The Holy Lord in the World of One-Punch Man

How should I put it? Personally, I think it is a relatively good one-punch fan novel. It retains the writing style of a group portrait novel, and there is also a part of the protagonist's plot, but the protagonist sees the girl unable to walk. According to this, it is a harem novel.

This book is normally a three-star level. I personally added one star to express my encouragement. First of all, you can see the improvement of the author's writing. The main shortcoming of this book is the pacing problem. The author always writes the original content in too detail. However, 30% of the content of this book is the complete original plot (only in the early and middle stages, and less in the later period after the protagonist stops eating beef), and it is basically the same as reading fan fiction. I understand the plot of the original work to a certain extent, and it can be seen that the author wants to give the protagonist a developmental period of mentality in the early stage. As for why the Devil Fruit of One Punch Man appears in the world of One Punch Man, I am waiting to fill it in later. As for the newly added S-class heroes and the unlicensed captain, I personally think it is good. After all, fan fiction must be innovative (I hope that the unlicensed captain will be given a Kamen Rider No. 1 Belt later)

Come on, author! It must be updated to the end, no eunuchs, no unfinished work!

It's a very good book. The author has his own ideas and has a good grasp of the originality and the original work. Why doesn't anyone read it?

Not bad, but I think Mosquito Girl would be good as the heroine [laughing evilly]

I hope the author will slow down a bit, update hundreds more chapters, and then put all the beautiful characters in the book into the protagonist's harem. The plot will definitely be exciting! I hope that the update pace will be slowed down a lot, and then there will be hundreds of more chapters, so that the protagonist can include all the beautiful characters in the book into the harem, so that reading the novel will be more enjoyable! !

Come on, don't be eunuchs. Can the author not give up on mosquito girls? [Crying] At least two of them [laughing evilly]

I hope not to be a eunuch

This is the book I'm looking for. It would be perfect if I could take Saitama to the Dragon Ball world when I reach the gods.

There are no surprises, and the plot is okay