Western Fantasy Mount & Blade: From Ragged Militia to an Immortal Legion

A Urgent Call for Updates (July 19, 2025, early afternoon. While browsing your work, I saw the "urging updates" button and was suddenly moved. This is the message I write to express my earnest hope.) To the author I respect: Starry Sky of the World. Your novels shine like stars in the sea of literature, captivating us readers.

It's a good read, but there are some parts that I find a bit illogical. For example, the protagonist can upgrade his soldiers, and the army forms too quickly. However, it's a system novel, so I can understand that. The only redeeming quality is the writing style, which has a certain depth. The plot unfolds haphazardly, but the power levels are severely inconsistent. Well, I'll give two points to the writing style; it's truly rare.

Author, please update quickly! May the author's soul return... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 May the soul return... I wield the long whip and reins... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 May the soul return... I sing as I cross the mountains... Return... May the soul return... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 May the soul return... I triumph with a high-spirited song... I await my comrades to give my all... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 May the soul return... May the soul return... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

I suggest using less flowery language; if you keep updating, more people will definitely read your posts.

Personally, I quite like this kind of theme, and I hope the author can fill in the "Starfall" plot hole. A kingdom without any trump cards? Without a protagonist, is it just waiting to be destroyed? Whether it's simply suppressing the protagonist's development or showing that the protagonist has the power to make a decisive move, this is a huge plot hole that's hard to fill.

It's good; Western lord novels are still the most enjoyable to read.

Well written; it's a high-quality Western fantasy novel among Tomato's works.

A well-written lord's book, looking forward to its growth.

A ten-year veteran bookworm gives it a thumbs up online.

The writing is very good.