Harry Potter: The Wanderer

The writing is so good and the ability to convey emotions is so strong. I felt so depressed when I read it [crying]. I was tricked into it by the introduction and thought it was just a simple and enjoyable article. . I didn't expect to have to pick my brain back up😥While watching, I had to figure out what these deep-thinking little snakes were thinking (I shouldn't have come in so cheaply, I can't get out now) I like the character of the protagonist very much, he is calm, cold and wise😋 Eloise, I wish you can hold the initiative in the future firmly in your hands, and I wish you freedom forever [Love]

It's a good read. It's not a popular sweet story. It's a bit sad, but overall it's not very sad. It's just that the heroine's baby has a very sad life experience. When I read it, it will seem more sad. It's not about falling in love and killing each other, not sweet. Personally, it's a sad story. The life experience is sad, not the plot. I hope the ending is he or be. It will make the whole book feel depressing or bland, but the author's writing is very beautiful. I hope that the prolific and productive food will not be enough to read. Finally, I hope that newbies will not be misled by some of my opinions. Only after reading it will I know whether it is to my liking. I personally think it is very interesting and I recommend reading it. That's it [make a face] [make a face] [make a face]

I found a treasure. I read it in one sitting today [Shy]. It's really beautiful. It's the highest quality HP fanfic I've read in the past few years. I've never seen this kind of character design. The character design of the heroine is really cool and very charming. I'm about to fall in love with the heroine's baby. [Admiration] and it's very stand-alone and not OOC at all. , Not inconsistent, unlike other heroines who write a lot of things in the first part and then become addicted to love later, but the heroine of this book is not like that at all. Even though she cares about Draco in her heart, she does not show it, and she will not let go just because she cares about him. Abandoning one's own interests, many places in it are very meaningful. When is it more beneficial to stand on which side, and with whom to cooperate, you will make greater profits. I haven't used my brain on the novel for a long time. I will work hard to update it. I love it, come on [blowing kiss]

Damn, can you update 300 chapters at once to scare me to death? [Thinking][Laughing evilly]

The omissions are appropriate, familiar plots are abbreviated, and new plots are unexpected. The career path that the heroine takes is also very unusual. From what I have seen so far, few take this route. It is very strange and interesting. I was attracted by the cover at first, and then my curiosity was aroused by the introduction. The more I read, the more I felt that I was right. Mainly career mixed with emotions, the pull between Heloise and Xiaolong is very frustrating Oh, who would have thought that this is my first time watching a romance hp. The more I read it, the more I like it. Just like the author's introduction, the pulling feeling is very well written, very good, and very exciting. The more I watch, the more I am attracted to the heroine, she is so charming. Happy Children's Day on June 1st. The more I read, the more I feel that the plot created by the author is really of good quality. The more I read, the more I get drunk. It's so delicious.

The heroine is beautiful, strong and miserable. I like the introduction of this book very much. I always feel that the heroine doesn't get enough revenge from the person who bullied the heroine. Then the heroine actually paid a lot of attention to Draco at first because of his kindness. Some. The heroine is indeed a bit pretentious, and I always feel that the heroine's behavior does not match her expression. But it's not considered OOC. The heroine is trying to suppress her emotions. I really like the outline of this book, but there are some problems with the shaping, which made me feel uninterested and it was a pity to abandon it. For example, if the heroine knew that the dean was not good to her, why would she go back during the vacation? For example, the heroine has to wear the gloves given by Draco when she goes back. Why not take them off or put on the old ones? (You saw the back part, so you deliberately let Draco misunderstand the plot?) It feels like it is forcibly shaping the tragic life experience of the heroine. The heroine knows that her life will be miserable when she goes back, so why should she go back? Is there a contract of sale? Then I felt that every time Draco was frustrated and the heroine went to him, she was silent when she approached. . ? It always makes me think that the heroine is pretending to be profound. (Draco is a little shaken, I don't understand why Draco falls in love with the heroine) The word calm is used throughout the text. The previous plot was all about fighting back against Slytherin's bullying. But it's okay to get through it later, the heroine is more focused on her career. Sometimes Draco's words were hurtful. Anyway, I think Draco is not miserable, he deserves everything. Then Draco did not help the heroine at all. He just made trouble for Potter and annoyed the heroine every day. He is possessive and then bothers the heroine. If the heroine doesn't respond, he loses his temper. If the heroine still ignores her, he sticks to her 😂 and the cycle repeats. One more thing: the heroine is not a good person. For me, it's a plus point for the heroine to have emotional scenes with other people, as long as the other people are clean

It's good to watch, but I hope the heroine will take a different path from Lao Fu. Complete the goal of two generations of Dark Lords: reform.

After reading it, all I could think about was the victory that would kill us. The stamina is still relatively large, and the story also has a lot of regrets about Quili, Theodore, and Ryan. The overall story feels depressing, not a sweet novel, but the author has also made innovations, which is different from the popular HP fan fiction. The heroine is very powerful and has a relatively tragic life experience, but she is very sober and even a little ruthless. Overall, it's pretty good. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very nice [like it], but the stamina is a bit strong [laughs]

This book is completely underestimated. The writing is very good and the heroine is very calm and rational. I personally think the reason for the low score is: 1. The male protagonist is Xiaolong, he is very popular but he is flirted with by the female protagonist and the female protagonist is not only in this relationship. 2. The heroine is unclean and will do whatever it takes to achieve her own goals, including her own body (I appreciate this very much) 3. It's too painful, and it fits the original work very well. Some people died, some didn't, and Dumbledore also died. It's too painful. But these constitute the unique charm of the heroine... I hope you are free

I hope that the heroine will be the third generation of the Dark Lord, and will not let Dumbledore scheme against him and find her own way to the crown.