Becoming a Witch: Miss Qiandao's Second Personality
变身魔女，千岛小姐的第二人格
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The story setting and writing style are decent, but the language is overly ornate, making it feel a bit strained. It might have been popular a few years ago, but in today's fast-paced life, it's a flaw. And frankly, it's not good enough to make you feel it's all worthwhile; it's roughly an 80-point read, but you need to put in the effort. However, you can easily find 80-point reads elsewhere.
The setting is very appealing, and the writing is excellent. The only downside is that the plot moves slowly, making it a bit frustrating to keep up with the updates. It took 170,000 words to get to the sorting stage, so it will probably take quite a while to finish. However, this doesn't detract from the fact that it's a great work.
I don't read much of Tomato's content, so I don't know what the environment is like here. If I had a point of reference, I think I could make a more accurate evaluation. Therefore, I can only evaluate it based on the average level of another website. Undoubtedly, the author's writing skills are quite good, and they put a lot of effort into describing the girls' appearances.
It's a great read, feel free to read it 😏 [OK] I read it twice before I grew up, and here's my summary: The writing is very good, ranking quite high among Tomato's current works, but it seems a bit "unbalanced." Most of the content focuses on descriptions of appearance, environment, and actions.
Among Tomato's many magical girl stories, this book's dual-soul concept is refreshing. The transmigrator doesn't completely replace the protagonist, but rather acts as an alternate personality who doesn't interfere in her daily life, giving it a twin-like feel 😘. Unlike other magical girls who are always fighting or on their way to fight, this book doesn't have any tragic, dark, or cruel themes.
The premise is strange: magical girls' battles become stage plays, with better performances resulting in greater power. The magical girls are more like actors, and the witches aren't traditional villains; they're part of a different group, characters who suddenly appear in the play and influence its predetermined ending.
I believe the author's preference for figurative art and the integration of operatic elements perfectly create the work's unique characteristics. The aria-like inner monologues, the duet-like dialogue structure, and the stage-lighting-like environmental descriptions together constitute a unique narrative grammar.
Honestly, whether it's showcasing technical skill or building a world-building framework, the author's writing prowess is undeniable. (Comparable to DS, not a crossover.) The entire world-building is presented with exceptionally distinctive features in the author's less than 200,000-word introduction, making it highly recognizable compared to other online novels. (Not a comparison, just a fact.)
It has a self-indulgent feel to it, the kind of slice-of-life story that's a bit overly ornate. Those who click with it will probably enjoy it, but those who don't will likely find it unreadable. It's a new book, so I'm giving it 5 stars. Additional note: After reading the first two chapters, I suggest skipping around to get a quick overview of the character relationships.
A magical girl in a revelatory style, depicted with exquisite detail, is good news for those who enjoy imagining anime series in their minds. However, the trade-off is a severely limited amount of textual information. A plot that could be summarized in 10,000 words in a normal novel would take 30,000 words in this book. You underestimated it; it's probably around 50,000 words. It's caught up.