Pokemon: The Tsundere Lorelei Confessed to Me!

There was too little emotional interaction with Pokémon, and it gave people an inexplicable feeling when they saw the Mega Evolution. The emotional depiction of Gyarados and the protagonist was lacking. Overall, it was pretty good, but I wish there could be more descriptions of bonds with Pokémon.

It's good, but Chapter 22 is a bit overwhelming. Firstly, the emotional line doesn't feel very good. Secondly, I feel that the author wants to write about dark and realistic Pokémon, but some parts of the content are a bit unrealistic and pretend to be cool. I have low poison resistance and can't resist it, but ignoring these parts, the content of the researcher is a highlight. The protagonist is not a brainless three-family, which is okay. It is a good five-star support.

@Shi I give you 5 stars and hope you can take a look. I'll rate it after reading Chapter 95. It's good, but I really don't want to give it 5 stars. Author, give me a suggestion I started reading it today, and it has been on my bookshelf before. Since the beginning, the protagonist, a person with a harmonious family, has become like this. . Emmm bad? Or is it so arrogant? According to common sense, why would a child from a harmonious family be so malicious to the child? Gym? You are the owner of the gym. If you let a child who is not strong enough to fight on your behalf, is it because you are injured? Since you have the strength, why don't we just rely on our strength to win the badge? Why do you do so many little tricks? Why do you think there is a gym inspector job in the plot? Brother, Chapter 95, kid, do you have such great malice? Despicable and aggressive? It was fine and acceptable up front, but why do you act like this when you meet a child? Isn't it okay to get a badge based on strength? You have to do such villainous behavior, I know you want to propose the evolution of the duckbill, but the problem is, you can give it directly or trade it. After all, there are many manifestations in anime and manga. But you. . . . Tsk, to be honest, I feel bad Don't you think there's not much reading to do now? What do you think is the problem with your scoring? Character, behavior You can be passionate or naive. These are all things that young people should or directly encourage. However, being aboveboard is still the tone of the Pokémon anime background. Here's to wishing you: Don't worry about the geometry of the reefs ahead, just pick up the keyboard and charge! Words are your sharp sword, inspiration is your cannon fire. Every time you hit the keyboard, you open up territory on the story battlefield. Don't be afraid, Kavin, the masterpieces of dystocia are even more amazing. Keep writing and your story will shine! [Quietly (I still think the protagonist's character is strange. He has the same character in several chapters. Unifying his character is the basis for writing a flesh-and-blood character)] @Shi

It feels like the evolution of Gyarados doesn't appear much anymore, and Monkey feels like it's become the starting Pokémon. Maybe it's because Gyarados is too big to be used in daily plots? I hope there will be more Gyarados shots in the future.

It looks good, and the idea is good, but you have discovered the new evolution and the evolution of the abandoned monkey. As a researcher, you should publish a paper and strive to become a doctor, to bring glory to Damu, and then use resources rationally to cultivate elves.

The setting without qualifications is more in line with the setting of the Pokémon anime. Now Tomato has all qualifications. This book is eye-catching, and the timeline is advanced. It is also different from the original work, so it will not make people feel bored.

The Pokémon writing written by the new author is pretty good. At least the updates are diligent. However, there are still some minor flaws. I have read Chapter 148 now. Now I think the relationship with Kona can be relaxed a little. It's time to start the official journey. The pace is too slow, which is not good.

I like novels with a single heroine. If you write a novel with a single heroine, I will give it five stars. (By the way, I would like to ask the author, have you considered how many words to write? If you have any, can you tell me? If you can, please tell me. Is it best to exceed 2 million words?)

I feel pretty good. I looked at the main character's elf (I didn't see the back) and it should be Gyarados, the Abandoned World Monkey, Fire God Moth, Gardevoir. I was thinking about why Fengyuan, the heroine of Conadan, wanted Gardevoir (no discrimination, it's just because my wife has read too many animal stories), so I accelerated my energy. Momentum Turkey, Leftover Riptide Swampert, Life Gem's Adaptable Lobster, Scale Shooting Floating Dragonfly, etc., Many Fengyuan Pokémon have strength and heat, Gardevoir, Xianyi Party in Tomato, give us people a way to survive, the children are going to starve to death in the Pokémon Zone😭

It's good to read. I have read a lot of Pokémon books, and I like Baicai Sister the most. Now that I have read a book with a heroine, I feel great. It is worth reading. I just hope that the author will update it quickly, and the requirements are not high. Just ten or twenty chapters a day will be enough. If possible, it would be wonderful to add Baicai Sister. If not, don't let Baicai Sister have an ambiguous plot with the protagonist or arrange CP for Baicai Sister. It would be really uncomfortable.