[Quick Transmigration] The Beautiful Men I Saved All Turned Into Tops

It's a very fragrant article! The character descriptions and characterizations are very delicate, and the painting has a rich sense of picture. But in fact, it feels more focused on the plot: for example, the plot in the first world, but this will lead to a little lack of emotional lines () The same goes for transitions. If you want to be able to grasp both hands, you have to write longer, but the first world felt like it was over before it even started. ಥ_ಥ But the character settings are all cute and novel, and the depictions are very delicate. I think I can actually write a longer version of the slow-flowing genre. After all, I want to better understand the characters in different worlds! Xie Tan is right. If you don't watch the extras, you won't be able to understand his emotional changes towards Ci Ci (p_q) The author's first impression of the characters is very good! But I feel that it lacks a little bit of versatility, which can enrich the characters from different angles. After all, people are complex entities. For example, a person who looks serious on the surface is actually confused and stupid, and he also likes little yellow ducks. Here's another one, a silly person who occasionally makes surprising statements, and is wise and foolish, yet he speaks casually as if he is innocent. This is a very common character contrast setting. You can try to use it when building a character (just a small suggestion. Who doesn't know such a simple thing? What on earth am I talking about? Just take a look at the author (つд⊂) These will make the article more interesting and lively, and also make the characters more vivid. At this time, the reader is not just trying to get emotional value from the plot, but he can also feel fun from the character. Although I said a lot, this is actually a very good novel! Compared to other quick travels, it's pretty good. I'm looking forward to the next few worlds! I also hope to see more exciting stories (*'▽'*)♪

Well, how can I say "shou" means to get away after completing the task? In fact, um, you can say it in the first page or introduction. Some people are a little bit surprised, or I think the author may want to write the kind of long-lasting water, which may stay in the second world or the third world. The first world can be slightly protected from lightning, so In the first world, I think the emotional line is very weak, and I don't think I like Gong at all. For example, if Gong wants to choose a concubine, I don't have any sour emotions. In the first world, I can't see the signs of being together. He can be regarded as a big Be emotionally and physically, so I think it can be protected from lightning✯⸜( ᶿ̷ധ ᶿ̷)⸝✯, well, I think many authors will actually say it. It may indeed be a bit shocking for people like me who read sweet articles. I didn't say what the author meant, just giving a suggestion! ! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

Cool! I hope the author will grow eight hands and be able to code when eating, code when drinking water, play code when going out, and code when using the toilet! ! ! ! ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

A standard sweet story, nothing particularly sad except for the protagonist leaving at the end. And the protagonist's departure was unexpected. There is no sad atmosphere so it is considered sweet. But... I don't see any crazy criticism of yandere. If it weren't for the psychological description of the protagonist Gong, I wouldn't be able to understand it. If you like watching crazy criticism of yandere, try not to come. Because the author didn't write this feeling. If you like to read short sweet articles, you can come here. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Great, I have wanted to review this book for a long time. I hope to recommend it to more people who like it. The author is great. I have been here to finish this book. Please don't give up. You have to believe that some people will like to read your articles, and some people will not like yours. Even if you feel tired and you don't want to follow it, that's okay. If you have decided, then I respect your choice! ! [Shy][shy][admiration][admiration]

So beautiful! ! ! But why has the update been discontinued? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I've only reached the third small world now, but the first few are already gone. I still want to see them together [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's super cute! It's sweet, but the ending of each plane is be, and Xiaoci is also very cute!! Cute baby, the little couple is so sweet! They will be together forever! [Send a heart][Send a heart][Blow a kiss]

It's great to see the little girl doing a backflip to the teacher's house to supervise the teacher's update. It's the first small world that makes the anchor a little bit regretful. She still wants to see the loving couple sweetly together [face covering]

I like the setting, and I think the plot is good. Very nice [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh**The setting is my favorite. Only then did I realize that it is a new book. I can't get enough of it. The author will update it soon! ! ! !