After I Severed the Ancestor’s Love, the God Regretted It

Positive reviews: "This novel can be called a treasure in the world of fantasy romance! The setting of ancient times is novel, and the plot of the ancestor possessing a stupid girl is very imaginative. The collision of metaphysics and modern wealthy families produces a wonderful chemical reaction. With the blessing of mind reading, the sand sculpture plot is full of laughter, and the whole process is hilarious; the CP line is sweet and sadistic. The interweaving and delicate interaction make people unable to stop reading. The author's narrative rhythm is tight, and the fantasy elements and romance lines are perfectly integrated. It is both exciting and emotional. Each chapter is full of surprises. It is a perfect meal. It is highly recommended to readers who like relaxed sand sculpture style! " Recommended copywriting: "🔥[Metaphysics + Traveling through the past and the present + Sand sculpture sweet pet] High energy is coming! The ancestor's physical body was destroyed, he possessed the silly girl from Blue Star, and he used his mind-reading skills to play tricks on wealthy families. All ghosts would avoid him! ✔️ The ancient and modern stories are mind-blowing, the metaphysical setting is novel, and the plot is so funny that it makes you pound the bed; ✔️ The silly girl counterattacks, the boss protects the shortcomings, the CP interaction is so sweet, the sugar addicts are ecstatic; ✔️ A 480,000-word completed novel with 143 chapters completed in one go. Say goodbye to the hassle of catching up! Fans of fantasy romance + paranormal genres rush! Click "Free Reading" to unlock the ancestor's modern and hilarious journey of cultivating immortality, and you won't lose money by investing in it! " Disadvantage analysis: 1. Plot rhythm: The early foreshadowing is a little lengthy, some plots advance a little too quickly, and the turns are abrupt, resulting in a lack of logical coherence. The reader needs to be patient and enter the worldview. 2. Character creation: The protagonist (silly girl, ancestor) has a clear image, but the supporting characters (such as members of a wealthy family, characters from the supernatural world) are thinly portrayed, with obvious tool-like attributes, and lack of depth and memory points. 3. Integration of themes: Although metaphysics, mind reading, sand sculpture and other elements are rich, some settings (such as "three souls are missing" and "thousands of ghosts change color") are not fully developed. The combination of fantasy and realistic wealthy families can still be optimized to avoid a sense of suspension. 4. Publicity and audience: There are not enough people to rate it (only 4901 people read it), and the correlation between tag coverage (such as "President" and "Wealthy Family") and the core plot (fantasy through ancient times and the present) is weak, which may cause the target audience (fantasy and romance lovers) to easily ignore it when searching. It is necessary to strengthen the precise positioning of the subject matter. Summary: The work is creative and dazzling, and the style is easy to decompress. It is suitable for readers who pursue a sense of refreshment and sweet pets. If the plot can be further optimized and the characters are fuller, the potential will be greater. The overall shortcomings do not hide the good points, but it is still a fun novel worth trying.

There are too many adjectives and modifiers. A look, an action, an accessory, and even the folds of clothes can be described with a long string of modifiers. It makes my head hurt to read. It is not easy for the author to write. Please give me some encouragement.

I finished watching it and it was quite interesting. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. Their families are very good. The ending is very sad. I can't bear to leave my family. (The ending of the male and female protagonists is considered be, haha. It doesn't matter. Let's do the extra.) The extra is even sadder. There are only three brothers left, right? My brother is old and separated from his sister after eating hot pot 😢 😢 😢, sad

It's super exciting, come on! Try to update! And that big one! Can I ask you a little question, that is, can you put the picture directly in the article, so that readers will be more motivated to read on? 🤭🤭🤭🤭

It looks good, it looks great, come on, keep working hard

The ancestor wore it on a silly girl and spoke psychologically like a child of several years old. 2 Was beyond expectations. Withdrew

Finally there is a novel that is not about reading the mind of a real and fake daughter, I love it 😳😳

It's very interesting and interesting. I hope the author won't stop updating it. Several of the books I've been following have been interrupted. If this happened to this one, I would really cry to death.

Looks good, I have a feeling. The finale is brutal. But don't, I can't bear it. As long as the heroine regains her memory in the finale. If I don't forgive the male protagonist, I probably won't be able to watch it anymore. I like sweet ones best. If you don't regain your memory and stop being with the male protagonist, I guess I'll have to abandon the article, [][]

Very interesting, come on author