Dating Show: My Yandere Exes' Pursuit Turns into a Hellish Gauntlet

It was great. I really enjoyed seeing Lin Xi and Daidai, but I started to dislike Chi Xia a bit 🤦. However, as the story progressed, my opinion of her changed. But I immediately disliked An Ran when she appeared. Her possessiveness was too strong (I guess she's a yandere?). She created a chaotic atmosphere from the moment she appeared, and I just couldn't bring myself to like her 🤦.

The writing is quite good. Having read novels for so long, I'd say the author's writing style is average; it's not overly flashy and expresses what needs to be expressed, with its own unique characteristics. However, the character "Lu" could have been completely unnecessary. Readers are drawn to the story framework and plot, so adding more boastful and face-slapping scenes is unnecessary.

Finished reading! It was quite light and sweet, although the ending felt a bit rushed; it's a shame it could have had more. I didn't get enough, haha. No major flaws, totally fine! Giving the author a huge thumbs up!

It's going well; the character relationships are clear, the plot outline is complete, and the main storyline and subplots are slowly unfolding. I hope there will be more independent stories for the female protagonists, and that their character development will be further improved. Keep up the good work and write faster!

It's well-written, clearly portraying the yandere (obsessive and possessive) trait. Unlike other romance novels where the female lead pretends not to know her ex-girlfriend, this one doesn't. Although it simply states that the male and female leads know each other, the female lead's purpose is clear from the beginning, and there are no unpleasant elements like her having ambiguous relationships with other male supporting characters.

Since it's a lot, Li can actually accept it, right? 😏😏😏

Author, I hope the protagonist can get along well with the four people 🙂 Please don't have any big cuts, I'm afraid I won't be able to resist killing you. The updates are too slow, author! I have a novel on my bookshelf that updates ten chapters every two days, while you're updating only a dozen chapters every two weeks!

So far, it's alright. There's a slight quirk, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience. The quirk is that the protagonist wants to stay away from them but can't help helping them, though it doesn't feel forced. Firstly, it's necessary to advance the plot, and secondly, the protagonist's previous boyfriend's relationship was contractual—essentially a superior-subordinate relationship—so his experiences at that time were essentially about the hardships of making money.

The plot isn't melodramatic, the main character isn't pretentious, the author's writing is excellent, and the emotional transitions are smooth and natural. If this continues, it will definitely be a great book.

As it stands, I personally quite like it. I think the book's rating was lowered by some external factors; if the author had enriched the background and atmosphere, I think it would have been even better! Finally, I hope to see the ending. Thank you so much!