Da Li: From the Start, I Break Into the Underworld

The following is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you. I personally like Dali quite a lot, and this fanfic is okay. I just want to say that the title of this work is wrong. I suggest that it be better to try a book with a title like "Being a Supporting Role in Dali". After all, the title of the book is "Spokesman of Hell", no matter what, the protagonist is Sun Baizhan, not Jiang Nan. Just go over the plot of the original work appropriately. Keep describing the plot of the original work and then continue with some changes. The feeling is not much different from watching the original work. The biggest advantage of fan works is that they add the author's own settings or the author's original stories within the larger framework of the original work. There are indeed very few Dali fans. No matter what, I hope the author can try to finish this book. I will still support the author Dali. Big cheers for the author!

To be honest, this character design is very good. Either he has been following Jiangnan, or the part where he went to Neon Country felt a bit fragmented. But it is also good that Senbonzakura's relationship has progressed and she has reached the original timeline. It's not that boring. Overall, it's pretty good. It's more cheating than Jiangnan's, or even more cheating. It's interesting. Anyway, it shouldn't be so low. I feel it's about 8.8 Points.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for five years, and Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for eight years. Lan Wangji has been waiting for Wei Wuxian for 13 years. Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk for 500 years, and Yu Wenkuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years. Huacheng has been waiting for Xie Ling for 800 years. Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for 3,000 years, and Zi Yao waited for Feipeng for 3,000 years. Xuan has been waiting for Xu Changqing for three lives, and I have been waiting for your update. One day, one month, one day, a frail young girl was lying beside the bed, but with a slight smile on her lips, she stretched out her hand, trembling slightly, tears glistening at the corners of her eyes, and murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update"…

The writing is pretty good. I currently have the idea of ​​​​creating my own plot. The setting is also good, and it does not overpower the protagonist. The previous plot is not very good, it is a bit awkward and forced to pass the plot. Overall, the plot can be rated as average, the writing can be rated as above average, and the logic can be rated as average. You can read it when you are short of books.

I heard that the author is a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling with ulterior motives.

I would like to send you a five-star Dali. There are very few fanfics, and they are difficult to write and prone to bad luck. Last time, I saw a guy with dragon abilities being banned. I wrote about 100 of them, but they were all gone afterwards 🤦

Come and read with the author I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not Watching dramas, not traveling, not getting sick. I will not play games, no water Text. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, persevere, and work hard Fighting, advocating first-class, striving to create brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and achieving success through repeated practice Steel is worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. Make As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent Author. Code writing is my bounden duty. I have endless potential and I am not afraid of taking risks. Bitter. I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet literature, I Voluntarily dedicate your life to coding, day by day, and night by night.

Doesn't anyone really think that this is an Easter egg story for Dali fans? It's not like other Dali cool articles. Although they all downplay Jiangnan, it is not obtrusive. Instead, it seems like another main line. I am really touched. The special identity of the protagonist makes up for many regrets. There are also many foreshadowings, such as the system, Lan, Chen Dao in the underworld, and the linkage with another world line. I can make this book a god among Dali fans. I hope the author will persist in

A very good fan of Dali, and because the protagonist is only in the Dark Night Army, he can very well avoid the poisonous points of Dali in the early stage. I just feel like the protagonist's character is not strong enough

The main line of our story is clear but full of reversals. From the foreshadowing at the beginning to the response at the end, every twist is unexpected but reasonable. For example, the design of [Key Plot Example] not only promotes the growth of the characters, but also coincides with the core of the theme. The rhythm control is comparable to that of a suspense blockbuster, making people unable to stop reading it.