Date A Live: A New Life for a Space-Type Spirit

The whole book is of high quality compared to other dates. There is not much poison. I personally feel that the protagonist has changed too much. From the past life, she only knew revenge to the current Internet-addicted girl acting coquettishly towards Shido. However, the contrast is quite cute. She loves sweets and is as strong as Itachi 😳. However, I still hope that the protagonist can be cold and rational. This setting really makes my heart move. There is also a small flaw that the relationship between Qianye and Shido is slightly inferior. If it continues to suck in the later stages, I can give it five stars. I hope it doesn't suddenly become a big poison. I'm really looking forward to how the author will deal with Mio's mother. This is also a difficult point. I still hope it will be a reunion ending.

It is a very unique one among Tomato's date-fighting fan novels. At present, there are no big poisonous points, and the three views have not followed the elf's five senses. Let's see what the ending of the four magicians ➕Mio and Kurumi will be in the future.

This should belong to 🤔🤔 about marrying into a palace. It can only be said that there are few people who are interested in getting married, and even fewer people are interested in getting married. But I only see pure love, and I will marry pure love or nothing. [Chigua][Chigua] I still can't accept the fight. If it were a few years ago, I might have gotten the upper hand [Chigua][Chigua] But it's much better than other fics about the War and Marriage Palace.

Very fascinating fan fiction. I define this article as a Lezi article, and it is worth reading. The writing style is not brilliant, but it can be said to be remarkable. The plot is very compact. The extra chapters of Shuiwen are concentrated in a few chapters. You can skip them at any time if you want. Let's pick three "poisonous points": (1) Change of marriage. But, if you don't want to get married, why are you still wearing the DAL world? [Sneaky laugh] (2) Not wearing the earth, which results in a lot of time-travel fun missing - the protagonist himself complained about the original work, but other fun can completely make up for this part of the nonsense. (3) Designing an extremely miserable past life for the protagonist. But miserable is relative. Compared with a serious revenge novel with a Western fantasy background, this is nothing. In the end, it's hard to say who was worse off in the previous life of the protagonist or Origami Daishi 😏 It was judged that it was purely a trick for the protagonist to fall in love with Shido 😏

Only after reading Chapter 9 did I realize that there were no symbols at the end of each sentence. 😏 But I don't have many friends to fight with, so please support me with 5 stars✊✊✊

I forgot the front, the middle, and the back, but the evil god is awesome!

It's been a long time since I met my friend, and the author wrote it well.

I just read Yoshino's chapter and I want to give you some advice. Even though the author is a newcomer, I am still very tolerant of new creators, so I just want to give some advice. First of all, the author should try his best or not to include his own monologue in the novel chapter. Some people may really feel like they are finally getting excited about reading, and then they will feel a strong sense of separation when they read the monologue. I don't know if other readers will have it. I have it. The second question is whether Qianye's IQ reduction can be replaced with something that doesn't affect the look and feel later in the game? For example, it is easy to lose control of yourself if you are rational. Even if you increase the attribute for a long time, the time and space will gradually transform into a complete reversal. Especially the kind of remarks like "How dare you hurt him" when IQ is reduced. I personally would feel very embarrassed and unable to express my feelings. The last problem is actually exposed at the connection between Tohka and Yoshino. There is no daily chapter at all foreshadowing. For example, after Tohka is sealed, she should go to Kotori for an examination, right? Then you can write some sections where Shido is confused and then be enlightened? Although it is boring, at least it is useful and will not appear obtrusive. Moreover, how Tohka met Origami and how she transferred to Shidou's school are not mentioned. I feel that this connection is very forced. Currently, the shortcomings of this novel according to me are that the monologue is too fragmented, the IQ-reducing part is too brainless, it feels like a domineering president is buried with the whole world, and there are no daily scenes that are too abrupt. If the author is not sure about the original work, I think I can give it a review. However, in order to support the new author, I will give it four stars. I hope everyone will give it a thumbs up to help the author understand.

I can't stand it anymore and keep being fooled by this cover. Every time I flipped through the bookshelf, I thought it was a P3 fan and wondered where I saw it. When I looked carefully, it turned out to be a battle. It really looks like Yuuki Ri, especially the one at the back looks more and more like Thanatos. However, the book itself is still good-looking. It's a pity that I keep being fooled. I couldn't help but come to the comment area to post it😘

Omit it at the beginning, omit it at the end, omit it, don't care about Qianye's awesomeness