With the Distillery in My Hands and Gin at My Side, Life's Peak Is Within Reach

Summary: The theory is clear, the emotional line is rich, the protagonist's character is also very full, and there is no poisonous point. It is one of the few good articles. If you follow this style of writing, it will definitely become popular in the future. But I have a few suggestions that the author can refer to [Love]. 1: Name and cover. The name and cover are not very attractive, and they don't have much connection with the whole book. I suggest the author change it to one that is more unique and distinctive (because I am so angry, I won't give an example. I suggest the author look at the names and covers of other beautiful and rich Mingke works as a reference.) Moreover, the current covers are too gaudy and unattractive. At first glance, they look like those published by a small workshop. The author's writing style is very good and the content is rich, but unfortunately there is no attractive cover and name Meow [Flowing Kiss]. 2: Emotional line and rhythm. The current pace is too fast. Gin and the protagonist have a clear relationship now in more than 40 or 50 chapters. It is recommended that the author write more about the previous timeline and provide more foreshadowing. In addition, he has started to contact Bourbon now and has made a lot of changes, such as the plot of Shirley and Miyano Akemi. I suggest that the boss should lay the groundwork and make more emotional lines. The main problem now is that the emotional lines are insufficient, but the relationship is already full. I feel that Gin and the protagonist do not openly like each other, there are only a series of main lines, the timeline is too fast, and the emotional lines cannot keep up. 3: Chapter word count. In fact, the more chapters there are, the more people will want to read them. Now there are 3,000 chapters, and now there are more than 100,000 words, but there are only about 40 or 50 chapters. Articles with more than 40 or 50 chapters or more than 70 chapters are of course more attractive. No one likes articles with fewer chapters. The teacher can divide one chapter into two chapters in the future, so as to ensure stable updates while there is stock. 4: No introduction. I feel that there is no suspense in the current article, more like a random play, writing whatever comes to mind, but overall there is no poisonous point, but adding more suspense will make it easier to write later, not easy to get stuck, and can enrich the world view and complement the protagonist's high IQ. I look forward to the author's big update and enriched timeline and world view. [Blow a kiss].

It's good to watch. Good luck to the author. I like gin very much. Of course I also like Xiao Che. Let the young couple stay together well. If Conan can live, he will die if he can't live. If it doesn't harm our little couple, I can barely tolerate it. Finally, a big update soon, with explosive updates [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]

Overall, it's good-looking. It doesn't follow the original plot, but the development is reasonable. It's a little messy at the beginning, but it's much better at the end because the author probably got started. It's so gratifying to see the little author who no one watched at the beginning grow up little by little. Sure enough, there is emotional value in raising a little author [laughing]

◎It's quite interesting. The CP is Gin. At the beginning, the male protagonist gets acquainted with the protagonist group, and then he hooks up with Gin and falls in love. He gets close to Conan and deceives them. Occasionally, he wholesales bombs and blows them up everywhere. I will also do business with the Chinese side, haha. Overall, I am living a happy life. The male protagonist's subordinates are very capable, including infiltrating the FBI and the police. The male protagonist also helped Gin rectify his subordinates, so that Gin would gradually stop being such a model worker. He also guided Gin to discover the strangeness of Conan, the deliberate arrangement of the story line, and to confront the world consciousness. It was really a direct confrontation, with Bourbon and the Young Detective Team folding in. It's quite interesting so far, but it's a little convoluted later on when it involves black magicians, drug gangs, incomplete systems, and the life of the male protagonist's family. I haven't finished it yet, so I hope the relevant content can be explained smoothly. ◎Because the author is demining, he said that the ending of the supporting characters will not be too good, but it is not easy to destroy the organization. I hope that the male protagonist and Gin will leave the organization, and Gin will no longer have to be the villain in the original plot. But I hope the hero's subordinates can have a better ending. After all, I have been a worker for so long, including Gin's subordinate vodka. It is also possible that these people will follow and leave the organization. Anyway, let's look forward to it. ◎The plot is almost finished now, and it's still well received. The life story of the male protagonist is explained. Although it is a bit confusing and a bit strange, you can still understand the general meaning. Shuichi Akai died, and the consciousness of the world was at the end of its tether. The male protagonist of the organization became the boss, and his subordinates controlled the basic forces of Japan. After killing Conan, it would be a comfortable and refreshing life. ◎I originally thought that the male protagonist and Gin would leave the organization, and the organization would develop under Renya Karasuma. From then on, the male protagonist and the others would go their separate ways. But now the situation is that the male protagonist first takes over the organization and becomes the boss, and then after finishing Conan, he arranges the organization and plans to retire. Although Black is indeed not a good person, in this case, the male protagonist and Vodka can have a good ending, and the male protagonist and Gin can also have a layer of protection and a retreat, which is quite good. Looking forward to the ending, fight against Conan haha.

Qin Right + Tuan Pet + Black Sesame Stuffing + Black Friendly + Main Strength

It's pretty good, pure black square, and the writing is comfortable to read. The organization won. Spoilers below plus lightning protection Not only science, but also fantasy. Black magicians are involved, and Eastern magic such as soul searching is involved. The protagonist's soul first splits and then merges. A large-scale plot of one soul and two souls. The protagonist is still an immortal species and later returns to normal. There are plots about the protagonist and Gin's past and present lives. There is a way of heaven and a consciousness of fighting against the world. The protagonist kills the world consciousness alone. Conan is not dead in the main text, but Conan is killed in the extra story. The Mori family and Sonoko survived. The protagonist has no fight against Renya Karasuma, and in the end, Karasuma no longer pursues immortality and dies. Watch my duration↓

The main line of the entire article is obvious and the structure is complete. It feels like many events are designed to promote the main line, without confusion, and the plot is interesting. The protagonist and Gin are very close to each other (Qin, right), and there are some supernatural elements. [Adoration][Adoration]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Gin is so pampering www. I can't wait to eat the cookies with the sugar content exceeding the standard right now! By the way, the author is probably a sweet writer who doesn't write about abuse, right ()

The male protagonist brings a little nuclear bomb shock to the little book [laughter] Not happy? Kill a little book and be happy [laughing evilly] Finally, at the end of the year, I keep calling Ginjiu brother [laughing evilly]

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