Siheyuan: Reborn as Silly Zhu, the Ultimate Schemer

This book is like a sheep and a scorpion. Although it has meat and bones, it accounts for 98% of it. If you don't eat it, the taste is okay. If you eat it, it will make your teeth chewy. There are only one or two pieces of meat in each chapter, and the rest are bones. People who read it will feel very nervous. It is not enough if they don't read it. After reading one or two pages, fast forward to the next chapter [laughing]

I have finished reading all 38 chapters so far. The writing is very good, the story is smooth, the characters are full-bodied, the plot development is reasonable, and it is comfortable to read. Let's talk about the shortcomings. There are too many characters' inner thoughts and the author's narrations, which take up a lot of space. The dialogues between the characters are heavily formalized and written. Compared with the TV series, there is no sense of old Beijing at all. There are serious bugs in the part where Xu's family was cheated of money. The silly pillar went online to ask for 600 from his family. The neighbors in the yard were listening and watching. They all knew what was going on, so they couldn't report it? If you give it to Shazhu, will other families give it to you? If you don't give it, I will definitely report it. It is impossible to give it 600 to a family, so this big hole cannot be filled, and it is a serious bug. Overall, it looks pretty good. I hope the author can write better and better and not use AI.

It's a very interesting rewrite of the story. I especially like the setting of the sharp-tongued uncle. The disadvantage is that I didn't do my homework when writing the chef grade and wrote it backwards. I haven't watched the original drama, but the Siheyuan fanfic has basically been completed. I remember that Silhu's chef registration still hasn't exceeded level 7 after re-opening, and it's not a hotel. There is an upper limit for the level of a factory chef. Looking forward to the subsequent plot and the modification of these dramatic scenes

This book is one of my favorites among the newly released Siheyuan novels. It is decisive, tender, and sentimental. I hope to add more stories about hunting and fighting against enemy agents in subsequent writings. After all, most readers still like to read these plots. Before the famine comes, I will go to the Northeast to collect some prey and medicinal materials to enrich the cave. For the development of the emotional line, I can still consider Lou Zi. If her parents do not support it, then You can draw a clear line by the way, or find one that really fits the protagonist. It is best not to be limited to one courtyard in the later stage. Being trapped in a small courtyard is really boring for everyone. When the wind blows, you can go to Hong Kong Island or Da Mei with tasks. You can also wander around Southeast Asia to collect jade mines, go to the temples in India to dig out gold, go to collect cultural relics and dig out the treasury and dig out production lines, and go to Britain and the United States to reserve advanced technology. I wish the author better and better.

First time giving a five-star review. I would like to make some suggestions. In the previous section where the author describes "If you are poor, you can be good alone and you can help the world". The protagonist plans to give the food grown in Xiaodongtian to the country. I hope the protagonist will not be mysterious. I hope the author can find a reasonable channel to give it to the country. I really can't use a golden finger. I hope the author can maintain his consistent cautious style.

I have read many novels about Siheyuan, but there are not many novels that are as enjoyable and comfortable as the one I read today. The author's creation of He Yuzhu's new image is really good. The novel is really well thought out. I praise it and give it a thumbs up [Like]

It actually looks pretty good! Although there is a lot of nonsense, the pace of the plot is actually good. There are a lot of book reviews that poke fun at Lou Zi, but I haven't seen the latest one, and the chapters where Miss Lou appears are less than five chapters in total... I can't say that the level of enjoyment is very high, but it is still quite enjoyable. Although it is a bit of a stretch, I think the speed is controlled very well. At least I can see the shitty yellow button appear from the beginning at once, and then press it [shy]

The author's writing is very good, the story is good, and the logic is on point. However, there is too much psychological description, too much character analysis, and forced creation of characters. The author has too many subjective thoughts, and the description of the characters is not objective enough. Whether the characters written by a good author are good or bad is not forced by the author, but is judged by the readers through what they do and say. Overall, the book is a good book and worth reading. However, the characters are explained in too much detail, leaving little room for imagination. The differences between what you imagine and what you imagine affect your reading. I often skip reading, but I can't stand it without skipping.

The writing is good and the chapters have a lot of words! The narrative is also very, very, very detailed! Um... [Laughing awkwardly] If the story of the novel is not strong, it is no different from reading "Postpartum Care of Sows"! It only took two days to complete the 80,000 to 90,000 words. It was all about understanding and analysis, and the plot couldn't be pushed forward! Of course, the writing is really good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

The writing is smooth, the reasoning is clear, and the logic is clear!