Thanks for the Invite: Even a Sickly Overachiever Has Beasts to Back Them Up

It's good to watch, don't look at the temporarily low rating, there are no cheats in the system, the protagonist has been growing. Moreover, both the protagonist and the spirit beast have an ancient sense of beauty, which is much better than the stereotyped ones that rely on others to praise their handsomeness. The protagonist's character is less likable than Shuangwen's flamboyant character, but this black sesame-filled villain is more vivid and interesting, and the group portraits are also vividly described.

I finished reading the current article in one day. I personally feel very good after reading it. The only drawback is that the previous article is too complicated and there are too many characters. It is not easy to get through so many chapters since everyone is introduced once. But a novel that needs to supplement its own worldview requires that it be neither cumbersome nor impossible. It still depends on whether the reader can accept it. The main plot becomes more and more exciting as you go to the back, and you can see that it was carefully thought out. The characters are also gradually enriched, including warmth (because they are friends), selfish indifference (because they are geniuses and have their own arrogance), impulsiveness (because they have humanity), emmmmmmm, and sadness (group portrait [crying]) Summary: You can give it a try, the writing is good, as long as you can accept the verbosity of the previous article. It's a good article [Like]

I can just tolerate it a little bit in the first part, I hope it will be a killing spree later on, it feels a bit more group-like, each character has a different personality, it's nice to watch Don't do this to me. . Why did it end like this? . Is there a second part? .

Woohoo, baby Rongshi is so cute, Xiao Ji is so cute, Sanger is so cool, Ning Yu is so cool when she whips her whip, Xiao Che is so silly and cute, we are all very good and cute babies🥹🥹🥹

Let me say it for a moment here. I started writing reviews after reading the reviews of this book. I want some readers to be kind to the author. Well, how should I put it? I just have a little respect. I looked at the author's homepage. Well, he is a newbie. His writing style is a bit immature (I can't). Let's put it this way, it's much better than what I wrote anyway), but this is not the reason why you gave this book a low score... [It's just very speechless] Some people say that the supporting characters are more like the protagonists than the protagonists. Well, is there a possibility that this is called "side foil" in Chinese? Did the nine years of compulsory education go to waste? This book is not finished yet. Can some readers stop saying some incomprehensible things? If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. No one is forcing you to read it. Well, that's it for now. I don't want to say anything else. Well, there are really comments about this book. After seeing it so far, I don't know what to say. I think I quite like Xiao's character. At the beginning, I came in because of the setting of Bingyangzi. I had some doubts at the beginning, whether this was a bit contradictory to the theme of beast control. It was only later that I found out Xiao's identity (it is still a bit unclear now), but the plot development in it is quite logical, and it feels interesting to reveal the truth bit by bit. There are other supporting characters whose characters I quite like, well, that's it, I'll write about the others when I want to… en—— At first, I thought there would be a plot after the end of this plan, but there was nothing! ! ! There are also some "holes" in the plot (I can't say that they are completely true), and the ending is a bit of a group portrait (but not much). In my opinion, it's actually a bit "unfinished". I don't quite understand it. It's clearly at the end, but it just doesn't finish. Why is that? (I know there is some kind of open ending, but at least fill in the "little holes" in the article) The plot was good, but the ending was a bit rushed. Well, that's all I'll say——

I really like Rong Shi, his characters are very full, and this book is also in line with my taste. I was attracted by the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the little stone. Z said that Rong Shi is not very hot outside, and his heart is as hard as a stone. It is difficult for anyone to get into his heart, but for me Said, that's not the case. Xiao Shitou is obsessed with Top1. He will be sad for Xiaoyu's self-destruction. He will go into danger alone without telling Ji Jiangzhou because of the danger. He wants to avoid everyone's obvious love for him, but he is surrounded by love. How could he be indifferent? He wanted to eliminate the Hunting God not only because it was harmful to him, but maybe to him, it was also related to the group of companions and seniors around him. In my eyes, he has flesh and blood, so I am very sad. The ending is too short, and there is no answer to everything. It seems that everything Rong Shi has done, the resistance of this generation of geniuses, and the help of other beast masters are all fake. Like a mirror, it is like an illusory and fragile dream that can be broken at the touch of a touch. Rong Shi would not want such an ending, and Xanxi(?)'S efforts were not for such an ending. And why? Will Ji Jiangzhou die? That sentence of abandoning a puppy is a felony, idiot! Does that kind of infinite tenderness under the sternness mean that he is also dead? What about those people in Grisan? Luojia? Ji Xiang (?)? What should they do? Xiaoyu's revenge has not been avenged? What happened to Rong Shi next? He only left the Ice Spirit Deer, and he was in trouble. Who else could come to save him? It's very sad. I think the ending shouldn't be like this. They should all have a good ending! I spent several months waiting for updates and reloading, and it wasn't until today that I realized how painful it was to wake up from the dream. I feel sorry for Rong Shi, do I feel sorry for Ji Jiangzhou? I feel sorry for every brave and persistent beast master here, and I also feel sorry for myself. This book will become my obsession

It's very good-looking, but it was cheerful and relaxed in the early stage, and suddenly a big knife came in the back. Ning Yu died, and Ying Che was not so silly and sweet. They were all pretending. They were experimental products of the Hunter God Organization. Everyone died one by one. Who is left in the end?

It's pretty good. I just want Rong Shi to name the spirit beasts more affectionately. They are all called family members. The racial names are so weird and I always feel that there is a gap. The author's description of the master and the spirit beasts doesn't give me a real sense of their good relationship (mainly because they don't have names. I feel really uncomfortable when they are called by racial names😭). The protagonist's own characteristics are not shown in the early stage and there are introverted descriptions. The characteristics of the other characters are very conspicuous. The characteristics of the main character slowly emerged later on, except that I still didn't see anything in the story. I haven't figured out the reason for the physical foreshadowing. I felt a little aggrieved during the training camp, but the author also explained it (I had a good conversation with Ji Jiangzhou when I was about to say something off-topic... If the author doesn't like it, I didn't say it)

Not bad, there are basically no flaws. As long as the word count increases and reaches around 9:00, I don't think it's a problem.

The writing is really, really good (//∇//)! But author, I would like to ask you what the ending means? I don't want this open ending [crying] to feel like gossiping and not telling me anything in the middle of the story. I'm stuck, I can't go up or down, I feel so uncomfortable (╥╥)[cry][cry][cry]