Honkai: Star Rail: The Master Is Too Old, the Student Too Young

Name: Honkai: Star Rail: The Master Is Too Old, the Student Too Young
Author: Winter Downpour

崩铁：师父太老，徒弟太小

by Winter Downpour (冬天的暴雨)

Status: Completed
Length: 379k Words
Genre: Anime Fanfiction
Updated: 1y ago
English: Request a translation

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Synopsis

[What is there to say? Jingliu is the sole heroine, with her own dedicated storyline. Nihility to the very end, pawns on a chessboard. A little angst doesn’t count as real angst; invincibility doesn’t count as true invincibility. The madness is real, and so is the strength.]

As a transmigrator, She Chen has an unreliable System that keeps disappearing. Something is off about it, as if it were one of the Aeons’ myriad creations.

So why did he arrive eight hundred years early?

“Uphold this vow. We Cloud Knights are like clouds that veil the sky, guarding and protecting the Xianzhou!”

She Chen repeats the Cloud Knights’ motto, teaching it to the disciple he has raised since childhood.

Though there’s not much to teach. Everyone on the Xianzhou can recite it by heart.

“As a Cloud Knight, never let your weapon leave your grasp or your form fall apart.”

The mechanical recitation of the motto makes She Chen want nothing but to sleep.

Jingliu, practicing her swordsmanship, is full of drive. At twenty, she is at the height of her ambition, willing to endure any hardship for her ideals and revenge.

…

“The black sun of Nihility has completely swallowed him.”

“Jingliu, after living for a thousand years, have you ever loved anyone?”

“Yes.”

“Who? Is he still alive? I’ve never heard you mention him.”

With my own strength, I will slaughter the Denizens of Abundance and wipe out the Antimatter Legion.

Everything that threatens the future, disturbs the Xianzhou, or brings sorrow to Jingliu, I will destroy and lock away.

The Xianzhou’s future will know peace, with little conflict.

I want her to live forever beneath the peaceful skies of a golden age!

Stats

164Chapters

2kReads · 30 days

403.1kReads · all time

211Shelf adds, last 14 days

8.7Score

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In conclusion: It's worth watching. There are almost no flaws. As of the latest installment on July 4th, the protagonist has already reached godhood, so I don't plan to continue watching. Not only because of the foreseeable, imminent ending, but also because the ascension to godhood plotline made me lose interest. This is also why I didn't give it a perfect score.
64 likes1y ago
I'm so lovesick 😢 In the very end, the aged warrior launched a final charge against his former comrades and the enemy lurking in the shadows. Would he be able to achieve a victory as decisive as the autumn wind sweeping away fallen leaves this time?
62 likes1y ago
A young man from a humble background arrived in Luofu. He had served in the Cloud Cavalry and was skilled in both literature and martial arts. Unfortunately, his master was too old and his apprentice was too young.
51 likes1y ago
It's very well written and sweet. It features a single female lead, Shizuru, who is intelligent and has a rich sensory experience. Through different perspectives, it's so sweet it brought tears to my eyes. The rating is a bit low because there aren't many reviews. Author, keep writing! Friends, leave lots of positive reviews to boost the rating! 😆
20 likes1y ago
That night, Jing Yuan pondered for a long time. He thought of the countless Cloud Cavalry soldiers who had sacrificed themselves in the fight against Feng Rao. Had the sacrifice of so many soldiers resulted in such a mere Luo Fu Immortal Ship? He thought of the vast Longevity Race—what would become of them? Jing Yuan was deeply unwilling. He made a decision.
17 likes1y ago
Hmm... I think my writing is okay.
16 likes1y ago
The character development became chaotic after Yuegong's death. Marshal Hua felt like a two-dimensional character, only serving as the protagonist's mouthpiece. Moreover, his dialogue with Jingliu gave the impression that his sole purpose was to use the sword. While good character development is commendable, it felt somewhat one-sided and overly focused on self-sacrifice.
12 likes1y ago
Up to chapter 60, there weren't any particularly offensive or problematic moments. Overall, it's a very good book, and I feel it should get a rating of 9.3 Or higher (though Tomato's rating might vary). Hopefully, it will maintain that rating.
12 likes1y ago
That's incredibly impressive! The rapidly moving knife made my brain spin. It wasn't until I finished reading it that I suddenly realized it was a knife. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა
11 likes1y ago
I'm dying of laughter... The knife is dead... Hehehe... Haha ...
10 likes1y ago