My Little Pony: A Pony’s Life from Scratch

The writing is quite good. The protagonist is simply a supporting character, Pony Bulldozer. On the contrary, M6's favorability is not as high as that of the supporting character. However, I am looking forward to Shura Field in the future [laughs crookedly]. However, I feel that the rhythm of the plot can be refined and refined. Many places do not need to be written in such detail. They can be summed up afterwards. In short, this is a good Pony fanfic, and it is worth recommending!

It's a standard drama-like fanfiction. If you look closely at the whole story, you can see that the author was probably inspired by other works. There are too many things he wants to write, and the blending and transition are a bit difficult. For example, in political writing, too much space is used to describe some unimportant scenes and preparations, which makes it a bit boring to read too much. You can briefly mention it in one stroke or write more details, but it is still okay to intersperse and add emotional lines. Of course, this pair of new authors is very good. It can also be seen that the authors have read the fanfics of F Station and Tomato. The writing has a certain style of F Station and Tomato. Usually, the articles on F Station are more serious. I still like this kind of fusion. Keep up the good work.

I thought it was pretty good after watching it. The only twist is that the protagonist is a bit "awkward" (I know m6's character but I am worried that I will be hated by them because of the secret of my body). You must know that leaving hidden dangers is much more serious than being hated. What should I do if the pony is hurt? So the logic is a bit strange (hiding obvious threats for the sake of stability). However, I think the rating is on the low side (it feels like it should be at least 8 points), because too few people have watched it. But I like this book very much, good luck to the author!

It's pretty cool. Come on. There is a question. Every time the protagonist solves a crisis, does it weaken Yami? If not, wouldn't Yami have no concern when doing things? After all, it has no impact on myself. (By the way, has the author considered expanding the world in the future? For example, the world of the Fallout Pony series?)

Personal review: It looks good, but maybe there are some typos? Forget it, I hope this book ends! [Blowing kiss] There are fewer and fewer books to read recently. I hope the author can update a few more chapters! Then it will be over, right @lovablelittlepony? OO

Kougua! Don't die, the author is great. You are one of the authorities on Xiao Ma's books on my bookshelf. Don't give up just yet [crying] [crying] [crying]

Is there no other way, author?

As a harem pony flow, the writing is still great.

Very pretty. I just hope that the anchor can interact more with m6 and the two princesses. The supporting characters now interact more. Decided to raise one. Come on, author! Wow, I see there are so many plots with supporting characters. M6 almost didn't appear. There were only three princesses and a little scene, and the rest were all supporting roles. The relationship is quite good, but it's not suitable for me. If you don't want to watch the protagonist, you can watch it. I hope the author writes better and better

A very good My Little Pony fanfic, one of the best among the My Little Pony fanfics I have read.