I Founded a Sect in the Real World

Overall it's good, but personally, the protagonist's sister doesn't give me very good senses, and the protagonist's innate body is also assisted by the system. Not to mention that this system does not directly improve the strength, and it has no other functions. Give me one, the protagonist is strong but not strong, and the system is useful but not.

It's okay, there are some flaws, the characterization is a bit lacking, there's no point in pretending to be cool, but luckily there are only a few, maybe it's because of the plot. I think it is necessary to compare the strength levels of the ferocious beasts with the strength levels of cultivators. Write it down clearly, otherwise some people will not be able to understand it. It can be updated faster, mainly because few people follow it after reading it, and it will take a long time to read. I hope the author's writing skills will become more and more mature. The main thing is to be faster. It seems that this is supposed to be a group portrait article. It can leave some descriptions of social conditions and popularize the basic knowledge of cultivating immortals to the society. It will be better to select people to enter the sect and get started and develop quickly.

The front is mediocre and good, but the back is very fond of it.

Personally, it feels pretty good.

First a little support

Not bad Sikuyi

Very beautiful, highly recommended

It's pretty, but it's a bit missing.

I always feel like there's something weird about it that I can't put my finger on, but it's okay.

It's super, super, super good-looking, thank you to the author!