Aotu World: Me, a Pirate? For Real?!

It's really good, the subject matter is novel, the writing is delicate, and the character of Kaka is well grasped. It's just that Lei Shi is a bit of a soundproof person, but it feels like he should be fierce, and the heroine is a little contradictory.

First I like the little life between Jojo and Camille. The two cherish and trust each other. I think it was an inseparable scene when Jojo saved him on his birthday. And coincidentally, Jojo only had this world at that time. This person opened his heart. I personally think that the hearts of Jojo and Camille were connected in an instant. This is a kind of induction and an instinct, so the two rushed to each other, but they were not aware of it yet. It was a matter of time. Secondly The beginning is very good. I thought it was a story that requires some IQ. I never thought it was a heart-warming story. Although this story is a bit short, I confirm that I really like it. No one dislikes this pair of CPs. They are both natural and rational, and they are both very innocent. Finally I want to tell you, not only the article, but also the author. I like this process. This thing that I have never thought about in my life appears in another form. It is undoubtedly attractive to me. I will think of it at a certain moment wherever I go. I will think that if I really have such a person around me, I will be very happy. I don't think I will substitute it because Jojo is a person living in another world, so I wish us happiness.

It's not too much to judge yourself [shy][shy][shy] Wuhu! So happy! There is growth and gain, perfect completion

First of all, the following is purely my subjective opinion. My parents are alive and I am healthy too. This book is very good \(//∇//)\ Especially when I was writing the fight scene, I felt that the teacher was very suitable for writing the Thunder Lion. When I was writing the first fight scene, I really felt that what the red hair said was very reasonable. Is the Thunder Lion too willful? Later, when I saw Lei Shi's answer, I realized that I was wrong. This is Lei Shi. He is not wrong. This is what he would say! Later, when Thunder King sent troops to pursue him, it was really shocking. Thunder King did not forget any of the soldiers. At the beginning, when I heard the words of the orc, I felt that Thunder King was very corrupt. Later, I felt that the destiny that had been decided was still free? The Lei Shi written by the teacher is Lei Shi, without OOC! The teacher wrote very delicate emotions in the early stage, and it was also very good. In the later stage, I felt that the progress was too fast, too fast, super speed, and a bit rushed, but there are also plots that I like, and emotional explosions, but I think the heroine will be a little willful in the later stage >w< ٥ The emotions come in a bit urgently. There is a feeling that the heroine is going through a hellish experience and loses everything. When she comes back to life, she has to hold on to everything and doesn't want to lose it again. But I still like the early part more, but overall I still like it very much. The teacher's writing style is really good. I really think the teacher is good at writing two different perspectives and different thoughts. Thinking about different interests, the sparks that come out of the collision, the two sides have their own reasons, and the different thoughts make me waver. It's really interesting. I always thought that the miracle value mentioned in the article was full, and then the heroine would be seen and could travel through time. Before I finished reading, I thought that the heroine's real time travel was when she died after the operation and could be seen. Later, the plot may have a situation where Qiaoqiao is visualized and no one recognizes him. After finally clearing up the misunderstanding, he will write a daily sweet article and slowly push the plot, but no! ! It's different from what I thought! I won't spoil it here. You can read the article. I have a little bit of a grasp on the details. 1. When Lei Shi was about five years old, his uncle died. 2. Before entering the competition, there were no force weapons. Only the Thunder Lion (obtained when he was about five years old), Pelli (the gravity ball obtained by killing the master), and the rabid dog beast transformation should have been obtained before. (In the teacher's private design, Camille awakened her elemental power in advance. This is a private design clearly specified by the teacher) 3. When escaping from Thunder King, Lei Shi took Camille to contact Paros, and Palos joined forces with Pelli. The four of them defeated the Antelope Pirates from the inside out, so they formed the Thunder Lion Pirates when they escaped from Thunder King. If you want to rate it (full score 5⭐️) Settings: 4⭐️ Emotion (early stage): 5⭐️ (late stage): 3⭐️ Writing style: 4⭐️ Heroine strength (Goldfinger): 3.5⭐️ Details: 3.5⭐️ Innovation: 4.5⭐️ Overall Rating: 4⭐️ Still highly recommended! Everyone can come and take a look!

This book is really good to read. I would call it the number one convex fanfic I have ever read. There are too few protagonist settings like this. The setting of this book is very unique and recognizable. The protagonists of many people's books have strong backstories or golden fingers, and they are either tough or sweet. But this book gave me a very different feeling. As ordinary people in the three times, we can really embody it. The description of the protagonist is really delicate [crying] [crying] and very empathetic. It feels very good to write out the little girl's teenage worries, and the characters are almost non-ooc. The process of watching it is completely comfortable and without any rejection. It feels like an official drama. . The foreshadowing is so well laid out that it's almost mind-blowing. Damn it, teacher, you actually wrote such a state banquet

I seem to have seen this book in a storybook before. It should be the same book as the one in the storybook, right? Because the protagonist's name is the same and the content of the story is roughly the same, but why is it not in the script? ⊙_⊙It seems that most of what is written above has been changed. For example, I remember that the heroine in the storybook cannot enter the game. I remember that this one is fine, but the content is also very beautiful. I feel that the changes have made it look better. I really hope that I will not quit. Don't quit (´△｀) It's okay, but don't quit. Please, please, please🥹🥹

It's really, really, really beautiful. Compared with traditional fan fiction, the author's writing style is not only good, but also the emotional expressions are very natural. There are also many advantages. The one that stands out to me the most is the character design. Many fanfics have rigid character designs and are very rigid. I don't feel this way at all when I read DaDa. The character's personality is as if it is innate to the character itself. The only bad thing is that the author is too lazy. If you have Sun Quan, you don't need a pirate group, right? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] It's not enough to watch! But it's really, really, super, super, pretty, pretty, pretty! ! ! Say important things three times! ! ! I can't do it anymore. Please savor it carefully, savor it carefully...

Lots of updates, super nice! ! I really like the part about Lei Shi being chased. I feel that Lei Shi should be such a character. He is well-shaped and well-written ww... Camille is also a great child. He has lived alone in the Elliu District for so long and persisted for so long. He still works hard to live even if he is not recognized. Qiaoqiao is also a very kind-hearted girl. The setting is also very interesting. I am looking forward to the follow-up story! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Hello, great author. This book is really beautiful and the topic is very novel. I remember seeing a very similar book in a storybook before, but it seemed to have been taken off the shelves for some reason. (I haven't used the script for a long time, and I don't know if I still read it now⊙⊙) I don't mean anything else by saying this, I just feel it is very similar.

It's really beautiful. The vivid three-dimensional characters created by each character have independent thoughts and souls. It feels like they are alive and have their own ideas. I also like the character of the heroine. She is confident and inferior. This seemingly contradictory character is particularly real and moving in the author's writing. Qiao Qiao meets the angel sent by the angel. She never flinches when people are chasing her, and always firmly believes that she can do it and move forward strongly, but sometimes she will subconsciously look at herself, fearing that she is not doing well enough, and falling into self-doubt. The intertwining of two completely different qualities does not seem so disconnected and abrupt, but is particularly in line with human nature, and has a particularly strong sense of substitution! ! Jojo is like a real person in reality. The author really created the character very well. This is the biggest highlight of this book. The plot is also very natural and coherent. The author is very thoughtful in the conception. There are many foreshadowings in the whole story. Everything is traceable and the logic is smooth and natural. I really like the chapters where Jojo and Palos are alone. I feel like Jojo is like a little sun [shy] even if Palos says he hates her. I thought she was annoying, but she would still help Palos. She knew that Palos was sensitive, so she revealed her sincerity to Palos and proved her sincerity [send heartfelt] The sentence that I remember particularly deeply is "What I want is to be saved from hopelessness." It feels like Qiaoqiao is not deliberately trying to be a savior, but out of kindness from the heart, to help people who are trapped in darkness. We Qiaoqiao are a very good person [crying] [crying] The emotional line between Camille and Qiaoqiao really poked me. In the concave and convex world, Camille always puts Lei Shi first and is always wary of others. The appearance of Qiaoqiao broke the "wall of heart" he had built for a long time. Camille has always been suspicious and will do everything. Weighing the pros and cons, when facing Qiaoqiao, he would make an exception for Qiaoqiao and subconsciously pay attention to her safety. When Qiaoqiao came back later, he was actually concerned about whether Qiaoqiao was still angry. I feel that Camille is a bit stubborn and rarely says such things! The early foreshadowing was very sufficient, and Camille's trust and affection for Qiaoqiao was slowly built up little by little, unlike that kind of Mary Suven at all! The whole emotional line is logically smooth. Whether it is the character fit or the emotional portrayal, it is all very well written. In short, it is very good (forgive me for my lack of words). Then I hope it will be updated soon!