After Losing the Holy Sword, I Started Saving the World?

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

The character descriptions are relatively detailed, and it can be seen that the author's skills are quite good, and he is constantly improving. Compared with most other novels of the same type, it is much better. It can also be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the plot. Except for the beginning, which is a bit nonsensical, there are almost no poisonous points, but the pace is too slow. What's regrettable is that the heroine has almost no posting sessions. The most intimate interaction between the two heroines, which is nearly a million words long, except for a kiss at the beginning, is actually just drinking blood, not the neck? In the latest video, the attitude of Coconut Juice is just "hope she's still alive" when he doesn't know Lin Han's current situation? ? [What] It's too indifferent. . If you give out more candy, there won't be so few people watching. Pansy, you really need to learn how to write emotional dramas. As a transformation novel, it doesn't have the characteristics of a transformation novel at all. Do you really not know what everyone wants to see? Are you really willing to accept this little achievement for a book of such high quality? The pace itself is slow. If we don't put in some exciting news to retain everyone, the situation of raising books will become more and more serious. But it is still a good book. I hope this review can be helpful. There is hope for the future.

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The plot of the story is very good, but it feels a bit awkward when taking missions and switching scenes to advance the main plot. For example, the exchange of information between the Alchemy Brotherhood did not express how secret the information is, so it looks like the protagonist is stupid. It feels like they did not exchange the information equally and the protagonist suffered a loss. Of course, there are advantages. For the subject of sex change, this one has a rare feeling of falling in love. It is not like other stories where the heroine harasses and forcibly joins the story. This book is well written. The protagonist is not the heroine's pendant. They all have their own lives, but they are connected by some small stories. It's worth watching for the subject of sexual transformation.

The plot is very interesting and the writing is already very good. It would have been nice to have more interactions with the princess. [Eat melon] The protagonist won't change back later, because it would be no fun [what] if he changes back.

Wow, what a cool setting, smooth writing and appropriate rhythm. Can you watch this for free on Red Persimmon?

Although it occasionally messes up the settings, it is well written. The writing is solid, the logic is clear, solemn but not rigid, and funny but not frivolous. The description is detailed and the details are captured well. As someone who once enjoyed watching "Diablo: Destruction", it seems very familiar. The scenes depicted by the author come alive on the page. In terms of character creation, the author does not directly bookmark his character traits, but chooses to reveal them through behavior, which is in the style of iceberg theory. In addition, for me, this kind of serious plot occasionally has some light-hearted pornographic material and emotional interaction, which really makes me miss the past time. Although this is the author's first book, the author is probably not a newbie in writing, but has been immersed in this art for several years. For me, a 15-year-old bookworm who likes Far Eyes, Scarlet Flame, Fengyue, and Butterfly Blue the most among domestic online writers, this is a really good book. To be honest, after reading it, I realized that the Holy Sword is actually this Holy Sword. The author is a bit wilted.

Surprisingly, it's not bad, but the advancement of the subplot is a bit far-fetched. Sure enough, this style is an orthodox sex story (I'm convinced)

The best thing about the protagonist being a time traveler is that there are many memes that can be played⌓‿⌓

Miss Eel has paid out the deposit! Wow, what a delicious book. The plot rhythm is well controlled, the world view is unfolded, the setting is so attractive, and the author's writing skills are powerful. Huh~ If other AI novels and template novels on 🍅 are classified as B-level works, this one is completely SSR level. In the era of these fast-food chronicle novels, you can see such works, and Miss Eel also has a big guarantee.