Pokemon: The Tsundere Lorelei Confessed to Me!

There wasn't enough interaction between the player and the Pokémon; the Mega Evolution felt somewhat out of place. The emotional connection between Gyarados and the protagonist was practically nonexistent. Overall, it was decent, but I hope there will be more development of the bond between the player and the Pokémon.

It's pretty good, but I started to struggle after chapter 22. First, the romance wasn't very engaging. Second, while the author seemed to be aiming for a dark and realistic Pokémon story, some parts felt unrealistic and like a wish-fulfillment fantasy. I have low tolerance for such stories, so I found it a bit too much. However, ignoring these issues, the research aspect is a major highlight, and the protagonist doesn't have a mindless starter Pokémon setup, which is quite good. Five stars!

@CloudFairy I'm giving it 5 stars, I hope you'll take a look. I'm writing this review after reading all 95 chapters. It's good, but I really don't want to give it 5 stars. Author, I have a suggestion. I started reading it today; it'd been sitting on my bookshelf for a while. From the beginning, the protagonist came from a harmonious family. When did he become so... Emmm... Awful?

It feels like Gyarados hasn't made many appearances since its evolution, while Monkey seems to have become the starter Pokémon. Maybe Gyarados is too big for everyday storylines? Hopefully, they'll give Gyarados more screen time in the future!

It's visually appealing and has a good concept, but since you've discovered new evolutions and the Forsaken evolution, as a researcher you should publish a paper to try and advance to a PhD, bringing glory to Oak, and then make good use of resources to train Pokémon.

The lack of qualifications in this book aligns better with the Pokémon anime setting, whereas all of Tomato's works now have qualifications. This book is refreshing, and its earlier timeline and departure from the original story prevent it from becoming boring.

This is pretty good for a new Pokémon author; at least the updates are fairly frequent. However, there are still some minor flaws. I've read up to chapter 148 so far, and I think the romance with Lorelei can take a break now; the official journey needs to begin. The pacing is too slow, which isn't good. 🍉 The author's writing is decent. 😆 I'll give it five stars to show my support. Also, please hurry up and write more! 😘

I love novels with a single female lead. Just because this is a novel with a single female lead, I'm giving it five stars 💕 (By the way, I'd like to ask the author if you've considered how many words you want to write. If so, could you please tell me? It would be best if it exceeded 2 million words, okay?)

I think it's pretty good. I looked at the main character's Pokémon (I haven't read the later parts), and they seem to be Gyarados, Forsaken, Volcarona, and Gardevoir. I was wondering why Lorelei, a single female protagonist, would need Gardevoir in Hoenn (no offense intended, just from reading too many fanfiction about female characters).

It's great! I've read a lot of Pokémon books, and my favorite is Cabbage. Now that I've seen a book with a female protagonist, it feels amazing and worth reading. I just hope the author updates faster. I don't ask for much, just ten or twenty chapters a day would be fine. If possible, adding Cabbage would be wonderful. If not, please don't let Cabbage have any ambiguous scenes with the protagonist or arrange a romantic pairing for Cabbage, that would be really frustrating.