I Told You, I’m Not Making Up My Novels!

I love the connection between dreams and reality! Yan Linyuan punched the leader of the Blood Evil Sect in his dream, but in reality he punched the assassin unconsciously. He even joked that "the Blood Evil Sect's strength is average". This kind of detail is so shocking. It didn't make Goldfinger appear sudden, and the setting of "bringing the ability to dream into reality" was implemented very naturally, making it very enjoyable to watch.

As an urban cultivation genre, the entry point of this book is quite special. It does not start with cultivating immortality directly, but relies on dreams to unlock abilities. It also combines the setting of writing novels, which is quite fresh. The protagonist's personality is not a cheating type, he is a bit reserved but not timid at critical moments, and his interaction with Mu Jianxi is also relatively natural. The shortcoming is that the description of some battle scenes is not detailed enough, and I hope it can be strengthened in the future.

It's a very interesting book about urban immortality! The beginning is very exciting. After Xiao Yan returned to reality from the world of immortality, many strange things happened one after another. First, he encountered a bus accident, the man in black, Lei Bin... I felt that everything was extraordinary and interconnected! The identity of the heroine Xiao Mu also feels very unusual, like she pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. I also like the school beauty Xiao Su, she is gentle and beautiful! When I saw the scene later, I really looked forward to the scene of cultivating immortals in the city. The two map sections were cut back and forth, and I learned all the troublemakers. I really felt good about cultivating immortals in the city! There is a kind of imagination in the novel that is implemented in reality, and it really feels like immersion!

It's okay, the plot is not mind-numbing, and the setting is novel and not cliche. The protagonist has a gentle personality, and the interaction with the school girl Mu Jianxi is a bit ambiguous, not greasy and very comfortable. The Dragon Soul Bureau's investigation line slowly unfolds, with just the right amount of suspense and not too complicated. The shortcoming is that the shaping of some supporting characters is not three-dimensional enough. I hope there will be more ink later.

The setting where dreams and reality intertwine is so fresh! The protagonist dreams of cultivating immortals every fifteen days, and writes his true experience into a novel that has become a hit. In reality, he actually awakens to the abilities in his dreams. He is not suspended or bloody, and the more he reads, the more he becomes obsessed with it.

I think the setting of this book is quite good. As for the setting you wrote about the time when you were born and traveled through time to cultivate immortals, you were half asleep. The time period when you first awakened to spiritual energy in reality feels like a silly and clear [smile] [smile] [smile]. I quite like the interaction between Mu Jianxi, and then there are quite a lot of forces in your profile. Can you give me a little more foreshadowing? [Laughing evilly] Then I think I can write more about cultivating immortals. I almost thought I was reading an urban novel [face covering] [face covering], and then from just awakening Qi, to gangsters, to getting to know various families, the pace is quite good, I can understand this book very quickly [Like] Personal suggestions are for reference only. If you are offended, please treat it as if you didn't see it: The female protagonists in sweet novels can communicate more frequently, and it would be better to go to Shura Field. Three women in one drama [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh] A female pendant that can liven up the atmosphere with comedy, increase the protagonist's pretentiousness, and can also make the harem get angry [sneered laugh][sneak laugh][sneak laugh] follow the protagonist into committing crimes. Then I hope that the protagonist can be written more calmly, not so aggressively, and that the role of taking care of the mother and comforting her should be more calm. . . Strangers in the world are written as "Qi", and those who cultivate immortality are written as "Zhen Qi". I feel better if they are separated. It is recommended to write an outline and break it down into more detail if necessary. In the previous plot, it was also written that the protagonist longed for more Qi and hoped to arrange some plot. After all, squeezing out a little bit of Qi like toothpaste and the slowly increasing Qi are two different feelings. Are you just trying to get rid of it? I didn't say that. Now that I've finished reading Chapter 114, I'm looking forward to your next plot. I declare again, "Personal suggestions are for reference only. If I'm offended, please treat it as if you didn't see it."

Came from book shortage. It certainly lives up to its reputation. Nice writing!

This is a novel that combines dreams and reality and is narrated using a dual-line narrative writing technique [Note] [Note] [Note] I hope all readers will like the plot concept and character creation of this novel! ❤️ Dear readers, follow our Xiao Yan's footsteps to feel the feeling of being modern and ancient for a while! [Chigua] You can go and experience a series of stories that happened around Yan Linyuan and the characters you met. If you have any suggestions and ideas, please discuss them in the comment area! [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned] Finally, do you really think I made up this novel? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It is a very novel novel about urban immortality. The male protagonist enters the world of cultivation through dreams every fifteen days and masters enough skills to cultivate immortality. However, in reality, it is impossible to practice without spiritual energy, but everything changed after an explosion in a car accident. He can also use his skills in the world of immortality in real life, thus unfolding a series of stories. Because the protagonist has been upgraded to the ceiling in another world, some of his actions after becoming capable in reality do not feel too exaggerated. What is attractive is the setting of the protagonist's dream transition. The character descriptions are also very rich, and the pace is not sluggish. Recommended recommended recommended! ! !

Love this combination of suspense and cultivation elements! The protagonist encounters a car accident with "no survivors" but survives. The Dragon Soul Bureau comes to investigate the man-made attack. The school girl traveling with him not only has a suspicious identity, but also hides a small black instrument. With the subsequent appearance of assassins and mysterious organizations, every line of the story makes people want to read more. The protagonist adapts to the awakening ability while dealing with these crises, and the rhythm is controlled just right.