Building a Legendary Civilization from a Barren Planet

According to the description in the article, it can be roughly inferred that the author has the exact ranking of artificial intelligence levels, definition of space battleship levels, description of planet size differentiation, etc. For the world view of the novel. The logic is strict, the protagonist is relatively visual (Luke people deeply agree), and it is in line with the concept of science fiction. If you can change a few issues that may be trivial, I would like to propose them here: 1. The problem of the distribution of forces in the universe: The only known ones are the group controlled by the protagonist's ex-girlfriend's family, the mysterious forces that want to occupy the protagonist's planet, Teacher Bai's family forces, and the official organizations of the solar system. There is no other detailed overview. It is recommended to add a few more. After all, the expulsion of the protagonist will be lifted in the later "Sun Ban". If you don't know some large forces, it is a bit too far away from reality (don't expect that all large forces will work behind closed doors, their reputation is enough to buy them a lot of resources and deterrence) 2. The problem of collecting the protagonist's harem: Currently, the main characters are female creatures around the protagonist (Teacher Bai's grandson? Generally speaking, they are eunuchs; that black-hearted businessman? Isn't he a pig to be killed?). I am a little worried that the trend of novels will become closer to the harem, which is unnecessary and loses the price, and it is easy to lose readers. Recently, more male creatures have been arranged to fight/communicate/ask for help with the protagonist. It is best to recruit some male creatures. The generals/technicians have officially started to create simulators (乐子人) 3. The problem of obtaining unexpected adventures: There cannot be great opportunities, there cannot be great opportunities, there cannot be great opportunities! Say important things three times! What kind of cosmic version of Grandpa Goldfinger is rolling! Small opportunities are not provocations! A cosmic-level slap in the face can make readers embarrassingly pull out a galaxy! Either pick up the slack or repay the favor, otherwise it will be really visual fatigue (lucky people are sad) Okay, okay, I have nothing to say, so let's start with this couplet: The first couplet is "The eagle broke its wings and fell in the mud", the second couplet is "In the coming day hundreds of birds will turn into phoenixes and pay homage to the phoenix", the author of the banner is here

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The writing is okay, it doesn't fall apart and it can kill time.

It's not bad, come on, author.

How to say it. This is like a patchwork of various science fiction novels (the likes of Galactic Empire are easier to write and more eye-catching). I hope the author can add some of these elements in the later stage. Isn't it that the human beings will send them later? The future protagonist is not a human being (a servant), so I can mention it. Because I am writing a planet novel, and there is a mass extinction of mankind. This way, there are more chapters and it is easy to write. It should be more eye-catching. We can't go too far away from the title of the book, so I beg you.

The book is very good, but a bit slow. It mainly tells the story of a man who was sent to the frontier and his intelligent butler "mutated" to help him pay off his debts and beat people up. It's pretty good. I really like this kind of subject matter.

Logical thinking and emotional development are really a refreshing trend in online articles nowadays.

I like this novel about battleships and cannons

It looks good, a little above average in my opinion.

The author is very imaginative and very beautiful