Flying Twenty Thousand Years into the Future: I Can Make the Fake Real

I found a small amount of plot in a large number of settings

This is a collection of settings. The role of the protagonist is to introduce about 1% of the plot of various settings, which can be concluded in four or five chapters. The remaining chapters of the collection of settings are more than 200 chapters, which basically talk about the protagonist stacking setting buffs, supporting characters stacking buffs, and passers-by stacking buffs. It explains the protagonist and supporting characters, what skills and abilities they have acquired, what worldview and stream of consciousness they have perfected. Basically nothing else. This is not a normal novel. There is basically no personal description, no fighting scenes, and no battles of wits. Basically, only those who like set highlights can read it.

The settings are many and grand, but the problems are also huge. The definition of a novel itself is a description of different worlds, which is okay, but too many self-set descriptions will cause a great conflict between your enthusiasm and realistic results. To put it simply, complex and grand settings will not be remembered by readers, but will only drag down your own writing ability, causing you to want to write well and close to the setting, and then continue to drag down your creative enthusiasm. The enthusiasm will continue to disappear in the actual results and income, and ultimately leave the conflict that the grand setting cannot meet your actual needs. There are many ways to supplement a grand setting, but interesting stories are the foundation. Food must be eaten one bite at a time. Realistic results are the best success. Stories with regrets are life.

A small amount of plot is found among a large number of settings. It is written with care, but more like a diary for self-entertainment. Still setting up emmm

First of all, there is no doubt about the author's cultural background, which is quite impressive. It took a lot of effort to have a grand imagination and world view. The training system for various superpowers is very complete and well-matched with scientific basis. This is great. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The world view setting is bloated, not useless, but too detailed. It's so detailed that it feels like reading the manual of an electrical appliance. It will feel much better if you refine it a little bit.

It's a good book, and the setting is awesome [face covering]. Those who love reading the setting are in luck, but the plot is pitiful, which is a pity for me. After reading more than 200 chapters in the comments, there are still a lot of settings. There is too little plot [laughing and crying]. If you don't like it, just avoid it.

The logic is clear, the world view is grand, and the words give people a very comfortable feeling. There are no poisonous points at present. It is difficult for me to believe that this is written by a new writer on Tomato (ps: I suspect that the author is a great writer on other platforms, but unfortunately there is no evidence [shy]). Although the realm system of the story is not very new at present, a good story is interesting for people to read. Then there are two suggestions: 1. Both the supporting characters and the protagonist are very capable. I wonder if the author can grasp the scale and not let the combat power collapse. 2. This is a new book. I hope the author won't finish it badly. It doesn't matter if it's slower. Write the content well. You will be the No.1 In my heart. I don't know if the author of this book review can see it. If so, I hope the author will know that there is an unknown person looking at you, and I wish you to grow wildly in this unknown world and become a famous person. I'm lying to you. I wish you well even if you can't see it. I wish you a prosperous literary career.

The writing is very good, but the setting is too grand and complicated. It is more like an anecdote than a novel. Most newcomers will not be able to accept it. It is suitable for old bookworms. I like to read it. It is very beautiful.

The settings are awesome and looks pretty good. [Laughing evilly] It's 300 chapters of Big Brother, and a month hasn't passed yet [smile]

After reading dozens of chapters, I can summarize: The author is experienced and has a great imagination. His writing style is okay and there are no poisonous points. I only worry about the world view. If the golden finger is too big, I can't grasp it. Is the author writing a novel? Are you writing a thesis?