Ye Luoli: I Fell into the Muten Pavilion from the Start

It's really beautiful. The teacher's writing style is very delicate and humorous. Everyone's portrayal is lifelike. Among them, my favorite is Sister Dog CP! It's really super fragrant! The heroine can be either a dog or a cat, but I think the cat sculpture is the best, it's super fragrant! [Adoration]

The first Ye Luoli fan novel that I particularly like! The author's writing is very smooth, and most importantly, he makes the heroine very charming! ! ! ! ! ! All the other characters are very charming. I feel that the characters in many novels are very thin, but the image of the heroine is really vivid! ! She is innocent, optimistic and cheerful, but not stupid, arrogant or "holy lady". I really like it! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I met a heroine who suits my taste so well. The author must keep updating. Don't let it be unfinished and don't stop updating. Thank you, thank you, thank you [cry][cry][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I decided not to give it a try considering how enthusiastic it was. Let's talk about the advantages first ①The heroine is lively, cute, and familiar with herself. She can please others for her own purposes. She has a lot of interests, such as cooking, growing vegetables, painting, and making handcrafts. She is also very smart, good at making jokes, and thinking outside the box. ② A reasonable heartthrob, everyone interacts with the heroine, both men and women take advantage of each other, and all CPs are eliminated. ③The plot character setting is also more in line with the development setting, and the time span is quite fast. ④I also like my heroine [admiration] Disadvantages: ① There are too many words that insult women, except for the two or so words that insult men [face covering] used at the beginning. ② There are a lot of typos, some will be corrected, and some are still there, but the author has worked hard to update them, so they can be ignored. ③I don't really like some of the jokes played by the heroine, such as the Game of Kings (I heard this game is rn), and the heroine transforming into a "male character" and talking about "big baby" (?) ④I don't like some language descriptions very much, some analogies

When I first read the introduction, I saw that the heroine was weak and aggrieved at the beginning, so she quit. Later, there was a shortage of books. Then I saw this book that many people recommended, so I read it again. Then after reading it, I found that the heroine did feel a little weak and a little aggrieved, but she got better later on, and basically there was no such phenomenon. Xiang, the more I watch it, the better it looks. I hope there will be more about Mutiange in the future. The plot of Mutiange in the previous episode is indeed very interesting. Although the plot of Lingxi Pavilion has a little bit of Mutiange interspersed in it, I still feel that the plot of Mutiange is more to my liking than Lingxi Pavilion. I hope there will be more extra stories about Mutiange in the future.

✨It's really beautiful\(//∇//)\I haven't finished watching it yet! Prepare to save up and watch! It can be seen that the author is very careful in shaping the heroine Nuan Nuan! He is a unique and warm individual! The same goes for other fairies! ! I will analyze the character of each fairy and not be OOC! ! This is really great! ! Really attentive! ! The writing is humorous and easy to understand! I like Yuan Nuan very much, "Three points of water and one yuan, Nuan Yang's warmth! A very good person! Only such excellent qualities can attract people worthy of love! The logic is very smooth." Long live the author! ! ! ! 😍 Score! ! !

I really like it, the author's emotional writing is very delicate. If you don't understand some parts, the author will also say, "It's so gentle." I just hope there will be more updates [please update] He has a stupid mouth and can't boast anything good. , I can only say that it is funny, emotionally delicate, and some of the foreshadowings are very well written. I always like the heroine's character [Sending my heart]

It's really beautiful. This is the best book I've ever read. Yuanyuan really seems to have been given a soul. It's very vivid and the plot is very natural. And I feel like I really like what Da Da said. It feels like it's enlightening, and it's not that It's a brainless pet. Each character has his or her own personality. There is no golden finger, because Yuanyuan is a very good person, just like the little sun. I particularly like what Da Da said, Yuanyuan is her own golden finger. Reading this book is so heart-warming! ! ! [Sending heart] [Admiration] Why didn't I meet him earlier [Almost crying]

Xiaoyuan really came from Bai Yueguang and refused to accept any rebuttal. It made me feel a little uncomfortable and wanted to cry. There has always been much controversy over the process and results. If the ending is bad, does the process have no meaning? I think this is true, at least in this article, in this vibrant text. The ending of "Be" always gives people a sense of poignancy and sadness. I once thought that if we had not met and the story had not begun, there would not have been a lot of pain. However, when I saw that scene, it was clear that the outcome was destined, fate played tricks on them, but they never gave up, I thought that even if the ending was tragic, it was worth it. Both sides worked hard to take 99 steps in the two-way journey, and the missing step was just a mistake. I expected that there would be no repentance, half of my life would be desolate and half of my life would be hidden, and in the end I would just say "go back," and say hello to them for me. A coming-of-age narrative, it can be vigorous and mighty, or it can be long and slow, grinding away the youthful spirit and smoothing out the worldly edges. The story begins with difficulty, and there are ups and downs along the way. Although there are moments of joy, it is inevitably boring for a long time. To form a bond, to form a bond, the origin and end of the relationship are not controlled by one's will. The world has sacrificed tragically, and the fairyland on earth has no worries from now on. Everything can be regarded as harmonious and beautiful. However, the loss of the important person (immortal) adds flaws to the harmonious beauty, turning jade into jue. In the end, the vast sea cannot be forgotten tomorrow. If loving a story means designing the plot, completing the logic, and making the story complete; then loving a character means giving it a soul. It has its growth line and its emotional connection. It leaves traces in the floating world and there is no doubt about its life. In my opinion, the best thing about this novel is the character creation. The author really loves this character. There is a saying that goes like this, "If you develop a good impression of a person through other people's narration, then the person narrating the story must love that person very much." I think this sentence is quite applicable here. At the end of the review, I just want to say: Xiaoyuan, pure white moonlight, no doubt! This article is a masterpiece, those who refute it should reflect on themselves!

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, so good-looking, the characters are full and three-dimensional, the author is cute and interesting, respects the characters, and the foreshadowing is okay. The ups and downs of the plot are so memorable that I can't write it down anymore. Anyway, it's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, I've watched it. There are not 100 Ye Luoli fanfics, but there are 50. Well, I have read many of the same type of funny novels and those who first encountered the tenth level. I think this one is the best among so many fanfics. For example, Ye Luoli's fanfics are number one in my mind, among the top three among all fanfics, and among the top ten tomato novels! ! ! !

I don't dare to get a five-star fanfiction score. If the score is too high, it will be removed from the shelves, and if it is too low, it will not be conducive to the development of this book. But I have to say that the author's writing is very charming, and the heroine in the novel is also a very good person. It's really beautiful(๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)