I Died Young, But Surprise, I'm Back!

The overall rhythm is very comfortable, but there are a bit too many memories about Lin Le's previous life, but it's not harmful. Most of the characters have very distinct personalities and characteristics. I have been promoting the main plot later on. I hope to develop some small branch plots and add some interludes, just like the Mo Ranchen incident mentioned earlier, which can better reflect the bond between the characters. Moreover, I am very interested in Bai Jing's life experience, and I hope to think about it and polish it. Overall, I think the pacing is very good, there are some small twists in the plot, and the interaction between the characters is also very interesting (yeah, I still hope that 𣊬 Ji A will go up). Although there are some minor problems, the flaws are not outweighed. I really like this book. Come on.

The writing is still relatively good. Some detailed descriptions, clothing and character characteristics, and character traits are quite acceptable. I can still get 9.3 Or 9.4 Points after writing it. Maybe it's just that, for me, it's a bit boring. There is nothing more than the death of a generation and then reminiscing about the past. Maybe I will add the present later, which is a little bit dull. Anyway, I think it is a little bit. I personally prefer to watch the ending, and then I am not interested in the middle process. But if it is well-written and novel, I am still more interested! Because I have read too many sand sculptures, I feel that although the heroine is lively, she is not the kind that particularly catches the eye. The key is that he is one of the successors of the sect. Ah, he is not such a slut, at least he wants to retain the face of the sect! As for the reason why there is no negative and no name, I think it is the author who has not thought about it, but it is better to find a name sooner rather than later! It's still well written, it's still well written! Wish you a good start and good luck

The plot is good! The writing is also super good! The sweetness of the male and female protagonists is beyond the limit, Modo Modo! I feel sorry for Lin Le's part T^T. I like Bai Jing, Mo Ranchen and Yu Lin, and I'm also curious about Yu Lin's purpose. I look forward to the follow-up!

It's very beautiful. The story is exciting and compact, without any moisture. It's very strong with only 90,000 words written in 20 chapters. But author, don't you think about the title again? The title is a bit sloppy, but it feels like the rhythm of writing a long novel. Hope it doesn't end badly The cover doesn't matter

It's quite good-looking, the female protagonist is awesome, a true pride of heaven, and so is the male protagonist. There should be more narration in it, after all, the time is after the death of the female protagonist. The male and female protagonists have very distinct personalities, especially in the narration, the female protagonist is particularly sunny and cute. After reading the introduction, I originally thought it was a short story about the male and female protagonists being happy after the heroine died, but it turned out that God made the heroine reborn because of the giant beast. I feel that the heroine is very sad. Maybe the greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. However, I still feel a little sorry for the heroine. After all, when she died at that time, her age was really not that old in the world of immortality. When I saw the chapter where the heroine saw the giant beast again, I had some doubts that the hero would not want the heroine to die again if the giant beast was eliminated this time. I'm a little afraid that it will end with the male protagonist going to destroy the giant beast on behalf of the female protagonist. But it hasn't been updated to that point yet, I hope not! Finally, I wish you a great book🔥!

It is a very novel subject matter for me. The characters in the book are vivid and vivid, the plot is smooth and compact, some of the descriptions interspersed are also very interesting, and the title is also very interesting. In addition to the main plot, the branch plots are also very interesting, completing the lines that the main plot did not explain clearly. It's just that the connection between the two is a little unnatural. But the flaws do not hide the flaws, and the content is still rich and beautiful. I hope there will be more characters and interesting plots in the future, and I also wish the author's books 🔥!

It's a very enjoyable book. The writing is good and the plot is enjoyable to watch.

Good, very good, very goodヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

The writing is quite good. I want to see more of the [love] between Ji Li and Shun Ji.

It's well written, I'm looking forward to what's coming next, keep up the good work.