I Transmigrated into a Herrscher Beauty, but They Mistook Me for a Spirit to Romance

The writing is quite good, but I also agree with the previous point of view. There are too many words about settings and system settlement, which really affects the viewing experience, so I can only give 4 stars. The plot has great potential, but the viewing experience is not good.

It may be a little awkward at the beginning, but starting from the cooking showdown, I felt it was very well written [Love] I feel that the forced performance of the core transfer of Lili in the back is too deliberate, and it is a bit embarrassing, but the rest of it is still quite interesting [laughs]

I haven't read the battle, but the character setting of Tohka in this book was so good that I cried. When she said with tears, "This... Is Shido's world. He likes this world so much... I can't destroy him," I was really deeply touched. The contrast between the protagonist's "performance" and his true feelings after his "vest" is broken (whether acted or real) is also very cute, and the side descriptions and foils are also appropriate and in place. The author has understanding and skills. As for the psychological description, it depends on the person. I think this is one of the few chuuniu descriptions I've seen that doesn't make people feel really embarrassed. Some scenes and catchphrases may be more visual to people who are often exposed to Japanese comics, but if they are just general readers, they will not have a great impact. The protagonist is also strong enough, and there is no excessive plot to suppress his combat power. The knife penetrates very comfortably and is a bit addictive. If I have to talk about shortcomings, I personally think that the newly emerged character Koizumi makes me feel a little overshadowed (I want to see more of the protagonist's life and plot rather than others), and the character of the origami master is a bit unpleasant (every time he appears, he disrupts the situation, and often "does bad things with good intentions"? Although he always says that "protecting Shido is the highest priority", many operations often put him in dangerous situations), other things are pretty good. The last point: when to teach and train when to teach and train when to teach and train. I want to see the protagonist show a shameful and delicious expression and be stood up and bitten! Have you been through it?

The writing is very good and makes people want to pursue it. The author updates it several times a day. The plot description is very visual, and the part similar to Bai E's PV really made me feel deeply involved. The emotions between the characters are described very delicately, and book friends who have never watched the fight can also understand it. The overall evaluation is very good The author writes a bit too much about other characters, and the protagonist often doesn't appear in more than ten chapters, which affects the viewing experience a bit. Can you please let the protagonist appear quickly? The higher the expectations, the higher the disappointment. We may meet again in the future.

The elements of this novel are: The Herrscher of Honkai Impact, The Herrscher of Honkai Impact, and the God of Joy. I came here after reading The Herrscher of Honkai Impact. If you don't know The Herrscher of Honkai Impact, it should be quite comfortable to read. The style of the engagement is like this. The brainwaves are matched. The kitchen battle and the battle are basically very beautiful. Yes, I don't know the Herrscher, so I just think it's a superpower. The God of Fun is probably Hanabi, so I don't have a cold. Then it's right to change the element of marriage. It requires full inner description and a subtle change in mentality. He is not the kind of man who wears a female nickname. It's very good. Keep up the good work. Come on.

I read Tomato's "bianmiao" when it was not yet popular. How should I put it, the current "bianmiao" feels to me like a female video article with a "bianmiao" cover. There are very few descriptions of the core ideological changes. If the label of "bianmiao" is removed, and some emphasized sentences are deleted (although there are not many in the first place), it will not have the characteristics of a "bianmiao" novel. At least this one is okay now. Tohka retorted, I really love the part where the protagonist reflects. This is what I want to see. The transformation is subtle, which makes me look forward to the subsequent plot more. Well done, author, come on, I haven't read a novel in a long time, and this is the only one I'm stuck on. PS: But you should also pay attention to rest. If you work too hard, you still need to balance work with rest.

The plot is not bad, there is really no need to describe so much about the appearance. It is actually better to leave some room for imagination, just like it is better to be vaguely visible than to be fully exposed [laughter]

The author's writing is very good, but in fact, what everyone wants to read is the protagonist rather than the supporting role. There are too many chapters of Xiaosi, and they are all battle plots. Yuehua will use her abilities to change the plot and participate in it personally. As for my protagonist, he just used his ability to abduct Xiao Si. I want to see the post. But I also know that the author wants to write in his own style, so go for it.

Yes, although there are some flaws, the writing is immature, the plot development and the characters are a bit stiff, but it is already very good for novices. Moreover, my entry into the house is to fight, and it comes with filters. At the same time, the characters are not too bad, and some places are barely reasonable. Not bad, average!

It's a good book I haven't seen in a long time [cry] [cry] [cry] Especially the beginning of chapter 400, it's really good to read. This is the kind of marriage I want to read [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]. The rich and delicate psychological description, the subconscious shy little actions of the protagonist, and the process of being slowly conquered and fell into a little bit, are really touching [cry] [cry] [cry]. It's really better than the kind of men who wear the appearance of women or the female videos with the label of changing marriage [crying][crying][crying]. (There are also some shortcomings, especially there are too many elements at the beginning, including battles, Beng San, Beng Tie, etc., As well as some cumbersome special vocabulary and system settlements, which may dissuade some people who have not seen it. There is also the middle Yoshino that is a little flat, and the protagonist has too little plot, but you can really tell that the author The more I write, the more comfortable I become. From chapter 400, I really feel that the author has begun to break away from the original framework of dating and slowly write his own story. As expected, dating is more important! ) Finally, I want to watch the training! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]