[Infinite Flow], [Multiple Types of Dungeons], [Ensemble Cast], [Supernatural Talents], [A Slightly Slow Start], [Not Mindless / Plot Twists], [No Female Lead]
When Chen Mingsheng woke up, he found himself at a high school he had never heard of.
An eight-person dorm, boys and girls rooming together, and... seven complete strangers.
“Hey, newbie, want to stick with me? Otherwise, you might not make it through tonight!”
In the eerie high school, rules were posted in every corner:
[Lights out by 10:30 p.m. Violators are responsible for the consequences.]
[Finish your meal within 10 minutes. Violators are responsible for the consequences.]
[Respect your teachers.]
Beneath these seemingly ordinary rules lurks a deadly threat.
The dungeon NPCs may seem like ordinary people one second, then reveal their murderous intent without warning the next.
The gratitude chants during morning exercise, the strange woman in the infirmary, the shocking history between the math teacher and the principal...
[Welcome to Vertical Flame High School]
[Current Fate Points: 0]
[Main Quest: Survive for ten days]
[Please complete the quest as soon as possible!]
I just finished reading the first story. I really like it. I have filled in all the pitfalls in the first story. I am very satisfied with it, haha. When Dr. Mumu said that he had a boyfriend, I realized at that time why this male doctor stayed in the medical office for so long, and I felt like "Wow, this is all clearly written, how good it is." And the most important thing is that it doesn't have the diaosi flavor of other authors (not all of them). I really like reading this type of novels. As a result, many novels of this type have young women who are still charming. Let me describe some of them who are fragrant and beautiful, but also have physical discomfort. I wouldn't do this, I feel respected. Come on, come on⛽
Fortunately, it's not bad for a newbie, but there are still many areas that need improvement. It can be clearly seen that I want to sublimate the theme of the copy, so every time I encounter some "things", I will talk about some big principles, but it is a bit abrupt, lacks realism and feels like it is shoehorned in. You don't have to explain everything clearly, you can also feel it by looking at the changes in the characters and the plot (for example, if a person is withdrawn, you don't need to write that he is withdrawn, but that he always stays alone, speaks in a cold manner, and refuses to get along with others). This may be too difficult, but readers definitely don't want to be forced to read some big principles. I also saw that I wanted to be more cheerful and made some internet memes, but there was always a sense of dissonance. Secondly, I feel that the characters don't have much sense of crisis, especially Song. An ordinary person who traveled to a dungeon and knew the rules of the strange story must be able to do as little as possible and talk as little as possible. However, he took it too much as an ordinary world. For example, things like being killed while drinking water are at least a way to die after a day or two when you find that you have not violated the rules and relax a little. The part about surviving the physical education teacher is a bit too forceful. There are also some questions, such as asking a question about talent. Depending on the person you replied to, you should also know the question. Furthermore, it is understandable that the worldview structure is not discussed at the beginning, but at the end of the first copy, more needs to be discussed, such as situation, reasons, talent level, talent level, organization, props, etc. Maybe you don't have an outline, so you don't have it at all, but it's better to prepare early and be better. Although I think it will definitely be explained, I still want to remind you why they made the second copy so quickly. What was done well may be that it talked about the differences between the protagonist and Song in facing bullying and being bullied (it must be more than this, but unless it is particularly good or I just remembered it, I won't mention it if it makes sense). Personally, I still prefer the kind-hearted protagonist, so please keep it up. I forgot about the others. I may remember it next time when I have enough experience. But it looks like this one is going to be a hit.
The first copy of Chapter 51 is over and contains many twists and turns. I hope that all readers will at least read the first copy before abandoning the book [Sending my heart]
The reversal in Chapter 51 is indeed unexpected, and the copy components of this book are a bit complicated 🤦 quite novel.
I just finished reading the first copy. It's well written and exciting. I just want to ask, is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, I will wait and see. If there is no female protagonist, I will continue to watch 💕 @
It's good to watch. I've seen too many cold-blooded and ruthless protagonists, so it would be nice to see this one with some humanity.
The first dungeon is quite interesting, with twists and plots. Although some characters were not very good at the beginning, they gradually got better later on. I hope you won't stop updating.
Five stars are encouragement, not the quality of the book. I can only say that the food is tasteless. The only thing is that the food is tasteless.
Come on, author, come on!
The first copy is quite nice.