The Haunted City of Dreams

The new book is a mystery: it is thrilling and brain-burning, full of suspense. Each copy is carefully designed. Please support me with bookshelf reviews! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Two chapters a day, with additional updates from time to time! [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] Whenever the clock strikes midnight, the resentful undead will be awakened and kill everything that spreads her name——[Supernatural Copy: School Tomb] In the bloody secret room, fresh organs were suspended in mid-air. Five men and three women were locked in iron cages and forced to participate in a gambling game. If you choose the right organ, you can survive - [Brain-burning copy: Killing Game] Subsequent copies are being made urgently. . . Everyone's support is the motivation for me to write. Don't leave, the excitement will continue. . . [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention]

The writing is quite good, the writing and plot are excellent, and the horror writing does have a scary feeling. However, the author seems to like to create some hints that are unique to the readers. For example, in the first copy, the female classmate has a weird skin color, but she turns into a ghost in the middle. In the second copy, the dog is scratched on the face by a cat, and the villain is a cat, but the protagonist does not care at all.

For me, the plot is pretty good, not scary, and occasionally funny. The points are deducted from the setting of the heroine Ye Yiyi (possibly). I also dislike the similar setting of Yu Nian'an in "The End of Ten Days" (although she is just a spiritual anchor). The emotional drama that exists in the memory of the male protagonist has no foreshadowing, and the male protagonist's deep love for the female protagonist will make people feel inexplicable and difficult to accept. Then Ye Niao Niao (the heroine's younger sister) and the male protagonist have been together again, and the seemingly non-existent ambiguity makes people feel uncomfortable. In comparison, I prefer the real Ye Niao Niao to the Ye Yiyi who only exists in the heart of the male protagonist. The parallel world plus conjoined twins is not enough to explain the settings where Ye Yiyi and Ye Niao Niao have almost identical personalities and preferences. If there is a parallel world, why are the male protagonists in the two worlds so different? (It is also possible that the settings will be added later)

Okay, okay, it smells like Yu Nian'an, but I still hope it's a real person, after all, it's too fake. The author's writing is good, and the language rendering and reversal of the horror plot are good, but the description of the environment can be strengthened. The logic is very clear. As long as you keep updating the author, I will follow you. Although there are suggestions, I still hope you can stick to your own style and novel outline. Come on

Surprise, I feel it is very well written. The section about Lin going to Ye Niaoniao's house and the section about Ye Niaoniao's house all show the same parts of Ye Niaoniao and Ye Yiyi, which is very suitable for my taste. The ghost dreams are also quite attractive, and the Mayan prophecy combined with reality also makes people feel more immersed. Personally, I feel that if the quality is maintained like this, it will be a 9.5. If the world view is bigger later, 9.5 Will be no problem. The author will also be very interactive with book friends. Come on, don't stop updating.

It's very interesting, the story is novel and attractive [Like] [Admiration] The first dream was very scary, but after that I felt nothing at all [laughing awkwardly]

I feel that this book is similar to the series "The House", but it also has the flavor of "Before Falling into Eternal Night". Although it does not give me the surprise and unexpected conclusion of "The House", it is undeniable that the author's writing is a bit high, the plots are interlocking, and the results are confusing and addictive to read.

It's very well written, come on, the author [Like] [Like] [Like] The comment section has been talking about the plot and characters of Alien Beasts and Tokauri, but I think this book is unique in terms of the creations in the author's mind, come on ⛽

It's really so good. I've read The House three times. This book is my favorite out of The House and it's the one that suits my taste the most. It's really exciting and I like it. Please, author, please update it quickly. It's really not enough. I'm your loyal fan. The first thing I do when I come back from school every day is to open the novel and listen to your novel. It's really good.

I like this type of horror novel that is not brainless, intelligent and atmospheric. It's very exciting. It's so fun to watch. Please keep updating the author.