Honkai: Star Rail: The Master Is Too Old, the Student Too Young

Let me start with the conclusion: it's worth watching. There are almost no poisonous spots. As of the latest part on July 4th, the protagonist has become a god, so I don't plan to follow up anymore. Not only because of the finale that can be met and so close at hand, but also because the plot arrangement of ascending to the gods made me lose interest. That's why I didn't give it full marks. Destiny Star God, what a vast and messy throne... The protagonist's humanity after becoming a god, because he has almost got rid of the negative state of nothingness, has even increased compared to before becoming a god, and he can continue to have sex with Jingliu. I lost interest when I saw this. While it's a good ending and I'm happy for the characters, I won't enjoy it. But the quality of the parts before the end is above the standard among Bengtie fans. Besides, I think many people will like and want to see this ending. All in all, worth a look

Lovesick [crying] At the end, the old soldier launched a final charge against his former comrades-in-arms and enemies in the dark. This time, will he still have a victory like the autumn wind sweeping away fallen leaves?

A young man came to Luofu who came from a poor background. He had served in the Yunqi Army and was capable of both civil and military skills. But it is a pity that the master is too old and the apprentice is too young.

The writing is very good, very sweet, the single female protagonist is quiet, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the senses are rich. Through different perspectives, it is so sweet that I shed tears. Because there are few people who have commented, the rating is a bit low. Please keep writing, friends, and the more comments you give, the higher the rating will be! [Laughing out loud]

That night, Jingyuan thought for a long time. He thought of the tens of thousands of soldiers of the Yunqi Army who had sacrificed their lives in the fight against Fengfeng. Could it be that the sacrifices of thousands of soldiers were exchanged for such a Luofu Immortal Boat? He thought of the vast number of immortal species. What should you do? Jingyuan was very unwilling. He made a decision. Even if he falls to pieces, even if he fails, he becomes a demon. He is not afraid either, because he knows how to hunt. On June 16, Jing Yuan came out of the Linyuan Realm and made a shocking statement when convening a meeting of Luofu Level 3 cadres. "Before, I led you to conquer abundance. Now, I will lead you to conquer abundance again."

Hmm... I think what I wrote is okay

The character creation was chaotic after Yue Gong's death. Marshal Hua felt like a paper man whose role was to be the protagonist's mouth substitute. In the dialogue with Jingliu, I felt that the role of this character was entirely for the sword. In fact, the character was well portrayed. This is a good thing but a bit one-sided and too sacrificial. I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good. I just feel that this writing method does not seem to be emotionally invested. As a result, I feel nothing at all later. The protagonist plunges into nothingness and forgets everything. There was almost no painting, and I couldn't feel the pain at all. Moreover, seeing that now, the whole world can't stand the talent of Jingliu. Every time there is a new scene, two or three inexplicable people come to say, wow, "Is this really 21 years old?" Or something like a child. The look is a bit uncomfortable, and the insertion is too rigid, which looks a bit like the word "water". The emotional shaping is also a bit stiff, and it is difficult for me to relate to and resonate with it. Well, compared with the high-scoring works I have read before, it lacks some flavor, but writing novels is not easy in itself. Just being able to write it and allow so many people to read it is already amazing. I hope it can improve the accumulation and the description techniques can be richer. This work is very good.

Up to Chapter 60, there are no uncomfortable poisonous points. Overall, it is a very good book. I feel that the score should be 9.3 Or higher (but the Tomato score is uncertain). I hope it can maintain it.

It's so shameful, so so shameless! The swift knife makes my brain spin, After reading it, I suddenly realized that this was a knife. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

Laughing to death... Knife to death... Hehehe... Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!