I Picked Up a Down-and-Out Girl from the Start, but I'm Really Not a Creep

So damn pretty! ! ! This is definitely something that our super awesome Liang Bu Shi Shi has put a lot of thought into writing. The writing style is superb, and he often inserts some amazing descriptions of the environment between paragraphs. The artistic conception comes up immediately and is completely integrated into the article. It is simply too powerful. The growth of the characters is also described very delicately, making it feel like they have slowly grown from high school students to adults. Compared to the second half of the college chapter, I still prefer what happened in high school in the first half. The four main characters are all very three-dimensional, and what happens is very interesting. Especially the images of the eldest brother and Laoban, the author laid a lot of foreshadowing in the front, and connected many things when recycling, which is really eye-catching. (I still prefer the middle part where Lao Ban's story is inserted) The male and female protagonists are pure and sweet, and Su He is so cute. I really like it. Another pair of chuunibyou are also well written. Except that the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops a bit abruptly at the beginning, the rest of the logic is completely connected. Coupled with the author's fresh writing style, after reading it, I feel that the sky just after the exam is brighter [Thinking] [Thinking] However, the author has greatly used the method of time and space travel to skip many time periods. Otherwise, I think the high school chapter could have dozens more chapters, just about the daily life during the winter vacation and the 100-day pledge to the college entrance examination. So I have seen some, but now there are still too few, not enough [crying] I don't think college is as good as high school. Although he can drive, the plot seems to focus mainly on the male and female protagonists, and the other characters have very few roles. I still want to see the author build a larger system. Moreover, after the male and female protagonists have careers, they feel that time goes very fast. Basically, it was brushed off in a few months, and many of the foreshadowings laid before were not recovered in time. I also want to watch my roommates get singled out one by one [face covering] and then many of my favorite characters don't have time to appear. The most important thing is that the ending is too abrupt. Maybe it's because I don't have much literary literacy. On that peaceful afternoon, I read the finished novel and cried all night in the bathroom [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Yes, the long review of Chapter 252 was also written by me in a fit of madness. I really saw this book when I was about to take the exam. I almost went crazy studying at school, and I looked forward to reading it for more than half an hour when I came back in the evening. Then I just saw the previous one that morning, thinking about waiting for the update on time in the afternoon, but it ended [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I always felt that there were still many stories that had not been told, many things that had not been done, and it ended here. It's okay, at least we will support you! Get up and read this book [laugh][laugh][laugh] Let me copy the part where I went crazy [smile][cry][smile][cry][smile] so that everyone can feel my despair at that time: Being displaced without losing anything, what on earth are you doing and why? Why does it end well? Why? I just saw Chapter 250 this morning, thinking about waiting for the update on time at 4pm for the first time, but you ended up [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I really want to cry. I really like this book. I am going to have a blast studying it in school during my final exam this week. I just look forward to reading your book for a couple of hours every night. Seeing their career flourishing, I originally thought that there would be a more exciting story in the future. I could write it for a long time and finish it on a good day (actually I didn't want it to finish at all). I came back every night and looked forward to two chapters, but it ended today. No! ! ! ! ! ! ! No, I'm going to the toilet to cry some more.

Worth watching, don't look at the low ratings Although the beginning is a bit cliche, the character of the male protagonist who is not like the template male protagonist is quite novel. The emotional description is also very delicate. The small details of daily life are quite warm. The emotional line between the homeroom teacher and Kana Sakurako is also well laid out. However, the detailed plot is a bit abrupt when inserted into the main plot. After reading the main plot, it will be much better to look at the emotional line of the homeroom teacher. It may be better to mark the extras. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also quite funny. The female protagonist is timid and slow to react when doing things. Especially when the female protagonist says "I believe you, I believe whatever you say", this is too destructive to anyone. Straight-ball heroine, focusing on sincerity [laughing and crying] I hope the author will be faster, I want to read Jiang Qianzhou's story

After reading it, it can be seen that the author wrote it very carefully. The story between the male and female protagonists is very sweet, deeply rooted in people's hearts, and full of redemption. Come on, I hope the author can create better pure love sweet stories in the future! A small suggestion: some short stories of characters can be written at the end of the full text, otherwise it will easily affect the perception. Also, the ending feels too weird. It feels a bit weird to go directly to the proposal after the game is successful. I can write some more daily life in it, and then write the proposal. But the author still writes very well, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next work [Love] [Love] [Love] (already listed in my "Pure Love God of War" series)

After the male protagonist was reborn, his IQ was online. There were no deliberately disgusting plots in the female videos, but the description of the emotional line was a bit bland. It was said that the relationship between the male and female protagonists was gradual, but it was already confirmed that they liked each other in the 50th chapter, and it felt like the progress was slightly faster.

Overall, the plot of this book is very good, and the author writes it well, but I personally feel that the author's writing power is a bit insufficient after about 200 chapters. The early plot is mainly written around their relationship, but by the end of the story, the relationship is basically finished, and there is no preparation for the subsequent plot of the studio. My suggestion to the author is to make the emotional line longer and wait until the end to complete it with the main plot, or to find and introduce a new point that readers of this book can follow. Personally, I feel that the former one is easier, and the latter one is a bit more difficult to find and write, but I think if it is written according to the second method and written well, it will really be a masterpiece), but overall I really like this book [laugh][laugh]

It's really good to read. This novel is the first one I've ever read. I've read many other novels, but most of them stopped reading halfway through. The rest were skipped many chapters to finish. This book is very good in terms of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. , Especially in terms of the heroine's dependence and trust on the hero, the other supporting characters are also good. When the hero and heroine encounter difficulties, friends around them come to help, which really makes me feel very touched. Overall, this book is the first in my heart. I hope the author can continue to work hard and succeed in his studies.

It's a book worth reading. The author's writing is really good, but it feels like it ends in a hurry. It may be because I have a withdrawal reaction every time I finish reading the book. I always feel that the story of Su Chen and Su Chen should not end, but at least I saw Su Chen's wedding. Although the written story of Su Chen has ended, I wish all readers and authors here, and hope that you will continue to write the rest of the story in the book of your own life!

The plot is a bit warm and bland, so it felt boring to me. But the reason why I was bored was not because the plot was bland, but because the supporting characters couldn't attract me. If it's a warm and bland daily interaction story, I only like the scenes where the male and female protagonists get along, such as expressing their affection for each other and flirting with each other. This book is actually quite good. There are no disgusting male and female characters (there is a bit, but the scenes disappear after a few paragraphs), and there are no male characters or female characters that pester the heroine. This is really praised. The relationship between the male and female characters is impeccable, the love is endless, and the soft beauty is by the side. It is particularly praised.

It's worth watching, the plot is relatively coherent, the writing is average, but it may not be very original in terms of creativity. The characters of the male and female protagonists are well portrayed. The early plot of the two of them liking each other in high school without revealing it was very attractive to me. The male protagonist started his own business when he was in college. I personally don't like this kind of penetration and it's hard to comment on it. It is worth watching just from the daily love life of the male and female protagonists. Let me briefly talk about the subsequent plot. There are fewer love plots in the next dozens of chapters. Personally, I think this is one of the few shortcomings of the book. The author's writing style of business writing is still a bit rusty, and some of it lacks stamina. But I still say that: I think the previous love plot is comparable to a 9.3-Point game. It is a pity to end with the plot of entrepreneurship.

Nice! Come on! Dear author, can you add a character who likes to cultivate immortality in the college chapter? Ahem! The name can be Li Chuyi, um... The setting is probably that the King of Han Dynasty from the Tang Dynasty Fairy Kingdom in the Mortal Star Domain in the Great World of Qingfeng was accidentally involved in the turbulence of time and space while traveling in the starry sky, and came to a place called Earth.