Gryffindor F4 hahaha, the growth lines of the four little ones are also very interesting. In the early stage, Potter and Sirius were really little bad guys, Peter had the guidance to change them, Remus no longer had to endure the pain for so long, the relationship between Lily and Petunia has also improved, and Snape was redeemed and walked out of his own way. They are all very good. In fact, I only remember Harry's things from the original novel, and I can't remember many things from the previous generation. Reading this is like watching the previous generation extra (Happy IF version), it's really good ~ Let's just treat it as a sideshow. The interaction with Lao Li is just giving out sweets, hahahaha, come and watch, come and watch~

To be honest, I don't have many interesting points in reading the article, but this book has found another interesting point for me, which is the three words "you don't see" that I am interested in! ! ! Ask yourself, except for the three words "You don't see", the author's writing style in this novel is still good. However, in the third year of high school, every time I write an essay, I see many classmates who like to write "You don't see" and "I will see" in the article. If I read it too much, I will feel stressed about these three words. It's not that Xiaosheng is looking for trouble, he just feels that writing "Don't you see" in vernacular writing has a dead-end feel like a shit basin with a gold rim (Xiaosheng's Chinese teacher has also repeatedly emphasized not to use this kind of thing in vernacular writing, as it will easily lower the perception score) However, I think the author seems to be a fan of "Jun Ke Ke". Reading through the novel, the number of applications of "Jun Ke Ke" is simply amazing. However, it's still the same sentence. Apart from using "Jun can see" a bit too much, the author's writing style is really good, otherwise I wouldn't have tied it [laughs][laughs][laughs]