Extreme Exploration: 100,000 Meters Beneath the Earth

The writing is quite good, but maybe this kind of writing is just plain. If it is not plain, it will seem too old-fashioned and prone to too many poisonous points. After all, no one wants their freedom to be restricted, so how can they deliberately expose themselves? A lot of people are making trouble for me and then slap me in the face, right? This would be even worse. Unless the author can balance it, maybe the underground section can be written a little more wonderfully. It might be like the transition from technology to fantasy. After being killed by a Japanese spy, I never saw revenge. I also have an extra secretary who always wants to explore the boss's secrets. This kind of thing cannot be kept at all. It is of no use in the first place. He can enter and exit the boss's office at will. The protagonist is too benevolent as a boss and has no deterrent effect.

It shouldn't be exposed, the country wants everything, it won't end, and it looks uncomfortable and aggrieved. If you have advanced technology, why don't you conquer the world? Not to mention patriotism, is it not our original intention to unify human civilization? Moreover, building space elevators and space stations, what should the country do, and wherever the equator is, are all problems. But the idea is good and the writing is passable. Please support it with 5 stars.

It's still enough food for now! ! I would like to make a suggestion: using the legacy of the system, the protagonist's super R&D capabilities, the development of technology, and the subsequent use of the center of the earth and space. However, I think the author may not have enough writing skills for space resources and other plots. To what extent does it need to be developed (simple resource acquisition, or exploration of the unknown interstellar, or encounter with alien technology, alien civilization, etc.), If it can be written well, it will definitely be a wonderful work of science and technology, but it is destined to be difficult to become a hard science fiction novel. The author needs to control the extent of this. . As for underground exploration, the exploration of mystery, the use of ancient and rare species, etc., It is also very good to write it. The human heart yearns for mystery and satisfies curiosity. . Use these resources to develop technology, even genetic technology, increase life span, etc. Reminder 1: Realistic competition between countries and capitals can be written in moderation, but there is no need to go overboard unless the protagonist takes the path of a "giant enterprise" and dominates the world with technology. . . Reminder 2: The core purpose of the novel. Some are for the protagonist to cure diseases, save people or even live forever, some are for rights and enjoyment, some are for revenge, and so on. The author can choose appropriately. For example, to satisfy the desire for mysterious exploration, explore the mysterious unknowns of the earth, explore the mysteries of the starry sky, etc., Then you need to design some ancient mysterious species, mysterious civilization relics, and other plots. Let's see how the author controls it. Reminder 3: Don't be a stud. Reduce or even eliminate love plots because they are inappropriate.

I like this kind of science and technology writing very much. It may not be appropriate to say that it is not patriotic, but that's probably what it means. It is a pity that 99% of science and technology writers serve the motherland. In the early stages of this book, I had some cooperation with the country for development. After I became fully fledged, I didn't lick anyone and just did things according to my own ideas, especially destroying the country. It was very satisfying. My fist is bigger than yours, so I don't need to consider anyone's opinion. If I want to destroy you, I will destroy you immediately. The only fly in the ointment is that I even had to explain a few words afterwards, which is a bit of a pity.

It's good-looking and has an independent point of view. It's better than a mindless patriotic article. It has a patriotic side and also takes into account human nature. I will keep writing and I will update it.

It's okay, although there are many shortcomings! It is recommended that the author rewrite the novel he has written based on the readers' suggestions. After all, the creativity is good. Don't fail to attract readers because of the lack of writing and plot design!

The writing is very good, don't rush, write slowly, preferably longer.

I read it in one go and found it quite interesting. Come on, author! The writing is very good, especially the exploration of the underground world, which is simply great. You have to read it slowly, the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. Come on, author, keep up with the updates!

Anyway, I think it's still ok, I'll give you some motivation from the Five Hearts

Overall, it's pretty good. After all, it's not a pure system text, and it definitely doesn't have a pure sense of excitement. Technology is not just a blueprint. The author still checked the information. Personal power is not said casually to be greater than the power of the country. Individualism is not necessary. After all, it has been protected by the country for many years.