The Haunted City of Dreams

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It's quite well-written, with excellent writing and plot. The horror elements are genuinely terrifying. However, the author seems to enjoy creating subtle hints for the reader. For example, in the first instance, the female student has an unusual skin color, but she turns into a ghost midway through the story. In the second instance, the dog gets scratched on the face by a cat, and the antagonist is the cat, yet the protagonist doesn't seem to notice.

The plot was pretty good for me; it wasn't scary, and there were occasional funny moments. The negative point lies in the character design of the female lead, Ye Yiyi (possibly). I also disliked a similar character design in "The End of Ten Days" (although she is just a mental anchor).

It's okay, it reminds me a bit of Yu Nian'an, but I still hope it's a real person, since the fake one is too tacky; the author's writing is good, the language used to create the horror scenes and the plot twists are good, but the environmental descriptions could be improved. The logic is very clear. As long as the author keeps updating, I'll keep following the story. While I have some suggestions, I still hope you can stick to your own style and novel outline. Good luck!

Wow, this is a pleasant surprise! It's very well written. The section where Lin goes to Ye Niaoniao's house, showing the similarities between Ye Niaoniao and Ye Yiyi, is exactly what I wanted to hear. The several ghost dreams are also quite captivating, and the connection to the Mayan prophecy adds to the immersion. Personally, I think if it maintains this quality, it'll easily get a 9 out of 10.

It's great! The story is original and very engaging. 👍🥰 The first dream was really scary, but the rest of the dreams weren't so bad 😅

This book feels similar to the "Strange Abode" series, but also has a bit of the feel of "Before Falling into Eternal Night". Although it didn't give me the same amazing and unexpected conclusion as "Strange Abode", it's undeniable that the author has some skill in writing. The plot is intricately linked, and the ending is unpredictable, making it very addictive to read.

This is very well written! Keep it up, author! 👍👍👍 The comments section keeps talking about the mythical beasts and the plot and characters in "Ten Days," but I think the author's creations in this book are unique. Keep it up! ⛽

It's so incredibly good! I've already read "The Ghost House" three times. It's my favorite book since "The Ghost House," and it really suits my taste. It's so exciting and I love it so much! Please, author, update faster! I can't get enough! I'm a loyal fan! The first thing I do after school every day is open the novel and listen to your stories. They're so good!

I love these kinds of mindless, intelligent, and atmospheric horror novels with challenging levels. It was so thrilling and enjoyable to read! Author, keep up the good work with the updates!