There Are Too Many Grimdark Magical Girls!

The protagonist works hard little by little to correct the beautiful world view of magical girls. This is what I want to see. His combat power is not compromised online, he beats up the mascots and villains of Hei Can Shen, he is a wife (?) And he is a piece of wood at the same time, I love him so much. The only problem is that I think organizing the factions is too complicated. Sometimes there is a feeling of "why are they fighting?" And it is not clear who is good, who is bad, and who is being fooled. I don't know what the motive for hostility is other than a cult, maybe there are too many Riddlers.

Yes, but the aspect of the magical girl cultivator is not what I want to see, and there is a feeling that I want to expand the world view, but I don't. Generally The kind of trainer I want is the kind who can truly teach magical girls to fight and change the inherent path of becoming a magical girl, thereby changing the existing system of magical girls and allowing more beautiful girls full of beautiful spirit, love and justice to join magical girls. It is the kind of existence that is similar to a guide, a mother, and a godfather. And because the crystals in the bodies of those magical girls that I cultivated are all given by myself, when they fight against the whole world at the end, and when they fight the final BOSS, they directly combine the power of all the magical girls that they cultivated into one, and with the beautiful, firm and hopeful beliefs of all magical girls, they will blow up the whole world!! Magical girls are characters who convey love and justice, and are full of hope and vitality!

How should I put it, although the background of this world is relatively dark and dark, the protagonist is still full of positive energy. So far, it seems that none of the protagonist's friends have ever been stabbed. After all, his profile says he is happy. Of course, if he is a friend of the main character behind him, then I can't tell.

The author who plays Border Bus usually writes well because there is an example of Xiao Jin. Drawing lessons from his games, it is a very good setting, but the overall story and development will be quite different. As long as there are ideas, it is better than many Tomato books. I think the biggest problem with this book is the problem of expression. The expressions in some places cannot be quickly understood or are too general. Is this a difference in the language expression style or the way of understanding? I think we can compare the writing of the deepseekv3.2 Model to see the difference.

It's okay, overall it's pretty good, but the plot is a bit slow. Although I know that the plot is advancing, I feel a sense of anxiety when I see the big meal coming but I can't eat it in front of my eyes, and I have to speed up.

Well, how to evaluate it? 🤔🤔 The writing is okay, but what's even better than the writing is the author's unique worldview. After all, this is the first time I've seen this setting where a magical girl will be forgotten after death. The villains are also quite strong. Although some of them can be borrowed, it feels like there are some more powerful bosses hiding. Regarding the plot, sometimes you can see various jokes, which is a plus for me. After all, for me, if this world view of black bodies is lost blindly, it will make me feel very useless later. Obviously, this book has no such effect. And if you follow it seriously, this book will be even more delicious.

I don't know how to explain it. First of all, this book is a very good book in my opinion. Secondly, God is so happy. I don't feel the joy yet. But I was stabbed quite hard, but the battle was extremely exciting. The protagonist has a little hidden yandere attribute (or gravity), and the people around him are also a little heavy (ﾉ∇︎ ), the fighting power is strong. Oh, of course the villain is also strong. Damn it, I feel so good in every battle. Okay, that's all 💕

It's a very interesting book, why didn't I give it five stars? . . Because I think the existence of the branch line of the Miracle Continent created by the protagonist is really low. Moreover, the main line of this book has been steadily advancing. Such a branch line that is biased towards daily fun seems out of place. If there are any changes in this line later, I will add stars.

The world of the magical girl is dark and dark (the author really likes to use settings and memes such as Prison Bus and Sea Tiger). The protagonist wants to make corrections, but the protagonist only has numerical values ​​​​from time to time. Although the results are considered good, right? So far, I think it's pretty good.

After spending an afternoon playing, this idea is great. There is also a kingly character. He has his own kindness and does not show mercy to the enemy. He works hard for his own heart and the description is very three-dimensional.