I Became the Villainess in a Danmei Novel

I really like the cold-hearted and sober female protagonist, I hope there won't be a male protagonist

This book is very interesting. Although the book is too new and only has a few chapters, I will continue to follow it because it is really to my liking. I hope that I will write better and better in the future. Of course, the heroine is also very interesting [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's super beautiful. It's different from that strategy and that one. It feels like they're pulling each other. I feel like the heroine herself has that kind of white moonlight feeling. It's different from the one that looks very strong but is actually delicate and delicate. The heroine looks sweet and actually feels very tough and attractive. Is she worthy of being a heroine? This is the feeling I got here, I won't know later.

The story frame and many plots are very interesting, but the connection between chapters is not enough. I was confused when I read one chapter and thought it was okay, but after reading it, I didn't know what I was watching. Although the story can be roughly told, the plots are not connected enough. The writing is okay, but the psychology and motivations of the male protagonists are not obvious at present. What is the starting point and end point of what they do? Why? Geng Xiang's writing style is just a bit lacking in storytelling ability.

I look forward to the heroine returning home soon and the male protagonists chasing their wives at the crematorium.

It's super, super pretty. I hope the heroine can have a harem or be a solo beauty.

Come on, you can omit some complicated descriptions. You can omit the environment and other things that have nothing to do with the protagonist. And try not to use the symbol "". Sometimes people can't tell which sentence is the language. The character of the heroine can be more prominent. It's really good-looking [Blow kiss]

The heroine is so handsome. I really like Pei. Can you take him in? [I'm about to cry]

It looks good. It would be nice if the author could write more concisely. I found a small amount of plot in a large number of words.

It's quite nice and interesting, but the article feels choppy. The feeling that everyone is the Riddler.